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Reviewer: Mistress_Lrigtar Signed Date: 2014.05.12 - 05:12PM Title: Chapter 36 - Loss of Innocence

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How could you leave it at that? What a cliffhanger. I enjoyed this chapter immensely. You moved the time-line along a bit, which was nice. It's about time Harry and Ginny start looking in earnest for the Horcruxes. I really enjoyed the exchange between the pair and Snape. It's been awhile since they have had a meeting with him and I like the direction their relationship has taken. I look forward to see what happens next!

Author's Response: There is a cliffie there at the end, but lucky for you, you don't have to wait for the next chapter to post. Thanks for reading and rating.



Reviewer: Elvenlaughter Signed Date: 2014.04.30 - 10:01PM Title: Chapter 36 - Loss of Innocence

I'm so excited to have you back! And with such a long chapter! I had to wait until I had time to read the whole story through again since it's been so long, but now I'm caught up. I'd forgotten just how MUCH there was in this story. It's so intricate. But now, of course, you've left a cliff hanger, so I'm hoping there won't be too much of a wait until I can find out what happens? Please? Awesome.

Author's Response: That was a really long chapter, wasn't it! I'm glad you liked it, and took the time to read the whole thing again. I hope that it hasn't been too long of a wait for 37 - which is up now. :D



Reviewer: TomBombadil Signed Date: 2014.04.26 - 11:27AM Title: Chapter 36 - Loss of Innocence

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I have just completed my third full reading of this story as a result of your latest posting and enjoyed your story even morel than the first two times through the material. This is just so well put together, tightly written, well researched, and just a whole lot of fun. What you have done with Ginny is truly remarkable! Also, your presentation of Hermione is fantastic ... Based on canonical character traits and allowing room for Ginny in Harry's life, where she belonged in Deathly Hallows. Thank you for a job well done, for sharing your work with us, and for continuing on!,,

Author's Response: Wow! What a nice review, Tom. I sure appreciate people still reading this, and being patient with the updates. Thanks!



Reviewer: carolyn jinn Signed Date: 2014.04.24 - 10:09AM Title: Chapter 36 - Loss of Innocence

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WOW. That update was worth waiting for.
If Ginny is in so much trouble with the death eater, and Ginny and Harry are bonded... Then wouldn't Harry know something was wrong. He would be able to sense her panic and terror.
Looking forward to the next update.

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you think so much of what I've done with this chapter.

You'd think Harry would sense something, wouldn't you? :D

Thanks for the review. I'm looking forward to the next chapter too. Actually, it's on my desktop, and getting a few lines put in now and then as I get clearer on what I want to do with it.



Reviewer: blackfoot Signed Date: 2014.04.20 - 10:32PM Title: Chapter 36 - Loss of Innocence

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What can I say, 'I like it alot.' Ok, I'll stop quoting Forest Gump. Sirius-ly though this story is amazing. Harry's family in the Mar is very interesting and well thought out. You did an excellent job on the details of Harry's TBI making it as true as possible in his reactions and physical responses. That's scary stuff to witness in real life, a not so subtle reminder of how fragile humans are. I'm just glad I haven't been waiting since 2008 to find out what happens next. You've been working at this a while now, please don't stop. I'll be patiently waiting, but please don't torture us with the wait.


Author's Response: I'm not stopping. I've never stopped. I'm glad you like the story. I don't make promises or even predictions about chapter delivery. Just know that it will be posted as soon as it is ready. I will say that I don't think the next chapter will be quite as big as this one was, so maybe it won't be too long of a wait.



Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2014.04.16 - 12:15PM Title: Chapter 36 - Loss of Innocence

Nice to see that Harry and Ginny are starting to work on finding more of voldy toys. To bad about delemaza is in the shape she is in....now Ginny is in trouble...but something tells me Harry is about to save the day....kutgw

Author's Response: Yeah, if we ever want the story to have its conclusion, eventually, they have to hunt the horcruxes. Demelza is (checks current version of outline) probably not going to be a major character, but will serve as the face of the Death Eaters' many victims. Hopefully, something will happen to save Ginny!



Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2014.04.16 - 09:17AM Title: Chapter 36 - Loss of Innocence

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With that ending, I hope we do not have to wait too long to find out what is going on.

