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Reviewer: Mistress_Lrigtar Signed Date: 2012.05.31 - 11:39AM Title: Chapter 25: Secrets, part 3 -- Revelations

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I'm really enjoying this story so far. Very interesting premise. I keep thinking of Duncan McCloud, especially after the scene with the sword :) I'm sure that's not your intent - LOL. KUTGW. Can't wait to read more and see how the Weasleys react to everything.

Author's Response: Ah, yes, "Duncan MacLeod, of the clan MacLeod". Always have loved that. Hope you enjoy the rest of what's written, and keep reading!



Reviewer: Count Westwest Signed Date: 2009.11.20 - 11:12PM Title: Chapter 25: Secrets, part 3 -- Revelations

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I have really enjoyed this story very much, so much in fact that I read it in two days. It is well written and the premise is interesting... however... Harry being sick is getting old. I just hope this does not turn into one of those sadistic, "let's make Harry suffer stories".

Author's Response: I am not sadistic. I swear!!



Reviewer: hpf2114 Signed Date: 2009.11.19 - 05:35PM Title: Chapter 25: Secrets, part 3 -- Revelations

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Author's Response: Thanks for reading!



Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2009.11.19 - 05:12PM Title: Chapter 25: Secrets, part 3 -- Revelations

I think they needed to have more in to help harry and i think a serect fron is a good one ot use...as for them going home is even better and ginny is right harry has the trump cards to play and ginny is screwed....kutgw

Author's Response: Thanks for reading!



Reviewer: DukeBrymin Signed Date: 2009.11.19 - 09:29AM Title: Chapter 25: Secrets, part 3 -- Revelations

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Wonderful to have a new chapter--I like that they're going to visit the Weasleys, but can't wait for the actual visit.
thanks!

Author's Response: Thanks for reading! The visit is in the next chapter.



Reviewer: hawkeye2008 Signed Date: 2009.11.18 - 09:18PM Title: Chapter 25: Secrets, part 3 -- Revelations

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I like nice long chapters! Well done, please keep on writing, next chapter coming soon??
Cheers!

Author's Response: Thanks for reading! Long chapters are more satisfying, aren't they!



Reviewer: sabradan Signed Date: 2009.11.18 - 07:28PM Title: Chapter 25: Secrets, part 3 -- Revelations

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Great chapter! But you are really evil, sometimes, when you make us wait like this for chapters, especially fo rthis next chapter! Please update soon! Like, before Christmas, please!

Author's Response: Thanks for reading! I don't mean to make you wait, it just takes time to get a good chapter done. I do not think the next one will take until Christmas. :D



Reviewer: harrypotterspirit Signed Date: 2009.11.18 - 05:50PM Title: Chapter 25: Secrets, part 3 -- Revelations

I thought they might wait a day or two or maybe overnight and it surprised me that they apparated straight away. I am anxious and excited for their family reunion. So many different emotions are going to enter here especially since it will be a big surprise.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading! They apparated the morning after the conversation where they indicated that they were "going tomorrow." It was just the next scene, since I didn't think folks really wanted me to spend a page or two describing sleeping. :D



Reviewer: hp_fanatic Signed Date: 2009.11.18 - 04:35PM Title: Chapter 25: Secrets, part 3 -- Revelations

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Great chapter, please update soon!

Author's Response: Thanks for reading! New chapter is in process.



Reviewer: dshadel Signed Date: 2009.11.18 - 03:04PM Title: Chapter 25: Secrets, part 3 -- Revelations

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Great chapter cant wait to see the reunion with the family in the next one.!!!Update soon!!!

Author's Response: Thanks for reading!



Reviewer: LeprechaunJV Signed Date: 2009.11.18 - 01:06PM Title: Chapter 25: Secrets, part 3 -- Revelations

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Reviewer: KMACKD Signed Date: 2009.11.18 - 11:24AM Title: Chapter 25: Secrets, part 3 -- Revelations

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That was, as JKR might say, spot on. Very enjoyable. It's good to see that Duncan is somehow connected to the wizarding world, and can be a complete magical friend and maybe an ally to them. It would be good if Duncan can, in conjunction with Ginny, really push Harry to get as close to being his old self again, by helping him train.

It's good to see Ginny as a powerful companion/lover/wife, who does what she needs to for her man.
Your Ginny Potter isn't unsure 'ickle Ginnykins'. She is someone who has had her dream come true, to be with her Harry, and woe betide anyone who tries to take that dream away. Bravo.

