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Reviewer: Gin110881 Signed Date: 2015.06.29 - 08:26AM Title: Chapter 35: What Happens in the River

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Oops, that was a lot of information, which I still need to sort in. I was really relieved when Harry asked, "... what does it all mean?" Exactly the same I had just thought, lol. I guess I just have to read on to find out.
One thing that always has puzzled me is the age limit. Detailed explanations of how you can kill a man the fastest or bloody scenes as a childbirth are completely OK for PG-13. However, the mention of a naked human ass is strictly prohibited, lol. OK, this has nothing to do with your story. These are the thoughts that I have about many feature films in cinema and TV.



Reviewer: Kyral Signed Date: 2014.01.13 - 12:33PM Title: Chapter 35: What Happens in the River

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Just stumbled upon this story the other week and spent all week reading it. Quite different than anything else I've read. I like your portrayal of Snape, still the grouchy anti-hero but more heroic. I like how you've given Harry & Ginny a power boost but at the same time gave them the disadvantage of Harry's injuries (which aren't just immediately patched up) And I have the image of Harry turning into a Flash stepping version of an Assassin once Duncan gets done with him. I normally don't really like Hermione paired off with someone other than Ron, but that's because I'm an R/Hr fan. But you've written it well (Ron was a huge prat early on). Maybe some Moody boot camp will get him to grow up.

And we all know how Real Life mucks up plans. Don't worry about it. But if it's going to be a while, another recap like at the top of this one would be appreciated :)

Author's Response: Thank you for your review! I will definitely consider adding recaps to future chapters, especially if they take as long as Ch. 36 did to get out.



Reviewer: Alifromnm Signed Date: 2013.12.22 - 02:17PM Title: Chapter 35: What Happens in the River

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I have spent this weekend rereading your wonderful story. I am so hooked, and have been since starting to read it a long time ago. I love it as much now as then. Thank your so much for the update. I look forward to the next installment.

I kown how real life gets and understands. I'm not one to bitch or moan about no updates. Ya'll don't do this for pay but for the love of the story. I am thankful that you have decided to continue the HP saga. I find I actually enjoy the AUs better than cannon.

Thanks you for the great read!!

Author's Response: Thank you for such a nice review! You are right, life gets in the way of lots of things that we would really like to do.



Reviewer: potterfan2008 Signed Date: 2013.11.22 - 08:10AM Title: Chapter 35: What Happens in the River

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Very glad to see a new chapter! I have mixed feelings about the Mar and its inhabitants - they are an interesting mix of people with a wide variety of abilities, but sometimes its hard to see how Harry and Ginny fit into this world. I can understand the people of the Mar (that was a great bit, by the way with the Martians) wanting to help Harry, but they also seem to want a lot in return that they don't really explain. Not a huge fan of the Ron/Moody partnership, but it is understandable that Ron needs to get away from the drama.

Author's Response: How can they fit into Mar right off the mark? It is a completely different society and environment than they are used to. But, our hero and heroine are tough, flexible, and adaptable. I'm sure that they will find a place there, if they decide to stay.



Reviewer: igdrasil Signed Date: 2013.10.01 - 02:13AM Title: Chapter 35: What Happens in the River

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I know what men that real live turn upside down and tend to absorb every bit of free time and also know w mean longing for few hours of frredom.
In the last month I neglect SIYE (a fair ammount of month) for something like, and today I decided to look at it.
I was very surprised to see an update on this story.
I love the story and your settings, so I hope to see more soon,
It was time to start reading it from scratch so I could enjoit it again.



Author's Response: Glad you liked 35, hope you like 36 as well.



Reviewer: Majlena777 Signed Date: 2013.09.30 - 03:03PM Title: Chapter 35: What Happens in the River

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wow i was surprised to see a update of this story but really glad that you write it . I like this chapter even it has some dull moments .Hope for next update even if not soon ,i'm sure it will be worth the wait just like this chapter .

Author's Response: Chapter 36 is up! Hope you like it as well. Thanks for you patience, and for reading my story.



Reviewer: hgpassion Signed Date: 2013.09.29 - 01:33AM Title: Chapter 35: What Happens in the River

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Yeah! It was great to see another chapter and have Harry and Ginny out of the river. Still one of my favorite fics. Waiting patiently for more... thank you! :)

Author's Response: Thanks for your review, and for reading. Hope you like 36.



