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Reviewer: Gin110881 Signed Date: 2015.06.24 - 07:34AM Title: Chapter 16: Awakenings

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It is pleasing to have Harry back among the living. However, the after-effects of the "procedure" seem to be very serious. I suppose that Ginny needs to be very patient with him.
Ginny's results in the lessons with Snape and the way she rebuked him were impressive.
Very well done. Again. As Always.



Reviewer: Defender Signed Date: 2010.07.20 - 04:18PM Title: Chapter 16: Awakenings

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LOL, I'd love to have that perscribed for the next time I'm sick. :-P

Author's Response: I don't suppose I'm the one you need to be discussing that with. :D



Reviewer: Kage James Signed Date: 2010.01.11 - 10:32PM Title: Chapter 16: Awakenings

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Reviewer: tayty2008 Signed Date: 2008.12.20 - 03:40AM Title: Chapter 16: Awakenings

i like

Author's Response: I'm glad! Thanks for reading!



Reviewer: starboy454 Signed Date: 2008.12.20 - 02:36AM Title: Chapter 16: Awakenings

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Reviewer: harrypotterspirit Signed Date: 2008.12.15 - 08:49PM Title: Chapter 16: Awakenings

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Yeah, Harry is awake and on the road to recovery. Although, his short term memory loss didn't sound good, but luckily sounds like he'll recover from that too. Harry needing constant supervision, like a child, might drive Ginny crazy or it might be just what the two newly weds need most, time alone.

Author's Response: Yes, he's finally moving forward. And I'm so glad! Thanks for reading!



Reviewer: Aragorn Signed Date: 2008.12.15 - 12:02AM Title: Chapter 16: Awakenings

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Well, I noticed this this morning....and was fairly skeptical, but noticed that you had done a really nice story for the Twins Challenge. Anyway, I basically read straight through to the end.

Thanks for your art and craft...this is up there with the really good H/G bonding stories...and for sharing it with the rest of us.

Author's Response: Goodness. Blushing! (fans face) :D

I'm glad that you enjoy my stories. Thanks for reading!



Reviewer: teenyjewel Signed Date: 2008.12.14 - 10:13PM Title: Chapter 16: Awakenings

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This chapter was great, very interesting and very informative. Can't wait for the next one!

Author's Response: Thanks for reading!



Reviewer: hawkeye2008 Signed Date: 2008.12.14 - 08:28PM Title: Chapter 16: Awakenings

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Great chapter, continue on!

Author's Response: Thanks for reading!



Reviewer: hms42 Signed Date: 2008.12.14 - 05:13PM Title: Chapter 16: Awakenings

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Reviewer: DebbieO Signed Date: 2008.12.14 - 04:47PM Title: Chapter 16: Awakenings

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Wow, I don't know how I missed this excellent story, but I'm delighted I found it. You had me absolutely hooked. I read 16 chapters in two days! It's been a long time since I had a fic grab me that completely, but oh...I love it when that happens!

I love the entire tweak of the story you created by having Snape intervene on Harry's behalf. It is quite a commentary on the difference one person can make if they're willing to risk for the sake of others. Of course, in this case, Snape was in the unique position to help Harry with his inside information and knowledge base. I like the way you handled the Horcrux and the bond between Harry and Ginny.

I am ready for Harry to be well, although I'm a bit of a sucker for the Florence Nightengale stories too. Still, I'll be happy to see him strong again and functioning more normally. You really put him through it. It will be fun to see how he handles the Horcrux hunt with Ginny at his side. I'm hoping for Ron/Hermione too eventually.

But, whatever you do...I'll be reading. Thanks for a great time!

Author's Response: I am delighted that you have found my story, and even more so that you are hooked on it and appreciate it.

As far as Snape is concerned, I just ... can't imagine that he would follow the plan so slavishly once he was the one making the decisions. If he had the opportunity to change things, and in my story he creates that opportunity, he would continue to protect Lily's son, just because he is Lily's son. He may not be an admirable, or even likable, person, but he will stay loyal to Lily, and by extension, Harry.

I really didn't mean to put Harry through so much in this story, but once I got it outlined, it seemed that he had to go through all of this in order to get where I am going with the plot.

You're welcome, thanks for reading, and I hope you continue to enjoy it.



Reviewer: Wolfs_Scream Signed Date: 2008.12.14 - 04:29PM Title: Chapter 16: Awakenings

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Harry's being about as "good" a patient as I'd expect.

I gather that there was no imminent danger from the smoke (when Ginny was upset) & Harry tried to get to her)?

