Reviews For One Blink
Reviewer: Ronald8472 Signed Date: 2018.01.22 - 01:25AM Title: Endings and Beginnings
Poor Teddy! No Bill+Flur means no Victory.
Reviewer: lalachoa Signed Date: 2009.09.26 - 11:34AM Title: Endings and Beginnings
Reviewer: jediprankster Signed Date: 2009.09.20 - 02:04AM Title: Endings and Beginnings
- If he did make it through this, she would not have what she wanted either. - I think you meant 'If he didn't make it...'
Reviewer: Alifromnm Signed Date: 2009.09.17 - 01:15PM Title: Endings and Beginnings
Wonderful! All the "blinks" were believeable. One of my favorite stories yet.
Reviewer: memasuzy Signed Date: 2009.09.16 - 10:23PM Title: Endings and Beginnings
This was beautifully done. I felt really sad for Teddy - without Bill & Fleur, there is no Victoire. You really did a very good job of showing us how one slight difference could have changed everything. I hope you will continue to write. Thank you for a lovely, romantic story,
Reviewer: Lazy Lazuli Signed Date: 2009.09.16 - 09:36PM Title: Endings and Beginnings
I KNEW IT!!!!!
Reviewer: bengpotter31 Signed Date: 2009.09.16 - 07:32PM Title: Endings and Beginnings
That was a great way to end the story. I'm glad Fred survived. Too bad Fleur died but I knew she wouldn't be happy living without Bill. It was a great sacrifice. I assume Bill is Harry's first born and James is the second born, instead of Albus. Too bad there's no Victoire to pair up with Teddy. I guess he won't be joining the Weasleys as a son-in-law instead of a surrogate as Harry's godson. It was a great story illustrating the Ripple Effect of changing one brief moment. Nice job. I hope to read another of your story's soon.
Reviewer: GoDons Signed Date: 2009.09.16 - 06:11PM Title: Endings and Beginnings
I'm not upset by the ending at all. Exactly what I thought, really, including the fact that Fleur was going to die. I felt you might do that, given that in this AU version of cannon, Bill was killed, too.
Reviewer: Ginny Guerra Signed Date: 2009.09.16 - 05:23PM Title: Endings and Beginnings
Reviewer: zeta_one Signed Date: 2009.09.16 - 04:42PM Title: Endings and Beginnings
Great AU! I do like the ripple effect. Thanks for sharing.
Reviewer: Birlan Signed Date: 2009.09.16 - 04:36PM Title: Endings and Beginnings
Nice endimg. Some karmic balance in Fred surviving and Fleur joining Bill.
Reviewer: knightsbridge Signed Date: 2009.09.05 - 01:50PM Title: The Calm Before...
Something about a great story...you get so caught up in reading, you forget to review or rate. This is one of those stories.
Reviewer: Ginny Guerra Signed Date: 2009.08.27 - 10:24PM Title: The Calm Before...
Reviewer: AlinnyPotter Signed Date: 2009.08.25 - 05:12PM Title: The Calm Before...
Oh man, I like how this is turning out! Update soon please (:
Reviewer: GoDons Signed Date: 2009.08.25 - 03:31AM Title: The Calm Before...
Ah, if only this conversation and scene had been in DH, eh? Then people wouldn't complain so much about the lack of H/G interaction. I know romance or one-to-one time between Harry and Ginny wasn't the major focus of the books for J K R, especially the last one, but I guess your version of the seventh book will more than suffice, albeit cautiously so as I'll say more once I've read the ending.
Reviewer: memasuzy Signed Date: 2009.08.25 - 12:35AM Title: The Calm Before...
I'm really enjoying this story. I like the conversation with Neville and Ginny and the image of Neville "channeling his inner-Hermione". I also like the way you depict the relationship between Harry and Ginny: The way they quietly sit and console each other without words (as opposed to Ron & Hermione who argue over everything). That is the kind of understanding I always thought their relationship had. He read her letter: all one hundred and two words, fifty times - the first day alone. This is exactly what I would expect Harry to do and I know Ginny would wait for him,
Reviewer: jediprankster Signed Date: 2009.08.25 - 12:12AM Title: The Calm Before...
This story continues to develop nicely. I've been enjoying it from the beginning. That was a nice little peak inside the halls of Hogwarts during this time period, but it raised a question. Maybe my memory is failing me (it has been a while since I read 'Deathly Hallows'), but weren't Muggleborns prohibited from attending Hogwarts once Voldemort had taken control? How did Dennis Creevey get to attend? Did you change that in your story, or did you forget about the Muggleborn Registration Commission? Either way, it is a fantastic story. Keep it up.
Reviewer: DebbieO Signed Date: 2009.07.25 - 10:31AM Title: A New Allegiance
This is a very interesting retelling. I like the idea that the smallest change can make a world of difference. I had been thinking about writing something with a similar root to it, but since you've already done it, I'll just keep reading yours. Great job. I want to slap a few characters and tell them to get a clue, but...that's normal for me. If it wasn't good writing, I wouldn't care how thick they are.
Reviewer: knightsbridge Signed Date: 2009.07.23 - 04:13AM Title: Godric's Hollow
Nothing's changed? Fleur can walk off to god knows where to kill DE's, and no one seems to remember why...and Ginny has to go home and be a good little girl....Blegh!
Reviewer: knightsbridge Signed Date: 2009.07.23 - 03:28AM Title: The Six Potters
Wow..you have angst down to an art-form.