Reviews For I Wouldn't Change a Thing
Reviewer: GinnyPotterFan26 Signed Date: 2010.04.01 - 02:38AM Title: Chapter 3 This trio, and that which preceded it, were great. I love the insight into the Potters' lives and I thought that you had a really nice story to tell in each one. Though one might argue that they were a little cliche (especially considering that each ended with such a sappy line), I think it was a nice way to tie it together. And honestly, these things are cliches because they're what is written about most often...because that's the kind of stuff that actually happens. Real life isn't new, creative, and edgy every time. Sometimes it really just is your breath catching at the sight of your baby girl or reminding your wife you love her. Nice job! Reviewer: jittybug0123j Signed Date: 2008.08.20 - 03:22PM Title: Chapter 3 Beautiful!! Reviewer: DukeBrymin Signed Date: 2008.04.24 - 03:51PM Title: Chapter 3 Sorry that you have to settle for a review of the whole story, rather than a chapter-by-chapter discussion, but I'm feeling a bit lazy today. I've always thought that it's easiest to write about what one knows, hence the Three Moments Series (soon to be the Three Moments Trilogy -- shameless plug). Thank you for taking the time to read the story and I hope I can continue to produce stuff you'll enjoy. Reviewer: Enchantedgurls Signed Date: 2008.04.13 - 09:59PM Title: Chapter 3 Rich, I had no time to review last Thursday but I'm home now and just read through all three of the chapters. I really like the changes you made, especially with this chapter. You were right to take out the part with Ron and Hermione being compared to Molly and Ginny's fighting. I can't think off the top of my head everything you changed (that was just one thing that stuck out in my mind), but I did catch a few things and I thought it made the fic more coherent. All in all, the story's great, you're a great writer, and I can't wait to read more from you!! Reviewer: pinkshades05 Signed Date: 2008.04.12 - 07:01PM Title: Chapter 3 Aww! This is adorable. I really like how you incorporate each moment with the overall theme. Very nice! Reviewer: ngayonatkailanman Signed Date: 2008.04.11 - 05:07AM Title: Chapter 3 With a little girl like the Lil you just wrote about? No, indeed. Neither would I. I wouldn't change a thing! Reviewer: NYC10016 Signed Date: 2008.04.10 - 08:57PM Title: Chapter 3 it's an excellent H&G post-DH fanfic especially as being a dad yourself you really captured Harry's sentiments. i just read the prequel to this fic and also liked it loads! it's weird you are not getting loads of reviews for you do pen H&G well and from a bloke's point-of-view too! vivid description/total details spells huge brownie points plus canon-plot-plaussible! best from NYC! Reviewer: ginevrapulliza Signed Date: 2008.04.10 - 08:52PM Title: Chapter 3 ohhh how sweet. Ginny may not be the perfect mother but she sure as hell is trying. Wonderful. | |||||||
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