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Reviewer: Gin110881 Signed Date: 2015.06.24 - 08:00AM Title: Chapter 17: Flight
I would really like to know Poppy's advice for "when he seems interested again …”
Great chapter. Thank you!
Reviewer: Kage James Signed Date: 2010.01.12 - 10:58AM Title: Chapter 17: Flight
No Review
Author's Response: Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: Baby_Huey Signed Date: 2009.01.02 - 10:54PM Title: Chapter 17: Flight
The only problem that i have with your story is the frequent references to Harry and Ginny having sex. It is nort that I have a problem with the idea of them shagging like rabbits, but rather it does nothing to further the plot of the story.
Author's Response: Well, thanks for reading.
Author's Response: Okay. Now I've gone back and looked at this chapter again, because I was pretty sure that I didn't put any sex in it.
The thing is, the only time this is mentioned is when the doctor/nurse in the situation gives the wife of the paitent some advice on how to go about helping her husband. That is a real issue, that people with this kind of injury (and their partners) have to deal with. They do really get advice of this kind from their medical professionals. I didn't go into details, I didn't describe them shagging like bunnies, and I won't. I tried to deal with it tastefully, or at least without being graphic. However, sex is an essential part of this story, because of the requirements of their bonding, so I'm sorry if referring to it once in a while makes some people uncomfortable
Reviewer: igdrasil Signed Date: 2009.01.02 - 02:43PM Title: Chapter 17: Flight
I like the story and I'm waiting for more. I'm shaking in fear for Molly wrath.
The story is interesting, I'm sure the action will come in the future chapters.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading! Molly is coming, but not for a few more chapters. The action should be picking up more soon.
Reviewer: HGRHfan35 Signed Date: 2009.01.02 - 06:27AM Title: Chapter 17: Flight
Brilliant chapter. I could relate to the situation because I took care of my father when he got sick and he was so angry because he felt so helpless and inadequate as time went on and got worse. I still cry when I think about his fear those last weeks.
Anyways... A bit more action and I like your Snape & Pomphrey a lot.
Now let's see what you've in store for Ginny & Harry in Switserland at a muggle hospital. Hope you'll have some consolation for Molly soon.
Until next time, take care & a happy new year.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading! I have had to care for severely ill people as well, so it's kind of ... familiar to me to write this. And part of the "when will this ever end" stuff is deliberate, because that is how a person in that situation feels. Happy New Year! Oh, they went to France, not Switzerland.
Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2009.01.01 - 02:50PM Title: Chapter 17: Flight
well if is never easy for them but at lease harry will have people they can get along with soon and can get well as fast as a muggle could....hope they leave them alone but knowing the group they wont.....kutgw
Author's Response: Thanks for reading! Honestly, I think it was more Dumbledore that wouldn't leave people alone. We'll see how that all pans out, but I don't think that they are going to be chased around the globe at this point.
Reviewer: hawkeye2008 Signed Date: 2009.01.01 - 09:31AM Title: Chapter 17: Flight
Great Chapter, Henry and Jennifer? Pretty good, as alot of men named Henry are called Harry for short! Look at Prince Harry, his given name is Henry! Cheers!
Keep on writing!
Author's Response: Thanks for reading! Yeah, I decided to go for a "familiar sounding" name for both of them.
Reviewer: Wolfs_Scream Signed Date: 2009.01.01 - 12:53AM Title: Chapter 17: Flight
Ah, those tell-tale final clues...! And folks like Moody & Tonks would seem unlikely to overlook them -- or their significance.
Snape's self-description was quite amusing; I didn't really expect him to have that much of a sense of humor.
I hope Harry heals quickly. :-}
Well done.
Author's Response: Couple of experienced Aurors should pick up clues pretty easily, yeah. Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: Co11een Signed Date: 2008.12.31 - 09:03PM Title: Chapter 17: Flight
I agree with Ginny92 some Order PoV would be nice. Definitely has to be Tonks or Moody though specially the scene with the rumpled bed and the hairs. Maybe the scene where whoever tells Mrs. Weasley. I think Mr. Weasley should find out first then he tells Mrs. Weasley. Would be awesome.
Author's Response: Well, we'll see. I'm glad that you are enjoying it.
Reviewer: irishdaddy0204 Signed Date: 2008.12.31 - 08:54PM Title: Chapter 17: Flight
brilliant as always. You capured the frustration of dealing with a loved one with memory loss beautifully. Bravo !!! I do hope Harry will be getting well soon but it's nice to know they are moving now. Awaiting the next one impatiently !!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I hope that you continue to enjoy it.
Reviewer: cwfjmf Signed Date: 2008.12.31 - 01:31PM Title: Chapter 17: Flight
I really like this story. It seems to me Harry's reviving at an accelerating pace, so I wouldn't worry too much about the "instant gratification" reviews. I also like the way you've made Snape and Ginny allies- unusual to say the least. Update soon.
Happy New Year everyone.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading. I'm glad that you like it. There aren't many of those "instant gratification" reviews, so I'm not too terribly fussed about it.
