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Reviewer: Spenser Hemmingway Signed Date: 2008.01.01 - 02:03PM Title: Like Clockwork

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Now I’m really wondering what you have up your sleeve…and what Harry has up his with that promise he mad to Zonko. You are continuing to work excellent character interactions in your dialogue, and the flow of the story makes a nice read while holding your interest. I have a strong feeling that you are going to throw a boomerang ending at us. On to the finale! Thanks. Eric B.

Author's Response: As you've hopefully figured out from reading the last chapter, all of George's friends who contributed funds towards the purchase of the store will appear on the new deed of ownership to get around Harry's promise to Zonko. A little dishonest? Perhaps...but Harry and friends do have a knack for breaking the rules for the greater good.




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