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Reviewer: nayin1704 Signed Date: 2016.06.20 - 09:54AM Title: Chapter 13: Animam meam refecit

Yes! The horcrux is gone



Reviewer: Gin110881 Signed Date: 2015.06.24 - 05:06AM Title: Chapter 13: Animam meam refecit

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Ginny sacrifices herself for Harry; she is very strong. In the rare weak moments when she has to take deep breath and weep a bit, one can see how strong she really is and how it depletes her. She is there for him all around the clock and her willingness to be there for him makes it feel so natural (which it is indeed, in her view). Now it becomes clear what Snape meant with the statement, that Ginny is the "key to the strength of the bonding". I like how you describe the situations where to two of them find comfort in each other.
It was very helpful, for Poppy as well as for the attentive reader, that Snape explained his decisions and the consequence of the marriage again.
It’s a wonderful story so far. OK, the medical details in the recent chapters were a bit overwhelming, but I do not want to complain about that.
A big THANK YOU for sharing the story!



Reviewer: Kage James Signed Date: 2010.01.11 - 07:47PM Title: Chapter 13: Animam meam refecit

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Reviewer: hpf2114 Signed Date: 2009.10.04 - 06:04PM Title: Chapter 13: Animam meam refecit

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Reviewer: Dizzydancer Signed Date: 2009.02.09 - 03:16PM Title: Chapter 13: Animam meam refecit

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I love your title. I'm surprised no one has commented on it or the last chapter's. I know I had to look up the Latin. You used one of my favorite Psalms! Both are apt but this one seems to have muliple meanings and I enjoy that depth. I like that your story makes me think. I find myself looking up words and concepts and rereading cannon to see if you got things right.

"He restoreth my soul." I'm so glad Harry woke up and that Ginny has him back. He seemed pretty unaware but she seemed really lost without him.

For the record, I wasn't worried at all. Of course you couldn't kill off Harry Potter. You'd have no story! :D

I like the interaction between Snape and Pomfrey. The humor was a good break from the suspense you created. Snape did steal Molly's only chance to plan her daughter's wedding. He should be very afraid.

Author's Response: I like these titles. I like the suspense in these chapters, too. There something about not knowing what to expect, even when you thought that you did, that must makes it fun to write such things.



Reviewer: hushpuppy22 Signed Date: 2008.10.26 - 08:41PM Title: Chapter 13: Animam meam refecit

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Reviewer: starboy454 Signed Date: 2008.10.25 - 08:32PM Title: Chapter 13: Animam meam refecit

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Reviewer: bloodlessaceo1 Signed Date: 2008.10.24 - 04:33PM Title: Chapter 13: Animam meam refecit

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Reviewer: HGRHfan35 Signed Date: 2008.10.24 - 01:42PM Title: Chapter 13: Animam meam refecit

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Somehow I missed the last 4 updates although this is on the fave list, weird.
I love this story (and weirdly enough, your Snape) and I just wanted to say that I look forward to the coming chapters.
How are Hermione, Ron, Neville and Luna coping and the Weasleys, too.

Until next time, good luck. C

ps: I know what you mean with the PC/crash stuff. That is a real mess-up of everythig in your life, isn't it.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading!! I hope that you enjoyed the answers about the others in Chapter 14. Thanks for the sympathy on the computer. I think I have it working better now. Chapter 15 is posted, so whenever it gets validated, have fun with it!



Reviewer: Killache Signed Date: 2008.10.24 - 03:30AM Title: Chapter 13: Animam meam refecit

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Reviewer: Elvenlaughter Signed Date: 2008.10.23 - 11:49PM Title: Chapter 13: Animam meam refecit

Yay! He's awake and it worked! *dances*
I laughed when they were talking about Molly Weasley's reaction. She is going to be MAD! Dang, that's going to fun for you to write!

Author's Response: Thanks for reading! I've already been sketching out the Molly chapter.



Reviewer: Professor_Chris Signed Date: 2008.10.23 - 09:37PM Title: Chapter 13: Animam meam refecit

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I am so glad that they are both okay and at least awake, hopefully now they can move forward without having to worry about Voldie giving Harry visions or anything else.

Looking forward to seeing what happens...

Author's Response: thanks for the review!



Reviewer: gryff_princess Signed Date: 2008.10.23 - 04:39AM Title: Chapter 13: Animam meam refecit

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Reviewer: poshi Signed Date: 2008.10.23 - 02:07AM Title: Chapter 13: Animam meam refecit

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Thank god you did not make it over dramatic! I hope you update soon!

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm not trying to write for a soap opera, so it shouldn't get to weird that way.



Reviewer: Wolfs_Scream Signed Date: 2008.10.22 - 11:04PM Title: Chapter 13: Animam meam refecit

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That last would be welcome news indeed for both Ginny & Mme. Pomfrey. Even Snape, as well.

"his usual asperity" does indeed well-describe Severus Snape. Heh. Though his repositioning of Mrs. Potter overnight was both a nice touch and somewhat telling: I think he's a closet romantic. :-)

Quite well done.

Author's Response: I think he is a romantic as well, but he's more pragmatic: If he's going to help Harry and Ginny, the contact between them is what needs to happen. Hope you keep enjoying it, and thanks for reading.



Reviewer: hawkeye2008 Signed Date: 2008.10.22 - 10:59PM Title: Chapter 13: Animam meam refecit

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Great story so far, keep on writing! Cheers!

Author's Response: Thanks for reading! Glad that you are enjoying it.



Reviewer: pippan121 Signed Date: 2008.10.22 - 10:15PM Title: Chapter 13: Animam meam refecit

I can't wait for Molly's reaction.
I love this couple and how you are presenting their relationship.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading. Yeah, Molly's reactions are going to be interesting.



Reviewer: irishdaddy0204 Signed Date: 2008.10.22 - 09:15PM Title: Chapter 13: Animam meam refecit

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Awesome as usual. Snapes comments about avoiding Molly were perfect Can't wait for the next installment

Author's Response: Thanks for reading!



Reviewer: harrypotterspirit Signed Date: 2008.10.22 - 08:16PM Title: Chapter 13: Animam meam refecit

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I like Snape in your story. I still feel the old Snape but with a distinct difference as well. Hopefully, all has gone well for Harry. Keeping my fingers crossed as he recovers.

Author's Response: I'm liking this Snape too. Thanks for reading.



Reviewer: teenyjewel Signed Date: 2008.10.22 - 08:05PM Title: Chapter 13: Animam meam refecit

This was a great chapter! I am so glad you put him waking up in this chapter! They are just so cute together!

Author's Response: Thanks for reading! I decided that it was better not to drag that part out too much. Don't want to emulate one of those daytime soaps, after all. :D




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