Reviewer: carolyn jinn Signed Date: 2013.09.24 - 10:56AM Title: Chapter 35: What Happens in the River

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Glad to see you have updated this great story.
Can't wait to read about the meeting with Ron and Moody.
Please update soon.



Reviewer: Marinka Signed Date: 2013.09.21 - 06:43PM Title: Chapter 35: What Happens in the River

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What a great and detailed story! Your definition of characters is just superb and every single one of them shines through. Positive or negative or even indifferent they are all here, making a great story.
I only hope that you will be able to finish it, many thanks for sharing:))



Reviewer: alterdream Signed Date: 2013.09.21 - 01:55PM Title: Chapter 35: What Happens in the River

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I'm glad you're still writing this and it is still good to read.

Author's Response: Thanks! I've never really stopped writing on this, even when there are long pauses between chapters posted.



Reviewer: Arnel Signed Date: 2013.09.21 - 02:08AM Title: Chapter 35: What Happens in the River

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I had completely forgotten about this story and appreciate the recap of the previous two chapters. I have read the first thirty chapters at least three times because this is one of my favorite stories up until Harry and Ginny get to Mar. I'm just hoping that you won't completely heal Harry prior to the big showdown with Voldemort. You've made the story so realistic so far that it would be a pity if you did. Life isn't like that.

So... this chapter. I'm glad you woke both Harry and Ginny up with relative ease. Your Ginny continues to amaze me with her intuition and intimate knowledge of what's going on with Harry. I also like how Ron is finally maturing a bit and has taken to his training with Moody. I'm looking forward to their meeting with Harry and Ginny. It's interesting to me that I'm even curious about what's going on at Hogwarts; the scene between Narcissa and Snape doesn't bode well in my opinion.

Well done. I sincerely hope there won't be another sixteen-month wait between chapters again. Your story is too good to let us forget it like you did this go-round.

Author's Response: This review makes me blush every time I read it. I'm glad you liked that chapter, and hope that you are still around to read 36, which I just posted.



Reviewer: Emlyn Signed Date: 2013.09.19 - 07:26PM Title: Chapter 35: What Happens in the River

Great to see another chapter. Welcome back! I'll need to refresh myself a bit about what is going on at Hogwarts though. I confess to forgetting what is going there.



Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2013.09.19 - 05:09AM Title: Chapter 35: What Happens in the River

Nice to see u back, took me awhile to figure out what way the story was going, nice to see Harry is make some progress, but getting help is always a plus...kutgw



Reviewer: nesciamema Signed Date: 2013.09.19 - 02:13AM Title: Chapter 35: What Happens in the River

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Interesting, can't wait to see how Isabel's gift manifests for Harry.



Reviewer: sabradan Signed Date: 2013.09.18 - 08:41PM Title: Chapter 35: What Happens in the River

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I'd almost forgotten about this story. Totally understand about the long wait-time. I'm guilty of the same thing, myself (I guess that means I should get cracking, eh?), but I hope I won't have to wait another year for the next chapter, eh, mate? Anyway, great chapter. My only criticism is its a bit short.



Reviewer: cateyes033 Signed Date: 2013.09.18 - 04:51PM Title: Chapter 35: What Happens in the River

Thanks for another great chapter, I am glad to here you are alive and well, the pitchfork is down (but waiting by the door) and the torch is back in its holder.....Thanks Again for the update.....



Reviewer: mahhhfy Signed Date: 2013.09.18 - 03:52PM Title: Chapter 35: What Happens in the River

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I'm so happy you posted a new chapter! I can't wait to see what Mar meant by compensating for what Harry lost. I also really like that Ron is getting auror training during all of this; he's left out too often in fics like this so it's nice to see him getting to work side by side with Moody. I look forward to finding out more about all the mysteries surrounding Harry and Ginny, I hope you're able to post a new chapter soon! Thanks for the update!!



Reviewer: mjc Signed Date: 2013.09.18 - 03:22PM Title: Chapter 35: What Happens in the River

Like a fine wine, the wait was worth it...any more vintage stuff nearly ready?



Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2013.09.18 - 02:46PM Title: Chapter 35: What Happens in the River

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Reading the reviews, you seemed to have pleased a fair number of people. Count me among them.



Reviewer: parakletos Signed Date: 2013.09.18 - 01:52PM Title: Chapter 35: What Happens in the River

Nice to see you back posting. Thanks for the chapter.




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