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Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2016.01.13 - 06:24PM Title: Future Fortune

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Harry really needs to spend some time completely focused on Ginny and trying to help her feel better.



Reviewer: Blissful Oblivion Signed Date: 2012.05.20 - 05:14AM Title: Future Fortune

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Amazing chapter. The scene at the start was quite beautiful and I loved how Ginny just waits for Harry to tell her everything, instead of nagging him constantly like Hermione. Ron and Bill should've told Harry about the chocolate as everyone knows just how how clueless Harry is sometimes. Why is Hagrid behaving so strangely? Does he know something about Ginny which is making her so angry at not just Harry but everyone?



Reviewer: DukeBrymin Signed Date: 2010.02.18 - 01:26PM Title: Future Fortune

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I hope Ginny can tell you what's bugging her soon--it's just killing me and Harry.



Reviewer: pottermania Signed Date: 2010.02.01 - 05:34PM Title: Future Fortune

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Poor Harry...and he has no idea what is wrong with Ginny!

Interesting turn of events....Lavender's uncle's reasons may be different than we thought!



Reviewer: kash2110 Signed Date: 2008.10.20 - 03:42PM Title: Future Fortune

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Seemed to her if we kept drinking the headache might go away - Or the PAIN, but it never does it just masks it but it's still always there!!!

Once again you bring back the character os the story isn't JUST about Harry, Hermione & the Weasleys. I like that about this story, makes even more REAL, if that makes any sense.

It's so easy to forget that so many people suffered but you remind us which is why I love this story!!

Author's Response: I'm glad you love it!



Reviewer: gryff_princess Signed Date: 2008.08.14 - 03:31AM Title: Future Fortune

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Reviewer: charlz1983 Signed Date: 2008.06.15 - 03:36PM Title: Future Fortune

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i got the french translated and it was funny!!!! good chapter, cam't wait to read the next! x

Author's Response: LOL Pity they are stading in the middle of the Minsitry ... Chapter will be a little while yet, I got involved in writing for the challenge! But it is coming!



Reviewer: annep Signed Date: 2008.06.06 - 05:42PM Title: Future Fortune

It’s really not surprising that Draco is good at Monopoly. That game requires lots of cunning and ambition, which are truly Slytherin traits. I loved the detail of Neville cheering on Draco for beating Dean—this little slice of life showed some of the healing process taking place.

It seems that much more is going on with Ginny than the monthly visitor. Could she be jealous of Harry, the attention he gets and the freedom to leave Hogwarts that he alone enjoys? Maybe she’s seeing how Harry and Hermione are moving into the adult world and she’s feeling young and left behind? Neville seems to be a bit understanding, so maybe something from last year is bothering her? (I hope the storm breaks soon—Harry sure can’t help if he has no idea what’s wrong.

The revelation of Moses Brown’s motivation for the werewolf legislation was so powerful. I’d thought that he was a well-meaning but foolish twit when actually his intentions were quite malicious. Poor Lavender, her uncle is as nice and cuddley as Harry’s uncle. Score one for the author, fooling us readers into not seeing the snake in the grass! Of course, this was all Lavender’s take on the situation; looking forward to the scene at the ministry next chapter. I guessing we’ll get to see why she was put into Gryffindor.

This whole chapter was so terrific. The scene in WWW with Ron and George was amazing. Ron truly has grown up; I couldn’t believe how well he handled George, although after hunting horcruxes, fighting a battle, and holding a splintered family together, how can you not grow up. And then the hilarious way you ended that heavy scene was just genius. I also loved the scene with Lavender and Pavarti, how the mood swung around several times, showing us so many sides of these characters. That’s what I love about your writing, it’s so rich in characterization and detail.



Author's Response: I missed responding to this review earlier, sorry! So basically I'll say I like how you like what I like ... :D and yes, Draco king of Monopoly - oh yeah!



Reviewer: cacata Signed Date: 2008.06.02 - 10:16PM Title: Future Fortune

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Does Hagrid gave a Lady friend in his cabin? Just wondering?

