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Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2016.01.10 - 08:07AM Title: Birthday

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Great birthday party.



Reviewer: Blissful Oblivion Signed Date: 2012.04.27 - 01:42AM Title: Birthday

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Awesome chapter! Harry certainly had a very happy birthday. I loved it that Harry got another owl and that everyone gave Harry a new broomstick. It was quite refreshing to read about such a carefree and happy Harry. I was smiling all throughout this chapter. I also enjoyed the Cho-bashing, of course.



Reviewer: chelsealeann Signed Date: 2010.07.20 - 01:30AM Title: Birthday

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the moment with the trio was PRECIOUS!!! i love how you made them so adult and mature. harry and ron being separated will definitely take some getting used to!

Author's Response: I think it takes them a lot of getting used to as well!



Reviewer: DukeBrymin Signed Date: 2010.02.01 - 02:44PM Title: Birthday

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Very fun chapter--I loved seeing Ron try to be sneaky. And Harry getting a new snowy white owl, that's just perfect.
Cho didn't learn very fast, did she? Trying to horn in on Harry while Ginny's around--at least she didn't get hexed.
Thanks!



Reviewer: pottermania Signed Date: 2010.01.23 - 05:36PM Title: Birthday

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Lots of fluff and a fabulous birthday We all get great pleasure from Harry's pleasure..it's infectious:-)



Reviewer: Rowlingisgreat Signed Date: 2009.06.29 - 11:55AM Title: Birthday

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I find Harry out of character in your story. However, despite that, it is a very good story.

Author's Response: Most people find him in character. But then I can't please anyone at the moment.



Reviewer: kash2110 Signed Date: 2008.10.18 - 03:18PM Title: Birthday

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The talk between the Trio was perfect, Ron really is greowing up, looks like Hermione is starting to be a influence on him. Hopefully he will influence her as well, in the repsect of being able to relax and enjoy herself.

I really love how you are going about this story. You've not rushed it in anyway, I loved reading about the funeral (not in a morbid way) because it gave all of US a chance to grieve and say goodbye. I loved the medal ceremony because it gave us all a chace to cheer atr all the heroes.

I can understand that JK didn't have the time to fill in the gaps between the last chapter & the Epilogue but for many fans we did feel a bit....cheated! Sorry if that souds ungreatful but it's how I feel sometimes.

However it's though stories like this that we can express our emotions as the Harry Potter world has been a big part of it for the last 10 odd years. So for that I owe you a big THANK YOU!!!

Author's Response: Well ... you're welcome :)



Reviewer: LadyChi Signed Date: 2008.09.22 - 07:00AM Title: Birthday

OMG. So. Much. Freaking. Love. For Serious, Kezza. You melted my little shipper heart into a puddle of shipper goo. Now I'm going to have to mop that up with a Shipper Mop! You see what you've done to me?

I've got lots of parts that I loved and I kept meaning to copy and paste them down here so that I could go over them, but I just didn't do it because I wanted to keep reading to see what was going to happen next. I just loved all of the moments with Harry on the broom -- I thought that was some of the best writing I've seen out of you. And Ron, wanting Harry to protect "his girls"? I about died of the cute.

But anyway! Wonderful job and I'm moving on to the next chapter.

Author's Response: *Hands you a Shipper Mop* Soppy aren't I?



Reviewer: hawkeye2008 Signed Date: 2008.09.11 - 10:20PM Title: Birthday

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Reviewer: gryff_princess Signed Date: 2008.08.14 - 03:15AM Title: Birthday

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Reviewer: Artistand Signed Date: 2008.08.05 - 02:00AM Title: Birthday

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Reviewer: Arnel Signed Date: 2008.07.17 - 09:34AM Title: Birthday

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Kezza,

I'm only reviewing four chapters here, because there's so much I want to say about Chapter 15.

First, I think you did a marvelous and very sensitive job conducting Fred's funeral. I love how George sparked everyone into wearing what they "really" were comfortable in; if they'd all stayed in dress robes the Weasleys, Harry and Hermione would have acted much differently. I loved Aunt Muriel! She was just the witch to actually spark off the "festivities" and I howled over her fawning over Harry. She's priceless! Opinionated, but priceless... and every family needs someone like her!

Thank goodness Harry conceded to the Order of Merlin Ceremony! His musings during the actual event and the fact that he was caught not paying attention just made me smile. It was certainly a great surprise that all the DA got OoM medals. It's a very positive thing for Minister Shacklebolt to agree to, because it shows the Wizarding world exactly what the younger generation is capable of and that they're willing to contribute to the good of Wizarding society. Too bad that the Death Eaters chose that particular day to ransack The Burrow, thus ruining what was turning out to be a rather nice day for everyone.