Snape was being remarkably candid with Ginny. I wonder if it did him any good to be able to admit that stuff to someone else. And Ginny certainly seems to have spoken her mind rather freely. :-}

Yes, you're quite right -- it's time for Harry to be awake (at least now & then). :-)

Author's Response: Harry is not a good patient. He is a brat. :D But I don't think he will try to cause Ginny trouble.

The smoke was just smoke.

I love Ginny. I think that she is a strong, honest, passionate person, and as long as Snape can't give her detention for it, why not!?

I am looking forward to Harry being well. Or at least conscious.



Reviewer: DukeBrymin Signed Date: 2008.12.14 - 02:55PM Title: Chapter 16: Awakenings

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Yeay, you brought Harry back from the brink of death! It'll be interesting to see if Snape changes at all due to the reaming-out that Ginny gave him--way to go Ginny!

Author's Response: Well, it's not like he can give her a detention! :D She has always seemed blunt and strong to me -- the way she handled Harry in fifth year, for example.

Harry will not die in the middle of the story, if ever. Makes for a lousy story about Harry, in my opinion. :D



Reviewer: LeprechaunJV Signed Date: 2008.12.14 - 12:32PM Title: Chapter 16: Awakenings

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Reviewer: Ginny Guerra Signed Date: 2008.12.14 - 10:55AM Title: Chapter 16: Awakenings

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NIce one. Was kinda missing you, you know?

Update soon, please.

Author's Response: Thanks. I missed you, too. :D

I'm working on the next one, and hope that it won't take quite as long to produce. My parents were in town last week, so it slowed things a bit.

I was kind of pleasantly surprised last night. This chapter was validated and on the front page less than two hours after I posted it last night. I don't expect it to happen again, but ... just, wow!



Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2008.12.14 - 09:25AM Title: Chapter 16: Awakenings

well at lease harry is awake and talking and is moving alittle but it always takes time to recover and that is what they have...kutgw

Author's Response: Yes, I think it will take some time for him to recover.

Thanks for reading!



Reviewer: Professor_Chris Signed Date: 2008.12.14 - 08:10AM Title: Chapter 16: Awakenings

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Another great chapter... I am glad that Harry is finally awake even if he cannot remember what happened...

Well that seems to leave them with a couple of options :)...

Author's Response: Yes, it does, doesn't it!

Thanks for reading!



Reviewer: Birlan Signed Date: 2008.12.14 - 07:51AM Title: Chapter 16: Awakenings

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Nicely crafted. i like the way that you explain an aspect of Snape's character from canon that never made sense to me(his terrible teaching and unfairness to students)while using that to drive the story and explain more of Harry's condition through Harry's reaction. You also show more of Ginny's development and personal strength while highlighting Dunbledore's questionable values. And its all very entertaining even with all of that

Really an excellent chapter. I am looking forward to Harry getting out of bed although it sounds like your characters are happy to be staying in it. :-)

Author's Response: Why, thank you! That is a very nice compliment. Huge. Thank you.

I think that Harry is looking forward to being out of bed, too. I mean, he can always choose to get back in. :D



Reviewer: sinnerman Signed Date: 2008.12.14 - 07:23AM Title: Chapter 16: Awakenings

As usual a great chapter. Thanks for wakng Harry up...and yes I know this is basically a Horcrux story and all, but the medical facts are great too, and must have required a bit of research on your part.

As an aside: Poor Hedwig, not knowing where Harry is and thinking he may be dead,

I look forward to the next chapter,

Author's Response: Thank you, thank you. Harry had to wake up for the story to move forward. Horcruxes are in this story, and they are integral to the structure of it, but I think of it more as a relationship story, a love story, and how Harry and Ginny's different relationship changes the Horcrux parts and everything else.
My wife appreciates your appreciation of her medical research very much. She has fun surprising me with different facts and pages of notes on it.
Hedwig. Poor Hedwig. I have been forced to leave a pet for extended periods of time before, and it is very hard on them. They just don't understand, especially if they have bonded closely with their owners.



Reviewer: LeatherQueen Signed Date: 2008.12.14 - 03:19AM Title: Chapter 16: Awakenings

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Wonderful! Harry is finally awake. He has a bit of a recovery ahead of him, but at least they can enjoy their time in bed while he's stuck there. :D

Interesting chapter, though. And I see Ginny is really starting to demonstrate some interesting wandless magic. Her thoughts on Snape's teaching skills were dead on, and hopefully Snape will take them to heart for the future. We shall see, I guess.

I'm looking forward to the next, and hopefully Harry will be up and mobile again soon.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading! This was kind of a tough chapter for me to produce, at first, but I'm glad that you enjoyed it. More interactions between other people besides Harry and Ginny seemed to be the only way to move the story forward.




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