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Reviewer: PhantomPhoenix Signed Date: 2009.01.29 - 08:39PM Title: It hasn't been your day, your week, your month, or even your year
OMG, I love that word, fop...it describes Phillipe...(or Raoul... ok, yes I am a PotO phanatic) perfectly! Ok, gonna keep reading, but yeah I had to say that.
PP
Author's Response: lol fop ... just keep reading, just keep reading ...
Reviewer: ginnyweasley777 Signed Date: 2009.01.28 - 03:49PM Title: It hasn't been your day, your week, your month, or even your year
very cute
Reviewer: lovewillalwayswin Signed Date: 2009.01.22 - 07:47PM Title: It hasn't been your day, your week, your month, or even your year
phillipe is a funny name great story by the way
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: Phoeness Signed Date: 2009.01.22 - 02:18PM Title: It hasn't been your day, your week, your month, or even your year
Oh oh ! George sees something Ginny and Harry don’t !! It’s so funny to see the reaction of all the Weasleys when these 2 arrive together, Ginny wearing her pyjamas and Harry’s jumper !
It’s a great chapter, I love how you describe Harry and Ginny’s strong friendship, and how they are clueless. I enjoy more and more this story ;) !
Author's Response: George is very perceptive indeed ;)
Reviewer: knightsbridge Signed Date: 2009.01.22 - 06:45AM Title: It hasn't been your day, your week, your month, or even your year
While I love the story, your A/N had me laughing almost as much as the humour in the chapter.
Yeah, I'm one of the idiots that actually READS the Authors Notes.
Darian
Author's Response: Well at least someone's reading the things ... :P I'm glad you love the story too though ... since that is why we're really here lol.
Reviewer: knightsbridge Signed Date: 2009.01.22 - 06:45AM Title: It hasn't been your day, your week, your month, or even your year
While I love the story, your A/N had me laughing almost as much as the humour in the chapter.
Yeah, I'm one of the idiots that actually READS the Authors Notes.
Darian
Reviewer: HGRHfan35 Signed Date: 2009.01.21 - 03:23AM Title: It hasn't been your day, your week, your month, or even your year
Kezz, that was pricelees. Two for the 'price' of one.
Humoristic as always, they act like a bantering married couple already and they don't even realise it but I'll bet that their family might catch up, or already have, to what's going on.
So Kezzie, tell me, are you going for the entire theme song on this? "I'll be there for you" will be the next one if I have to bet (which I won't). Was it on purpose that the mentioning of Susan's hyena laugh made me think of that horrible Janice that dated Chandler quite a few times. :D
Author's Response: Someone has indeed caught on. I haven't used the chorus until the end so, no, not the next chapter title lol. I think the Susan's hyena laugh was subconscious. I didn't realise it was Janice until someone else pointed it out! I adore Friends so ... yeah there are a few things in here that you may notice are linked. Most of the time I didn't do it on purpose it just happened. (Watch out for lobsters ...:P )
Reviewer: freshwater Signed Date: 2009.01.21 - 12:21AM Title: It hasn't been your day, your week, your month, or even your year
I'm amazed at how closely you've been able to connect your plot/action/dialogue to the song lyrics and yet it's not at all stilted or contrived.....very natural and nearly unnoticable. Well done!
Looking forward to ch.5......you SAID that one of them would begin to get a clue in ch. 5......
Author's Response: I did? I hope I was right ... thanks for the kudos on song integration :D I try!
Reviewer: hms42 Signed Date: 2009.01.20 - 11:01PM Title: It hasn't been your day, your week, your month, or even your year
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Reviewer: kingbobrules Signed Date: 2009.01.20 - 04:26PM Title: It hasn't been your day, your week, your month, or even your year
I almost didn't bother to read this fic, but I'm glad that I did. There is a certain gentle fluffy charm to it - not on the same level as Rebuilding Life by a long way, but there's something whimsicly amusing about it all the same.
Author's Response: Oh yeah, it's mega different to RL.
Reviewer: GREYWOLF Signed Date: 2009.01.20 - 02:14PM Title: It hasn't been your day, your week, your month, or even your year
'Rescuing a damsel' huh. Is that what the young people are calling it these days? Besides I like Frou-Frou.
Author's Response: Yep, it's the new and in 'thang' ... so they tell me ;)
Reviewer: DukeBrymin Signed Date: 2009.01.20 - 01:14PM Title: It hasn't been your day, your week, your month, or even your year
Which one is going to cave first? Granted, "first" just means two seconds before the other one.
Anyway, very fun, keep it up!
Author's Response: First ... hmmm that's a god question ...
Reviewer: Professor_Chris Signed Date: 2009.01.20 - 12:24PM Title: It hasn't been your day, your week, your month, or even your year
Another great chapter, I although I do think that Molly may be asking some interesting questions in the future, she isn't going to forget about that one regardless of what they said really happened.
Author's Response: You may find yourself surprised at my interpretation of Molly Weasley ...
Reviewer: Phx tears Signed Date: 2009.01.20 - 10:48AM Title: It hasn't been your day, your week, your month, or even your year
ok now you're just teasing us - get one of them all ruffled or something! ;)
I love how you paired teddy and ginny together - hilarious match!
Author's Response: One of them is ruffled - Ginny's covered in the things ... :P
Reviewer: KMACKD Signed Date: 2009.01.20 - 09:17AM Title: It hasn't been your day, your week, your month, or even your year
I just love the way this is going. You're really spot on with the dialog and characters. I hope you draw this out for quite awhile, not just to torture them, per se, but maybe tohave everyone else figure it out and, I dunno start making side bets on how and when they'll get a clue and kiss., and having a runnig sarcastic commentary going to help prod them along.
This chapter would also make, in some respects, a good precursor to when they finally get together. I can just see them both having a really hectic and lousy day. Maybe Ginny is beat up and bruised from Quidditch, with a black eye and messy hair, and Harry might be dirty and unshaven and even smelly from a long assignment and somehow they meet, I know it's totally corny. but they get together and it doesn't matter how bad they look on the outside, something clicks inside them and each one finally sees from inside of them that the other person is what they were looking for all along and that they were right in front of each and what dummies they were for not seeing it before.
You can tell that I've seen one too many old hollywood movies.. Anyway, it's great story however it plays out. The fundamental things apply, as time goes by. Heres looking at you kid.
Author's Response: Well it's 14 chapters long if that helps? ;)
