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Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2016.01.10 - 07:33PM Title: Fame

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More needed revelations from Ginny about life at Hogwarts.



Reviewer: Blissful Oblivion Signed Date: 2012.05.12 - 02:30AM Title: Fame

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Another great chapter, filled with angst and humour. I'm glad Ginny confessed everything that happened to her and now she and Harry can move on from the war and build a new life for themselves. Percy is being a real prat and this is exactly why he is my least favorite Weasley. Hope he improves in the next chapter, otherwise he's going to be hexed real badly by Ginny.



Reviewer: DukeBrymin Signed Date: 2010.02.12 - 05:47PM Title: Fame

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Such sorrow, such pain in such a strong girl. I'm so glad she was able to talk to Harry.
I really liked her saying, "Not you, never you, Harry". And that last exchange was just perfect.



Reviewer: pottermania Signed Date: 2010.01.30 - 09:31AM Title: Fame

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In DH the suffering of those at Hogwarts was inferred and rather glossed over. This chapter (and the mentions in earlier chapters) has really opened my eyes to just how seriously awful it was for those in attendance there.

Closing few lines just how serious their relationship is getting...bring it on!



Reviewer: marina4370 Signed Date: 2009.09.30 - 05:20AM Title: Fame

The best Post War story so far I ever read and I assure you I read a lot. Ginny breakdown is simply perfect the way you wrote it. I'd like to write more but my English is not too good so I thank you very much for writing and I keep reading this wonderful story until the end. Thank you

Author's Response: I'm so glad you enjoyed it :)



Reviewer: kash2110 Signed Date: 2008.10.19 - 03:23PM Title: Fame

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besides the Slytherins need a leader. If there’s a void there who knows what sort of twisted little antics those ferals will come up with. McGonagall knows exactly what she’s doing - Blimey Ron you've really got perseptive, Hermione certainly has been a good influence for you!!!

“Do you know why I used the Cruciatus Curse on Carrow?” asked Harry bitterly. “Because he insulted Professor McGonagall. Cruciatus is pretty severe for an insult wouldn’t you say?” -come on Harry, SPITTING in someone's face is a bit more than just insulting, I persoanlly cheered when he did what he did to Carrow!

“Not like this. Not because you want to forget. Not because you’d rather give me your body than talk. Not when there’s a chance we’ll regret it.” -
Oh I would never regret that it was you, but I would regret that I stole a moment when you were weak and vulnerable and willing to do anything. I would regret breaking your trust like that.”
Two brilliant lines that show just how mature Harry is and how really decent he is! (and you are as a writer!!!!!)


This is yet another thing about fanfics, we never really think about Ginny's year but is wouldn't have been a picnic, So thank you once again for adding YET another demension to this wonderful story!!

Author's Response: There's a few fics out there about that year at Hogwarts but many post-DH fics set after the final battle don't actually deal with it - you're right. Has to be dealt with I reckon. Dimension Alley, that me :D



Reviewer: gryff_princess Signed Date: 2008.08.14 - 03:29AM Title: Fame

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Reviewer: BaileyMac Signed Date: 2008.07.18 - 01:06AM Title: Fame

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I could not help crying for Ginny this chapter! And I have got to stop reading this story so late at night...I can't stop reading to go to sleep!

Author's Response: I know how the late night reading goes! I stayed up all night once! LOL



Reviewer: charlz1983 Signed Date: 2008.03.06 - 05:12AM Title: Fame

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that was a good chapter, ginny needed to get her demons out!

Author's Response: Thanks! I think she did too!



Reviewer: potter passion Signed Date: 2008.01.22 - 11:36AM Title: Fame

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omg pls update fast
i really like your story
but im a very bad reader and
i have stopped reveiwing any story i read
although i just read ur story
and i had to review
great story!!
keep it coming!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

A uthor's Response: It will be up soon, I got stuck on a revision my very astute beta picked up o a weak spot. Real Life also got in the way ... but soon :D



Reviewer: ProfessorBinns Signed Date: 2008.01.20 - 01:36AM Title: Fame

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I've just finished reading all of Rebuilding for the first time. I have to say, it's going to be hard to wait for the next installment.

My fluff-loving heart adores how loving Harry and Ginny are able to be for each other, and up to the second-to-last chapter that was enough. Now, I'm also dying to see what happens with the plot. You have allowed Harry to grow in believable ways. Ginny seemed a bit shallow, but now you've explained it, again in a totally convincing way. (Come to think of it, I've had seasons in my life when I lived in blissful denial too.) I can't wait to get a stronger sense of the depth of Ginny's character as she continues to confront her demons.

On another note, I'll say that I don't usually enjoy a lot of OC and "local flavor" in my fics, but through your writerly skill you've earned the right to do both. I enjoyed your descriptions of Oz and your integration of local mythology. Your OCs ring true. And of course with the "Wilkinses" JKR gave you the opening to do so.

I hope you keep writing, and I can't wait for more.


Author's Response: There shall not be long to wait! Trust me on that one ;)

I spent a glorious year of my life in denial ... coming back to reality was hard! I hope I can pull off this depth of Ginny's character *author searches deep for ability to do so*

OC are always a bit of a risk I think. Oz was a risk as well. It worked for some and for the most part - learned a lot from it though! I hope I continue to pull off OCs as I have a few more up my sleeve ... :) Thanks for reviewing! It's always good to hear what works! I'll try and give some more of what works ;)



Reviewer: LM7 Signed Date: 2008.01.19 - 07:31PM Title: Fame

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This has been the best post-DH I have read so far. Please don't stop writing because this story has all of the characters to perfection.

