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Reviewer: Gin110881 Signed Date: 2015.06.24 - 05:56AM Title: Chapter 15: Explanations
This was an impressive performance from Ginny. Again.
It is interesting to see how well and quickly their bond develops and how it works even if Harry is unconscious. I wonder if Harry's damages are curable. I think we will see...
Many thanks for another wonderful instalment!
Reviewer: Chazbites Signed Date: 2010.03.11 - 02:54PM Title: Chapter 15: Explanations
No Review
Author's Response: And thanks for continuing to read!
Reviewer: Dizzydancer Signed Date: 2009.02.09 - 04:15PM Title: Chapter 15: Explanations
This is not good. You broke Harry Potter! This could have some interesting consequences. Will Harry recover fully? How will he defeat Voldemort if he does not recover fully?
Poor Ginny. But there's some cool stuff happening with their bond. Interesting accidental magic.
Hermione sure did pump Ginny for info but really didn't give much back in return. At least she knows their not dead, right?
Author's Response: I didn't break him first! :D I'm enjoying the things that are going on with their bond, too.
Reviewer: hms42 Signed Date: 2008.12.14 - 04:57PM Title: Chapter 15: Explanations
No Review
Author's Response: You are one of my most consistent readers/raters. Thank you!
Reviewer: hawkeye2008 Signed Date: 2008.12.13 - 11:49PM Title: Chapter 15: Explanations
Great chapter! Keep on writing!
Author's Response: Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: DukeBrymin Signed Date: 2008.12.08 - 05:28PM Title: Chapter 15: Explanations
Good chapter. My only complaint is the shorthand that Ginny et al. use in the coins--makes it harder to read the story.
Thanks!
Author's Response: Thanks for reading!
Yeah, I can see your point about the texting type of shorthand. I don't do it much myself, but it seems to work for this kind of thing, and the messages have to stay short, so ... I guess I'm going to have to keep using it. I kind of like it, really. :D
Reviewer: teenyjewel Signed Date: 2008.12.04 - 11:03PM Title: Chapter 15: Explanations
Well ignore my previous comment. I was totally wrong, the coins make sense, I just wasn't paying attention completely or I was having a scattered brain moment, sorry. This chapter was brilliant! Great job, I loved it, again! Thanks please update again soon!
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it, and it was amusing to read both of your messages next to each other. :D I will be trying to update again this weekend, but my parents are in town to see my kids in the Nutcracker, so I make no promises. :D
Reviewer: teenyjewel Signed Date: 2008.12.04 - 09:31PM Title: Chapter 15: Explanations
This chapter was amazing, really interesting! Though the coin conversation got confusing, you might want to write in complete sentences and just sign them, it seemed like at one point the first initials were to... then they changed to who was talking. At least keep it consistent. Unless I read it wrong.
Reviewer: Wolfs_Scream Signed Date: 2008.12.03 - 01:15AM Title: Chapter 15: Explanations
Snape appears to have a fine grasp of the obvious, there. :-}
And his diplomatic efforts (between Poppy & Ginny) were truly both amazing and amusing.
Well done.
Author's Response: Sometimes, being the master of the obvious strikes everyone. :D Diplomacy is a fine thing, and one that many people would do well to cultivate. The man has kept himself alive in the midst of Death Eaters and Voldemort for years. I think that he would be able to quietly make suggestions to a couple of very upset, powerful witches, to encourage them to not hex each other, in effective ways. :D
Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: friendsofhagrid Signed Date: 2008.12.03 - 12:20AM Title: Chapter 15: Explanations
Another great chapter, thanks for the entertainment!
Author's Response: Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2008.12.02 - 10:02PM Title: Chapter 15: Explanations
what is the old saying asumption is the mother of all f*ckups.....well they did but they were lucky fate was still looking out...glad gfonny is helping all but still harry needs to wake up soon.....kutgw
Author's Response: Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: Birlan Signed Date: 2008.12.02 - 09:54PM Title: Chapter 15: Explanations
Slowly advancing your story with some slow reveals on what is happening.
Nice to see characters being cautious and suspicious--as they should be. When Ginny reunites with anyone she is going to have lots of explaining to do--starting with don't kill Snape and yes my husband and I share a bedroom.
Not sure what is going on with Hermione & Co but that's OK.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading. I hope that I am able to move the story along more soon, but every time I try, it seems that it wants to follow my outline, which is mostly laid out in one or a few day increments.
Yes, Ginny's got some 'splainin to do. :D
Reviewer: pippan121 Signed Date: 2008.12.02 - 09:47PM Title: Chapter 15: Explanations
They are supposed to be having a honeymoon, not fighting for their lives.
Harry had better be ok.
Is it going to be Ron and Hermione, or Hermione and a different Weasley?
Author's Response: Harry will be okay. This is, after all, a story about Harry and Ginny, and I'm not about to kill them off. I may write one of those tear-jerker, Harry and Ginny die at a shocking moment, tales one day, just to entertain myself. :D But this isn't that day. Or story. :D
We'll have to see what happens with Hermione. I wrote a very nice vignette about her that one of my proofreaders convinced me to take out of a previous chapter, and not to put in yet, which will be very revealing about that situation.
Reviewer: Professor_Chris Signed Date: 2008.12.02 - 08:08PM Title: Chapter 15: Explanations
Another excellent chapter... I am glad they have made contact finally with HG and been able to pass a message on. Glad that Harry is progressing even if it did take a lot out of Ginny to save him.
Looking foward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: Progress is sometimes a good thing, especially when talking about recovery from illness. I'm hoping that the next chapter doesn't take me so long to push through.
On a happier note, at least for me, my remodeling project is proceeding nicely. :D
Reviewer: starboy454 Signed Date: 2008.12.02 - 03:26PM Title: Chapter 15: Explanations
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Author's Response: Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: LeatherQueen Signed Date: 2008.12.02 - 02:26PM Title: Chapter 15: Explanations
I can understand your weariness with Harry's illness, but you're right, he can't just hop out of bed right after something like that. I really enjoyed this chapter. You gave us a chance to explore Ginny's connection to him, and the bond is slowly becoming more real to us and them, I think. It's interesting that Snape is surprised by the depth of the bond. I'm wondering if it has to do with the love they already had between them, or the close bond they already had. Either way, I'm sure it's a very good thing, as it helped Harry survived.
I'm really enjoying this story, and I look forward to more. And I'm sure Hermione is yanking out her hair at the non-answers she's getting from Ginny. :D I'm also wondering... since Hedwig can't find Harry and Ginny... I'm wondering if Hermione could send her to Pomfrey. And then from there, Hedwig could see Harry. I feel bad for poor Hedwig.
Oh, and the first thing I thought of when Snape gave those reading materials to Ginny was "I bet Hermione would LOVE to get her hands on that. I bet she could plan out a year-long study plan." *grin*
Author's Response: One of the most important elements to this chapter is exploring more detail about the bonding.
Ginny wasn't the only one giving non-answers! Hermione was being nearly as evasive, you know.
To send Hedwig to Poppy to get her to Harry would require that Hermione know Poppy was with Harry, and that is absolutely not supposed to happen. Hedwig will have to get nursed along for a bit longer, unfortunately.
Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: LeprechaunJV Signed Date: 2008.12.02 - 01:28PM Title: Chapter 15: Explanations
No Review
Author's Response: Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: HGRHfan35 Signed Date: 2008.12.02 - 12:58PM Title: Chapter 15: Explanations
wow, heavy chapter but certainly not a bad one.
Poor Ginny, she must feel so alone now. *sigh*
Author's Response: Thanks for reading!
Yeah, poor Ginny. She'll be okay, though. :D