Author's Response: Me too! Oh, wait... :D Thanks for reading.



Reviewer: parakletos Signed Date: 2014.04.16 - 02:08AM Title: Chapter 36 - Loss of Innocence

The biggest compliment I can pay you is that this chapter seemed very short! Enjoyed it a lot.

One small point, unless I'm missing some word play or it's spelt differently where you live, isn't Innocense spelt Innocence?

Looking forward to more.



Author's Response: Erm, my HS senior pointed that out to me, too. Stuff happens when you post late at night. Chapter may seem short when you read it, but it's the longest one I've written, and seemed eternally long when writing it. Glad you liked it.



Reviewer: Wolfs_Scream Signed Date: 2014.04.15 - 11:30PM Title: Chapter 36 - Loss of Innocence

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Wow! Very well done.

Author's Response: Thanks!



Reviewer: hgromance Signed Date: 2014.04.15 - 05:41PM Title: Chapter 36 - Loss of Innocence

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So great to see another chapter up. I hope Ginny makes it to Harry in time.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading! Ginny is in a bit of a spot, isn't she. :) muwahahaha!



Reviewer: sabradan Signed Date: 2014.04.15 - 12:07PM Title: Chapter 36 - Loss of Innocence

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Reviewer: Birlan Signed Date: 2014.04.15 - 10:45AM Title: Chapter 36 - Loss of Innocence

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Outstanding chapter. I like how you show the consequences of different decisions. Snape wondering who is his c-o-parent and how did Harry "conveinently" find family and Remus, Remus wanting to help and being limited, overplanning for Diagon Alley as it turns out and underplanning for how noticeable red hair can be if you aren't lucky. And finding Demelza in trouble and Harry using the skills he has been learning. Wow--there is a lot there. Thanks for all your hard work on this. I look forward to reading more if and when you have time.

Author's Response: Yeah,there is a lot in this chapter; maybe too much. I doubt I will write another that is quite this long, which, if I actually discipline myself enough to stick with that plan, may mean that chapters will pick back up in frequency and I may finish this beast before it turns into a story that never ends. ;) there is definitely more to come. Thanks for reading!



Reviewer: Zanthus Signed Date: 2014.04.15 - 07:08AM Title: Chapter 36 - Loss of Innocence

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Damn 'nother cliffie. Looks like Alice may have been sent by Isabel to get Harry out of his funk and he sure showed it taking out Demelza's assailant the way he did. Be interesting to see what would happen to Snape if he turns up at Mar. Can't wait to see what happens to Ginny. Good read and enjoy Easter.
Z

Author's Response: I figured the chapter was long enough to make up for the cliffie at the end. ;) thanks for reading! Happy Easter!



Reviewer: trigg Signed Date: 2014.04.15 - 05:19AM Title: Chapter 36 - Loss of Innocence

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I was waiting for a new chapter. It came just in time. Great chapter. What will happen to Ginny now? And to Harry of course. Hope you'll not let her get caught.

Author's Response: Well, we'll just have to se what happens to Ginny. I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. Honestly, I was kind of amazed at how big it got.



Reviewer: mdauben Signed Date: 2014.04.15 - 02:02AM Title: Chapter 36 - Loss of Innocence

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I'm always excited to see a for a new update to this story! Definitely some exciting events in this chapter. The visit to Gringotts was interesting, although the situation with Demelza was disturbing. At least Harry took care of the filthy Death Eater. Now you've left us with a cliff hanger, though! What's going to happen to Ginny and her pursuer? I'll be waiting eagerly for your next update.

Author's Response: Yep, it's a cliffie! Yes, Demelza's situation is disturbing, and a bit ugly. It let us see some of the less-well-known aspects of this kind of warfare, and showed imperfect Harry trying to do his best with a terrible situation. Thanks for reading!!



Reviewer: Marinka Signed Date: 2014.04.15 - 12:21AM Title: Chapter 36 - Loss of Innocence

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Hi, something weird has happened and you have 2 chapters 36? One is blank and one is the actual chapter?
Thank you for updating, i think i need to re-read and remind some minor details of the story, but sooo happy to see new chapter:)


Author's Response: Thank you for letting me know. I have deleted the extra posting of the chapter.




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