It was good to have them actively thinking about and discussing going to visit Ginny's family and I'm glad to see that they finally decided to just do it. Can hardly wait for the next chapter where the tempers flare and the action heats up with the Weasleys..

Oh, and nice little touch with Harry and Ginny fighting Death Eaters. I think it was good to remind Harry and Ginny of why they are working to get Harry back into shape, although I am enjoying the story because it is just basically about Harry and Ginny being together without a lot of intrusions. They care about each other and about what their life will be together. Really well done!

Thanks..



Author's Response: Thank you for reading, and for your very thoughtful review. I have been working very diligently to have a Ginny who is characterized as a strong person in her own right, in spite of being bound to Harry. Thanks for appreciating that!



Reviewer: Lord Dreadnault Signed Date: 2009.11.18 - 10:35AM Title: Chapter 25: Secrets, part 3 -- Revelations

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That took a long time. I'm glad to see that they're finally heading over to see the family.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading! It took longer than I wanted it to, but I wanted to have it be readable and consistent, so we have all had to wait, unfortunately.



Reviewer: Professor_Chris Signed Date: 2009.11.18 - 10:13AM Title: Chapter 25: Secrets, part 3 -- Revelations

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Another great chapter, looking forward to seeing what happens....

Author's Response: Thanks! It should be exciting. I think folks will like what I have in mind for the next chapter.



Reviewer: Zanthus Signed Date: 2009.11.18 - 07:17AM Title: Chapter 25: Secrets, part 3 -- Revelations

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Love the way you have built up the visit home, pity it is in the next chapter(hopefully). Duncan wouldn't by chance happen to own a Keep were a certain Remus might be being held?? Another great read. Enjoy.
Z

Author's Response: Thanks for reading! The visit is in the next chapter.

As for Duncan, his full identity has not been revealed to anyone as yet. Wait and see!



Reviewer: hgromance Signed Date: 2009.11.18 - 06:40AM Title: Chapter 25: Secrets, part 3 -- Revelations

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Very evil to leave it there. Don't make us wait long, PLEASE?

Author's Response: Thanks for reading! I am (and have been) already working on the next chapter. Patience!



Reviewer: HGRHfan35 Signed Date: 2009.11.18 - 03:55AM Title: Chapter 25: Secrets, part 3 -- Revelations

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No, No, don't stop now, I want to see their reunion with the Weasleys!

What a terrific chapter. The flow was good and it was a smooth read.
Duncan, I knew something was up with him and I do wonder if he is in any way connected to where Remus (no I haven't forgotten him) is now. That Clan sure has magic on their own and it just seems more connected than at first glance.

I love the easy banter and the bond between Harry & Ginny and I hope the Weasleys will pick on it as well without giving them a too heavy chew-out for doing the dissapearance trick.

Until next time, take care. C

Author's Response: Thanks for reading! I'm not stopping, I assure you. It was, however, time to stop the chapter and post it for you.

Thank you for your review! This story is primarily about Harry and Ginny's relationship. I'm sure that, while there will be fireworks in the next chapter, there will also be some demonstration of the bonding and what it really means.



Reviewer: Comet Moon Signed Date: 2009.11.18 - 02:05AM Title: Chapter 25: Secrets, part 3 -- Revelations

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Oh, this should be fun. (;


Dungan's a little dense. I mean, Harry/Death Eaters. Big clues there.

Really look forward to next chapter. Hope a good christmas pressie

LFTM

Ja ne

JIm

Author's Response: Thanks for reading! I don't really think that Duncan is dense. I mean, how many people really know that Harry got kidnapped?

I do not think that it will take anything like as long as Christmas to get the next chapter out!



Reviewer: Aragorn Signed Date: 2009.11.18 - 01:56AM Title: Chapter 25: Secrets, part 3 -- Revelations

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Thanks for persevering! and the details of storytelling. Am sure many of us are much looking forward to the next chapter...now that we've arrived at this place.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading! I am also looking forward to getting through the next chapter.



Reviewer: Alifromnm Signed Date: 2009.11.18 - 12:20AM Title: Chapter 25: Secrets, part 3 -- Revelations

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This chapter was so worth the wait! Thank you

Author's Response: I'm glad that you think so! Thank you for reading!




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