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Reviewer: Gin110881 Signed Date: 2015.06.29 - 09:09AM Title: Chapter 37: Loss of Innocence pt 2 - l'Arret Brusque
I am relieved that Ginny has solved the dangerous situation so well.
I'm still not sure which interests Mar pursues with Ginny and Harry. Why did Isabel weaken Harry further? Now the poor guy also has an impaired ability to coordinate. To what extent would that be an advantage for him, as Isabel mentioned?
Why did Narcissa corner the Ryan girl? Will Harry plan a bank raid in Switzerland in order to get the Horcrux? Will he use a dragon as escape vehicle again? Why did Narcissa corner the Ryan girl?
Questions about questions. I hope that RL gives you the chance to answer the question soon, at least a few of them.
Many thanks for sharing that wonderful story so far!
Reviewer: william488 Signed Date: 2014.08.26 - 08:16PM Title: Chapter 37: Loss of Innocence pt 2 - l'Arret Brusque
Loving it so far. Keep up the good work.
Reviewer: SYLVELLE Signed Date: 2014.06.27 - 01:19AM Title: Chapter 37: Loss of Innocence pt 2 - l'Arret Brusque
New chapter please?
Reviewer: Lightbulb Moments x Signed Date: 2014.06.08 - 08:51PM Title: Chapter 37: Loss of Innocence pt 2 - l'Arret Brusque
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Reviewer: mwinter Signed Date: 2014.05.26 - 10:15PM Title: Chapter 37: Loss of Innocence pt 2 - l'Arret Brusque
Awaiting more.
Reviewer: Marinka Signed Date: 2014.05.23 - 06:02AM Title: Chapter 37: Loss of Innocence pt 2 - l'Arret Brusque
I just finished re-reading for 3 rd time I think, it gets better and better:) I wonder what Narcissa will do when she find out that the girl is related to her?
Reviewer: Mistress_Lrigtar Signed Date: 2014.05.13 - 09:50AM Title: Chapter 37: Loss of Innocence pt 2 - l'Arret Brusque
Thanks for posting this chapter so soon. A lot happened in it even if it was short. I liked the scene with George, not knowing who was attacking him. At first i thought it was a big Death Eater attack spread out over the safe houses. Thank goodness it wasn't. I don't remember all that with George and Angelina, so I may have to go back some and re- read. I'm glad Harry is there for Ginny to help her cope as she deals with the conflicting emotions of her first kill. Congratulations on your Honourable Mention. This is one of my favourite stories so your continued recognition is well deserved!
Author's Response: So glad you liked it! The first George scene was meant to look like that. Glad it worked! :D
I got an Honorable Mention!?!? Cool!
Reviewer: sabradan Signed Date: 2014.05.11 - 06:35AM Title: Chapter 37: Loss of Innocence pt 2 - l'Arret Brusque
I've always wondered what a wizarding shotgun wedding looked like.
Author's Response: I wondered, too. In my head, it looks about like that.
Reviewer: SYLVELLE Signed Date: 2014.05.10 - 05:11PM Title: Chapter 37: Loss of Innocence pt 2 - l'Arret Brusque
Okay all caught up again. Excellent chapter.. Thanks for the update.
Tricia
Author's Response: Thanks for reading! Glad you liked it.
Reviewer: TomBombadil Signed Date: 2014.05.10 - 01:34PM Title: Chapter 37: Loss of Innocence pt 2 - l'Arret Brusque
Really exciting chapter mixed with humor and posing some interesting questions! Excellent work, and thank you for sharing!
Author's Response: Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: carolyn jinn Signed Date: 2014.05.09 - 10:28PM Title: Chapter 37: Loss of Innocence pt 2 - l'Arret Brusque
Excellent update.
I have always liked the character of Luna. She is so easy going and carefree. The total opposite of Harry and Ginny. No wonder she is mostly a free spirit.
Glad Ginny managed to get rid of her attacker. I'm glad she didn't let Harry help her. It will definitely help to make her stronger. Harry will always be there to pick up the pieces as she is for him.
Looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: thanks! Luna is fun to read, and write about.
I was thinking that ginny didn't let Harry come to her, hoping that he wouldn't disrupt what was going on at the bank. It can make her stronger, to be more independent, but it is a bit of a shock to cause a death in such a violent manner.
Thanks for reading and rating.
Reviewer: Zanthus Signed Date: 2014.05.07 - 10:03PM Title: Chapter 37: Loss of Innocence pt 2 - l'Arret Brusque
Christmas has come early :) . Ginny is showing the strength she has always had in doing what she had to. Good to see Harry with her at the end. Interesting interlude with the rest. Got to love Luna, that is the best way to go fishing. Enjoy.