Author's Response: well now ... that would be telling, wouldn't it ... ;P



Reviewer: kaypgirl Signed Date: 2008.05.31 - 04:38AM Title: Future Fortune

Good chapter, but didn't Harry have a photo of his parents wedding in the album Hagrid gave him? Because Sirius was laughing in the picture, the best man. I'm not sure what book it was from, but I'm positive that Harry has a picture of his parents wedding.

Author's Response: What a glaring plot hole! *gulp* It's in PoA - chapter eleven. Erm I will need to go adjust it I think I do not think I can live with such an inconsistency! I'll give it some thought! Thank you very much for reading and reviewing!



Reviewer: melipy Signed Date: 2008.05.30 - 04:42PM Title: Future Fortune

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This was a great chapter. I love Teddy his soooo cute, and Harry is even cuter when he's minding Teddy. Wonder what's up with Ginny?
Hope we get a quicker update!
Please?


Author's Response: I'm trying! Hopefully it will be soon!



Reviewer: melindaleo Signed Date: 2008.05.30 - 08:18AM Title: Future Fortune

I enjoyed the confrontation between Ron and George very much. I liked Harry just standing there, not sure whether to stay or leave, and the dramatic tension was really high. Lavender is reminding me so much of Harry's situation with the moaning about the scars, the fear of being attacked and the uncle that hates her!

Author's Response: Harry and Lavender ... they're bonding ... uhuh :D . Do a few scraping bows to Jen2 for the Ron and George thing - she poked it to make it go! That is the plot bunny she fixed from Doom to teh Win. *glomps Jen2 the beta who rules all*



Reviewer: DebbieO Signed Date: 2008.05.30 - 07:55AM Title: Future Fortune

OK, that IS weird then. It is certain that the characters, aside from Harry who is clueless as usual, THINK it is PMS, which makes the readers THINK it is PMS. Now I'm thinking, PTSD or the Imperius Curse or possession that is only helped by chocolate...? Oh the possibilities...

Author's Response: Ron thinks it's PMS. He's not known for being sensitive about these things. George assumed Ron was right. Dean was being a pig. The other characters have been silent on the matter ... *evil grin* She is beig very co-operative mind you. I know *just* what her problem is. Poor Ginny ... oops ... I may have said to much ... *shifty eyes*



Reviewer: FredsGirl Signed Date: 2008.05.30 - 03:01AM Title: Future Fortune

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I loved this chapter. There was so much going on!

I loved the scene with Lavender and Parvati. Especially the way it changed, the range of emotion. It started off with Lav scared but then ended with the girls giggling after Harry. It seemed like that was what Lav needed. So for more than one reason it was good that Harry went to see her. He let her know what was going on and in return she told him Moses' motives for this werewolf nonsense. I can only imagine the pain Lavender feels about that. Here is someone in her family who hates and fears her and nobody's doing anything about it. Her parents let them live in the same house. And maybe once this whole ordeal is over with, she will be able to see that life can go on normally and she doesn't have to worry about werewolves anymore.

George. I love him dearly. And I feel bad that he feels he took advantage of Angelina. They both are suffering right now and George is right, the two of them are the only ones who know how each other feels. It makes sense for them to find each other. Now they just need to figure out what they're going to do about it.

And then Ginny. I highly doubt it's PMS (and for me, it's not necessarily chocolate candy, it's chocolate cake with chocolate frosting! Or, I do agree with Deb, that peanut M&M's also work...hehe). There is definitely something deeper going on there. I'm not quite sure what it is. Maybe she recognized that Harry was feeling bored and was put off by that. He was with her, why should he feel bored? Or maybe I'm completely wrong about that. There are probably tons of things that it could be. Hey, it could even just be sexual frustration...hehe.

