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Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2016.02.21 - 09:45AM Title: Chapter 9: Alchemist Revealed
Love the way your writing is progressing and improving over time. This story is one of only a few I have read that include Nicolas Flamel as a mentor for Harry. I am eager to see how you handle his training. Harry and Ginny are developing quite a lovely bond between them. I hope you show some of what is happening to the others while Harry is gone.
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing!! You're amazing. It has been awhile since I have written so it is taking me a while to get back into it. But as for my writing, age does help (I was a freshmen in college when i first started so you'd figure my english professors would help lol) But yes I will try and update as much as possible. Sorry for the long delay
Reviewer: I Love Ginerva Signed Date: 2013.02.19 - 04:53AM Title: Chapter 9: Alchemist Revealed
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Reviewer: foxfire23 Signed Date: 2011.01.01 - 01:08AM Title: Chapter 9: Alchemist Revealed
Wonderful story, wonderful chapter,
I love your twist on things,
Fox
Author's Response: thank you! its hard to come up with new ideas when so many other authors on this amazing site keep pumping out stories so originality becomes tested a bit
Author's Response: thank you! its hard to come up with new ideas when so many other authors on this amazing site keep pumping out stories so originality becomes tested a bit
Reviewer: HGRHfan35 Signed Date: 2010.11.29 - 12:28PM Title: Chapter 9: Alchemist Revealed
Aaaawh. Young love and Drama.....my favourite mix! :)
Author's Response: glad you like it....i dont know how to get too into the love story of the whole Harry and Ginny complex but I'm trying to touch up on it and make it as real as possible...I'm mostly focusing on the fact that Harry needs to get stronger (but not too strong or else it wouldn't be much fun). He seems a little weak too me considering he needs to go against the dark lord....ugh that Dumbeldore never really trained him and thats what upsets me
Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2010.11.26 - 02:00PM Title: Chapter 9: Alchemist Revealed
Well, that explains the title of the story. I await to see where it goes from here.
Author's Response: I'm sorry if its a fast read, I'm trying to make it longer and more in depth...the ideas in my head sound soo good but i feel like i just dont do the ideas any justice with my writing...but please keep reviewing, it helps knowing what my readers like and dislike
Reviewer: hgromance Signed Date: 2010.11.26 - 10:47AM Title: Chapter 9: Alchemist Revealed
hope he's not gone long. I was looking forward to the Horcrux hunt with the four of them. I was hoping Ginny would finally get to be with Harry.
Reviewer: LeprechaunJV Signed Date: 2010.11.26 - 09:40AM Title: Chapter 9: Alchemist Revealed
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Reviewer: carolyn jinn Signed Date: 2010.11.26 - 02:53AM Title: Chapter 9: Alchemist Revealed
Great chapter. I am glad that Harry has got someone else to help him with Dumbledore gone.
Keep up the good work as I look forward to reading the next chapter. :)
Author's Response: thanks I appreciate the review and please sending more, i like hearing the feedback