I think you touched on some very sensitive life topics when you wrote the christening chapter. I've always wondered whether wizards and witches actually had religious beliefs since it wasn't a topic covered in canon. You handled that very nicely and Harry's personal vows to Teddy were really touching. I can just see the look on Harry's face when he didn't get a chance to apologize to Ginny for disagreeing with her and know from personal experience how distracting the thoughts are that result from that missed opportunity. I'm glad the two of them had the opportunity to kiss and make up when Harry finally got home.

I loved Harry's birthday day. A new owl... a new broom... no wonder Ron was acting like a five-year-old! The tension at the beginning of the day when Harry's presents didn't arrive on time just made me grin. I feel sorry for poor Errol and found myself giggling when Percy told everyone that Hermes was somewhat smitten with Liberty. It was fun, too, to read about how much Harry enjoyed getting to fly on his own broom again; the fact that he was allowed some care-free time to ruffle Hermione's pages and not get yelled at for disturbing other peoples' work when they were setting up for his party was an emotional outlet Harry hasn't had much of. It's nice that, even at eighteen, he could be a kid for just that much longer. The only thing I didn't like about the party was Cho. Her preditory behavior was completely inappropriate and defintely put a damper on Harry's festive feelings. Good thing Ginny came to his rescue! Finally, I'm glad Harry was able to enjoy the fireworks George worked so hard on.

Once again, your story gets two thumbs up. ~Arnel

P.S. I'm still concerned that Harry is still suffering from PTSD and that no one has really done more for him other than what they are already doing. I worry that when he goes back to Hogwarts he's going to spend a mighty long time in the common room during the wee hours of the mornings. He needs help!



Author's Response: Oh, well there's still so much more to go before they go back to Hogwarts *Kezza whistles innocently* I must say you are a very concientious and lovely reviewer. You get two thumbs up in return I love reading what you think!



Reviewer: charlz1983 Signed Date: 2008.03.04 - 05:09PM Title: Birthday

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its nice to see a happy birthday!!!!

Author's Response: *sigh* Isn't iut though ... Happy Birthday Harry!



Reviewer: Athena07 Signed Date: 2008.02.03 - 08:45PM Title: Birthday

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HAPPY BIRTHDAY HARRY!



Reviewer: tenorspaz Signed Date: 2007.10.01 - 04:03PM Title: Birthday

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Another winning chapter! Loved the playful banter between Harry and his friends. The poor boy didn't get a chance to have to have silly fun like that before. So glad you're letting him do it now.
George's happy go lucky one moment and tearful rage the next is spot on. His little melt down was heartbreaking.
Harry's birthday was great. Loved the fireworks at the end.
Great job!
~~Spazzy~~

Author's Response: Thanks!



Reviewer: amblewat Signed Date: 2007.09.19 - 12:08AM Title: Birthday

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You are writing the post traumatic stress very well. Good job with every thing. The emotions are not too strong at all they are very well balanced. On to the next chapter. :)

Author's Response: I have been trying real hard with the balance of emotions and so on, so thank you!



Reviewer: I Love Ginerva Signed Date: 2007.09.18 - 02:06AM Title: Birthday

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Reviewer: Rose1981 Signed Date: 2007.09.17 - 08:23PM Title: Birthday

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Another excellent chapter! I absolutely loved that Ginny finally got to out shine Cho. Also, it was wonderful to see a carefree Harry.

I hope that you update soon!

Author's Response: Chapter 15 is nearly done. :D But I like to have a bit written inadvance ad let things sit for a few days at least so I can re read and revise and Chapter 17 is being extremely un co-operative...ae Ron and Harry tired of playing with me?????? (They are being difficult)



Reviewer: witowsmp Signed Date: 2007.09.16 - 09:08AM Title: Birthday

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Good story.
I've never understood how Harry could possibly want to be an auror. I'd think he'd be sick of fighting dark wizards by now. And he's never even considered any other options.

Author's Response: Thanks! As for the Auror gig...according to JKR that s exactly what he does :D .



Reviewer: Russtopher Signed Date: 2007.09.15 - 07:47AM Title: Birthday

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oh for pete's sake, I love this story and all, but could we please see at least ONE chapter that doesn't leave me bawling at my laptop whilst reading? ;-) I mean, come on, I come back here daily to see if this story's been updated, and I'm growing a bit tired of my daughter asking me why my email is so sad :-)

(obviously that's all tounge in cheek, this story is brilliant as is this chapter. Glad to see George doing great and Harry learning to accept that things are going to be OK)

Author's Response: Oh be quiet :P . Pssssssssssst if *that* had you bawling then you might want to read the next chapter nowhere near your daughter...that was a HAPPY CHAPTER! Stop crying! Pull yerself together! Oh and thanks for reading and reviewing!




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