I also loved the Ron and Lavender scene at the end. I love the way Ron has grown. He's even helping Lavender to feel better. Aw!!! hehe

Well, this may be the longest review I've ever left you. I hope it makes sense and shows just how much one can get out of this amazing story. I could definitely written more, but I figured that would be pushing it. :)
I'm sorry Ginny's not cooperating with you. I hope she complies soon, I'd love to find out what happens!

Jen

P.S. Thank you for that tiny Harry/Teddy scene (the cuddle!!!). You should just put one of those in every chapter...hehe

Author's Response: Of course it makes sense! It's a wonderful review! I think Lavender will be okay now :D . George ... well he's got a long way to go! Ginny ... ah the enigma ... and Ron - well he had to grow up sometime I suppose :P . Ginny is being co-operative so far, we'll see where we get with her and I can't guarantee every chapter but a little bit of Teddy as often as I can is definitely in the plans!



Reviewer: blackwritingquill Signed Date: 2008.05.30 - 02:38AM Title: Future Fortune

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Aww! Teddy's sooooooooo cute! I just want to eat him up! So, Gin's got her...punctuation mark? lol...Poor Harry, he's so lost. Great chapter, keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Teddy is v.cute indeed. I feel the need to point out that everyone thinks Ginny's having issues because of Aunt Flo. You all are assuming HEAPS! :P



Reviewer: Ima Quidditch Fan Signed Date: 2008.05.29 - 11:47PM Title: Future Fortune

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Reviewer: Ginny Guerra Signed Date: 2008.05.29 - 11:45PM Title: Future Fortune

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Wonder what's going on with Ginny.

Nice one! Update soon, please.

Author's Response: I do too ... oh wait, I know ... *looks smug* I'll get it to you as soon as I can. I cannot promise when that will be :(



Reviewer: DebbieO Signed Date: 2008.05.29 - 11:34PM Title: Future Fortune

Peanut M&Ms. They're the solution. Salty and sweet together. They chase off the Dementors (even when disguised as hormones). lol. Yes, PMS is OTT, but Ginny doesn't have license to be horrid without apology. We're still responsible for our behavior (says Debbie who scared boyfriends off with horrid PMS crying jags and learned the hard way that she needs to channel and dope her problem carefully). Don't witches have charms for these sorts of things? Sheesh. If I was magical, I think that would be something I'd work on ASAP. Maybe Harry will be motivated... :)

Author's Response: Who said it was PMS ... not meeeeeeeeee *skips out singing happily*



Reviewer: Waynej Signed Date: 2008.05.29 - 11:25PM Title: Future Fortune

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Interesting chapter, it must have taken you a long time to figure out Lavender and Parvati's conversation. I'm glad that Ginny is cooperating with you again.

Author's Response: Actually ... after the Harry/Ginny moment with the photos, Lavender and Parvati were the easiest part of the chapter! George gave me issues (git) and Ron and Harry were being difficult in the Ministry but Lavender and Parvati just fell out of the pen ... er, keyboard.



Reviewer: harrypotterspirit Signed Date: 2008.05.29 - 09:48PM Title: Future Fortune

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This was a good chapter; especially showing the emotions of George and Ginny. It is certainly understandable that Angie and George would share their loss as no one else would quite understand their feeling. I thought Ron showed considerable courage to confront his brother. I love when Teddy cuddles with Harry and changes his hair to black. It's like Teddy has a sixth sense about Harry. Hermione's research usually unearths some obscure fact that helps out. So, I am hopeful for the demise of the werewolf legislatlion. Lavendar surely sounds like she is in a fairly poor condition, poor girl. The wizarding world is still healing from Post Hogwarts battle fallout. And finally, clueless Harry finally understands Ginny's need for chocolate. A bit embarrassing to learn it from her brothers. There was a lot in this chapter. Great work.

Author's Response: Thanks, there was a lot but I'm actually very excited to be getting to some of the things I've been planning for months now! Woot! Ron has immense courage. I think it's time he shone a bit. And a pox on werewolf legislation - Go Hermione! Thanks for reading and reviewing!




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