Happy New Year to everyone! The next chapter is well on the way.
Reviewer: ginny92 Signed Date: 2008.12.31 - 01:25PM Title: Chapter 17: Flight
do you think we could get a chapter or half a chapter with the orders pov, maybe the weasleys too? just so we know what's going on with them, and how their taking the clues in the house. peace
Author's Response: Thanks for reading! :D We'll see about that other stuff.
Reviewer: KMACKD Signed Date: 2008.12.31 - 01:23PM Title: Chapter 17: Flight
I like this story, even if it is playing out a little slow. It's not boring like Worldmaker said. I like the way the character's interaction is pushing the story along.
It would be a positive thrust in the right direction though, I think at least, if Harry could heal a little faster and become a bit more proactive rather than just reactive, the story would flow a bit more readily.
Going to France should be a great strange new stage for the characters to play out their story on.
As for Hermione, I suspect her anxious busybody attitude could be explained to some degree as wanting to help Harry in person, be involved in the adventure, like she used to be, in stead of sitting on the sidelines. Now she knows how Ginny felt all those years when she was not asked to join in.
C'est la vie. Or should i say-C'est la guerre, Whatever! It's still a good story. A nice new twist on the Harry/Ginny romance/adventure tale. So please don't make us wait too long for our next fix.
Author's Response: Thank you for reading, and I'm glad that you are enjoying it. This is a character-and-relationship driven story, more than an event-driven tale. Next chapter should be up soon, and I'm hoping that everyone will enjoy it as well.
Reviewer: Ginny Guerra Signed Date: 2008.12.31 - 12:50PM Title: Chapter 17: Flight
The chasing is going to be interesting.
Update soon, please!
Author's Response: Not to worry, next chapter is about done.
Reviewer: pippan121 Signed Date: 2008.12.31 - 10:46AM Title: Chapter 17: Flight
OH! Molly will not be happy to hear that fact!
Author's Response: No, I don't think she would be! Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: Professor_Chris Signed Date: 2008.12.31 - 09:56AM Title: Chapter 17: Flight
Another excellent chapter... I am glad that Harry is at least starting to be himself again... Hmm interesting I wonder what will happen when they disover the bedroom.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading, Chris. It will be interesting when they discover that bed, won't it!
Reviewer: harrypotterspirit Signed Date: 2008.12.31 - 09:23AM Title: Chapter 17: Flight
Thlis chapter has those mysterious cloak and dagger feelings. Tonks and Mad-Eye will not overlook the rumpled bedsheets. So we can assume the hunt for the couple will resume in earnest, making it even more difficult; especially without Snape and Poppy making all the decisions. Harry's cognaitive issues is concerning sometimes. Looking forward to his progress.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading! Yes, there is just that hint of sneaking around here. Hope you keep enjoying it.
Reviewer: SAS33 Signed Date: 2008.12.31 - 06:42AM Title: Chapter 17: Flight
Oh dear, so nearly caught. I hope Harrys recovery goes well in the hospital and we can see them back to their normal selves soon (before Molly wastes away at least LOL!).
Author's Response: Thanks for reading! Yes, it was a very near thing. I doubt that Molly will die of her distress, but it will be interesting to watch this all play out.
Reviewer: knightsbridge Signed Date: 2008.12.31 - 04:10AM Title: Chapter 17: Flight
This story is truly addicting, and the only fix is to wait patiently for another chapter. Fortunately, you give us all long wonderful chapters to think about.
Well, when one has to leave in a hurry, ya' can't think of everything, but if Molly starts her Human Howler bit, and forgts how worried she's been, and calls Ginny a Scarlet Woman (What century does she live in?) could someone Hex her...pretty please?
The time at the clinic should be very interestting, from a medical point of view, and also the story point of view.
I hope you all had a happy holiday, whatever you celebrate...I KNOW I did..I got a fiance in my stocking. The best possible New year to you all, and have a safe New Year's Eve.
Darian
Author's Response: Thank you for reading. I'm glad that you are enjoying it. I am also looking forward to the medical stuff in the next bit.
Congratulations!! No such gifts in our stockings, I'm afraid. We did all of that kind of thing many years ago. But, my wife did get tile in the family room. Wouldn't fit under the tree or in her stocking. :D
Reviewer: Worldmaker Signed Date: 2008.12.31 - 03:12AM Title: Chapter 17: Flight
This story started out fun and interesting, with a new spin on an old idea... but now its devolved into the "let's watch Ginny and Harry sit around all day" show.
Boring.
An entire chapter of boring.
Hell, the last chapter was boring as well. And I think I realized why... you've become bogged down in Harry's medical treatment. YOU SPENT THE LAST UMPTEEN CHAPTERS BASICALLY SAYING THE SAME THING OVER AND OVER AND OVER. And as a result, the story's boring.
Sorry, but there it is.
Author's Response: Well, it must not be too terrible, since you managed to slog your way through not only the most boring chapter I've written, but the longest. :D
I refuse to snap my fingers and heal Harry. I am following my outline, and I will continue to do so.
Please don't shout. It's not polite.