Z
Author's Response: Thanks for reading! I would say that if this is Christmas ... I'm not sure what I'm going to do with the rest of the year! :D I think that would be a really cool, and less frustrating, way to go fishing.
Reviewer: mdauben Signed Date: 2014.05.07 - 12:02PM Title: Chapter 37: Loss of Innocence pt 2 - l'Arret Brusque
It's great to see another chapter of your story so soon! The scene with George was funny. I thought at first he was facing Death Eaters, not angry family. Luna is always fun, too. I was surprised when Harry didn't rush to the rescue but in the end I was glad to see Ginny was able to deal with her problem without Harry. It also made sense of the titles of this and the previous chapter. As usual, I'll be waiting eagerly for your next update.
Author's Response: It was intended that you get the impression that George was in more trouble than he was. Glad you enjoyed it, and I'm glad I was able to get another chapter out this quickly. Hope the next one goes as smoothly. Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: Trucker Signed Date: 2014.05.07 - 11:04AM Title: Chapter 37: Loss of Innocence pt 2 - l'Arret Brusque
Great pacing and cutting between scenes!
Author's Response: Thanks! It was fun to write it that way.
Reviewer: Birlan Signed Date: 2014.05.07 - 10:06AM Title: Chapter 37: Loss of Innocence pt 2 - l'Arret Brusque
Another strong chapter---for some reason I don't usually pay much attention to chapter titles but "Loss of Innocence" was aptly named. For Demelza, for Ginny's actions and reaction at the end, and for another married Weasley sibling. I am not entirely sure if Fred's characterization of his past with Angelina to Hermione is believable or that she should be believing him but that's off topic. Luna and the fish was a great detail. Many things should be easier for wizards.
Thanks again for posting.
Author's Response: Thanks for the rating, and review. I'm glad you think the titles for 36 and 37 are appropriate - I try to have them make sense for the chapter, without giving away the plot points too much. Otherwise, i'd just number them and forget about it. :D
Reviewer: mdauben Signed Date: 2014.05.07 - 09:50AM Title: Chapter 37: Loss of Innocence pt 2 - l'Arret Brusque
It's great to see another chapter of your story so soon! The scene with George was funny. I thought at first he was facing Death Eaters, not angry family. Luna is always fun, too. I was surprised when Harry didn't rush to the rescue but in the end I was glad to see Ginny was able to deal with her problem without Harry. It also made sense of the titles of this and the previous chapter. As usual, I'll be waiting eagerly for your next update.
Author's Response: That first scene was intended to be a little confusing. It actually bothers my dear wife, because she feels that family shouldn't act like that. She's right, they shouldn't, but some families do act like this. Situations like George and Angelina's are where the term "shotgun wedding" comes from, after all. Although I suppose this is more of a "wand-point wedding."
I was planning a great Harry Potter rescue, but then I realized that with all the training Ginny has been going through, and the skills she has developed, she needs to be more than just the damsel in distress. She needs to be strong and capable, someone who can stand and work and fight right alongside her knight in shining armor, not just be his soft and squishy middle.
Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: Birlan Signed Date: 2014.05.07 - 07:53AM Title: Chapter 37: Loss of Innocence pt 2 - l'Arret Brusque
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Author's Response: Thanks for reading and rating!
Reviewer: Arnel Signed Date: 2014.05.07 - 07:26AM Title: Chapter 37: Loss of Innocence pt 2 - l'Arret Brusque
Oh, so glad Ginny is fine except for her fright and the guilt she's going to carry around for a while after nearly beheading her pursuer. Her actions were justified, since he was doing his level best to kill her. Harry will help her through this and they will both be stronger for it in the end.
Thanks for the glimpse of what's been going on with Ron, Luna, Demelza, Hermione, George, Fred, Angelina and Mrs. Weasley. It's good the Weasley family is growing again. Well done and thanks for updating so soon.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading! Yes, Ginny should be fine eventually. It was fun to put in some snippets about the others in the story.
Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2014.05.07 - 05:43AM Title: Chapter 37: Loss of Innocence pt 2 - l'Arret Brusque
Oh boy now Ginny has seen death and does not like the results of it...then again she is a weasley and they don't handle it very well it seems....kutgw
Author's Response: She'd seen death before, remember, in chapter 36 when Harry killed Demelza's captor/abuser. But you're right, this time, she was the one doing the killing, and that is a very different thing that simply witnessing it.
Thanks for reading!
Author's Response: Oh, and she'd seen Duncan kill a couple of people, too. So, really, this time it was doing the killing that is freaking her out.
