Reviews For Harry Potter and the Alchemist’s Apprentice
Reviewer: carolyn jinn Signed Date: 2016.02.28 - 06:15PM Title: Chapter 10 Draco Returns
Reviewer: LeprechaunJV Signed Date: 2016.02.21 - 09:42PM Title: Chapter 10 Draco Returns
Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2016.02.21 - 10:09AM Title: Chapter 10 Draco Returns
Great depiction of Ginny taking control of the situation when Draco arrived. I am somewhat concerned about the complete sensory deprivation that Flamel is planning for Harry. It could all go so terribly wrong. Also, when his sensory awareness returns, he could find it completely overwhelming and distracting, being unable to filter or process all of what his strengthened senses are experiencing. Hoping you will update again soon.
Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2016.02.21 - 09:45AM Title: Chapter 9: Alchemist Revealed
Love the way your writing is progressing and improving over time. This story is one of only a few I have read that include Nicolas Flamel as a mentor for Harry. I am eager to see how you handle his training. Harry and Ginny are developing quite a lovely bond between them. I hope you show some of what is happening to the others while Harry is gone.
Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2016.02.21 - 09:02AM Title: Chapter 8: The Love of his Life
Great chapter. I do wonder what her parents will say when they are told that Ginny, an underage girl, plans to go with Harry, Ron, and Hermione on a secret mission assigned by Dumbledore. Looking forward to reading your next chapter.
Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2016.02.21 - 08:50AM Title: Chapter 7: The Burrow
Well that was an interesting reaction from the Weasley family. I am rather impressed that Harry told the truth and was for once honest about his feelings. The errors in spelling and grammar are somewhat distracting, but I am enjoying this story.
Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2016.02.21 - 08:35AM Title: Chapter 6: The Trinity
Pleased to see some sort of moment between Harry and Petunia. It would have been odd had he simply disappeared. Looking forward to seeing Harry back at the Burrow, hopefully with enough sense to talk to Ginny.
Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2016.02.21 - 07:25AM Title: Chapter 5: Thoughts and Feelings
Interesting to read Draco and Ginny's accounts of the first few weeks after Dumbledore's death. I can't really imagine Voldemort attacking and killing Narcissa though. A crucio, yes, but what he did seems somewhat out of character for him. I am enjoying reading this story; however, I would recommend that you have someone proof it for errors before posting.
Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2016.02.20 - 07:40PM Title: Chapter 4: Ancient magic
I like the use of the four elemental spirits and the idea of Harry having control over them, but I am a bit confused by the color choices representing each of the elementals.
Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2016.02.20 - 07:23PM Title: Chapter 3: Occlumency and Legilimency
Definitely a unique twist in this story. I am eager to learn more about the book and the magical orb.
Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2016.02.20 - 07:14PM Title: Chapter 2: The Unexpected Reunion
Enjoyed the dream sequence. I always thought it was foolish of Harry to end his relationship with Ginny. Too many knew about their relationship and it is suspect to think that she would suddenly be safer if they broke up.
Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2016.02.20 - 07:03PM Title: Chapter One: The Arrival
Very interesting start. I am curious to see what will happen next.
Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2016.02.20 - 06:35PM Title: Chapter 10 Draco Returns
I had to go back and read the whole thing from the beginning. Good plot, but I hope you can update a bit faster.
Reviewer: I Love Ginerva Signed Date: 2013.02.19 - 04:53AM Title: Chapter 9: Alchemist Revealed
Reviewer: foxfire23 Signed Date: 2011.01.01 - 01:08AM Title: Chapter 9: Alchemist Revealed
Wonderful story, wonderful chapter,
Reviewer: foxfire23 Signed Date: 2010.12.04 - 02:11PM Title: Chapter 6: The Trinity
aside from missing letters and spelling errors, this is a great story.
Reviewer: HGRHfan35 Signed Date: 2010.11.29 - 12:28PM Title: Chapter 9: Alchemist Revealed
Aaaawh. Young love and Drama.....my favourite mix! :)
Reviewer: dshadel Signed Date: 2010.11.26 - 09:51PM Title: Chapter 9: Alchemist Revealed
Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2010.11.26 - 02:00PM Title: Chapter 9: Alchemist Revealed
Well, that explains the title of the story. I await to see where it goes from here.
Reviewer: hgromance Signed Date: 2010.11.26 - 10:47AM Title: Chapter 9: Alchemist Revealed
hope he's not gone long. I was looking forward to the Horcrux hunt with the four of them. I was hoping Ginny would finally get to be with Harry.