Author's Response: Why thank you :D No plans on stopping yet!



Reviewer: annep Signed Date: 2008.01.18 - 01:18PM Title: Fame

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I love how you portray the relationships among the Trio. Ron & Hermione’s “discussion” about Percy, Ginny, and Harry was funny and the arguments from each of them was true to their characters. The scene in the garden was so poignant. They understand each other so well and you do a great job of showing each one’s love for the other two.

The guilt about Unforgiveables suddenly overwhelming Harry, George’s grief last chapter—it’s so real how you present their lives post-Voldemort. No one recovers instantly from events such as have transpired over the last year and the horrors and anguish easily raise up their ugly heads as a word, smell, or event triggers the memories. A lot of stories have Harry come back, kiss Ginny, and all is sunshine again—yuck. Their emotional lives will be like roller coasters for a long time. Thanks for recognizing that and writing it so well.

“It’s an Auror medallion wallet,” he said. “Where did you get one of those Harry? They are highly regulated. Not something a person can go about liberating and using without authorisation. Not even you.”
This pompous little speech from Percy made me want to slap him! His protective brother stance about Ginny is understandable, but this was totally mean-spirited. I’m beginning to think that Percy’s problem is simply that he’s consumed with jealousy; that he’s jealous of Harry’s adoption into the family, of Harry’s fame, and that his brothers care for Harry more than him.

Molly ordering her sons around at her arrival from St Mungo’s was so funny. They’re all adults, but it’s hard to tell, the way she talked to them. Actually it sounded just like my mom with me and my siblings when we visit her (and we’re all in our 30s & 40s)!

I’m so glad that Ginny finally unloaded some of her burden. It’s understandable why she held it in—Harry was a complete wreck after the last battle and he needed some time to heal before he could reach out to her. Now she’s a wreck and Harry can return the favor of a listening ear and a shoulder to cry on. It will be difficult for her to return to Hogwarts, but at least she’ll have a good support system around her.

Rather hope that Harry gets to see Dudley before school starts. Definitely looking forward to the next chapter.

Okay, this review is getting rather long-winded; just wanted to say more than “Brava, maestra!”



Author's Response: It's been a joy working with Percy the overblown windbag. He got a bit spiteful there didn't he? tut tut tut ...

I find it entirely unrealistic that Harry kisses Ginny and wanders happily off into the sunset. (er, obviously ...) It's been fun exploring what might have happened. I' glad it is so well recieved and well Dudley ... yes er, Dudley lol we'll get there, I promise!

I apprecate any review that says more than "Brava maestra!" I heart these reviews that really tell me what it is people have loved. (or hated, but that not so much ... lol) So thank you, get long winded ay time you like!



Reviewer: bookworm19 Signed Date: 2008.01.17 - 03:19PM Title: Fame

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Please update soon! I can't wait for the next chapter. I LOVE this story! hope the next chapter is updated soon!

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Author's Response: It's with the beta. :)



Reviewer: Macsr71 Signed Date: 2008.01.16 - 03:42PM Title: Fame

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Well, very touching little scene there at the end, very nicely done with getting Ginny to finally open up and share, I fully understand her point about not doing so earlier because Harry had the greater need, now it is her turn I think, to let Harry heal her, a part which you write so full of feeling

just read the whole thing in one go and all I could think was I finally found someone who writes Harry & Ginny as well as St. Margaret, and that is a real treat.

well done

Author's Response: Thank you very much. I'm glad people can see why it took so long for her to open up. I also find it very ... satisfying to know that the way I write H/G is also well recieved. Thanks for reading and reviewing, I hope you continue to enjoy!



Reviewer: LeatherQueen Signed Date: 2008.01.14 - 11:53PM Title: Fame

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Another wonderful chapter. I'm glad that Harry finally got Ginny to talk about what happened last year, but I fear that this won't be the last of it, especially once she has to return to where everything happened. And Harry's last line... *grin* very nice indeed! Great update!

Author's Response: *Gasp* not the last of it? Why, whatever makes you think that? *grins* Thanks for reading and reviewing!



Reviewer: Lioness Signed Date: 2008.01.14 - 05:18PM Title: Fame

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wow i love this story!!! keep doing an amazing job and try and update soon.

Author's Response: Thank you! I am sure it will be up soon.



Reviewer: Chatmandu Signed Date: 2008.01.14 - 08:57AM Title: Fame

I was just catching up on my e-mail so...

I just love how believable your characterisations are, and please, please! please!! update! I'm begging you! :-)

Chuck

Author's Response: Thanks ... LOL :D Seriously it's literally with the beta as we speak. We'll see which brand of rubbish it is soon ... I may even fix it befoe I post t! ;)



Reviewer: BioHazard82 Signed Date: 2008.01.13 - 11:12PM Title: Fame

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Wow, this story is brilliant! I love how you handle Harry's character after the final battle. From other stories I have read they make it seem that after the battle, everything is all and good for him. But after losing so many people in the war, and going threw what he went threw you cant come out of that without a few scares(actual, and mental). Again, great job so far. Keep up the good work, and update soon and oftan!

Author's Response: WE know he's alright but what will it take to get there ... I guess that is what I want to explore. Chapter 25 is with the beta - be vevvy vevvy quwiet ... he's hunting plot inconsistencies and bad grammar ...



Reviewer: Rose1981 Signed Date: 2008.01.13 - 01:22AM Title: Fame

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Oh my goodness! That was simply wonderful. Well worth the wait.

Please update soon.

Author's Response: Just tweaking Chapter 25 now! I'm glad you enjoyed that chapter! thanks for reading and reviewing!




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