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Reviewer: Prof McGonagall Signed Date: 2009.05.16 - 01:43AM Title: You've burned your breakfast, so far ... things are goin' great

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Oh poor Harry, I just want to go an hug him!!!



Reviewer: Phoeness Signed Date: 2009.01.31 - 10:32AM Title: You've burned your breakfast, so far ... things are goin' great

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Sorry I’m a little late to review, but I caught up by reading all the last chapter this morning !
Oh seriously ! Can’t Ginny see Harry is falling for her ?? Is she blind ??
And I have the feeling that Harry doesn’t really know what he wants... I mean, he could do the first step but not...
Great chapter !!

Author's Response: Yes ... yes, Ginny is blind! :P Harry's sailing a river in Egypt ;)



Reviewer: ginnyweasley777 Signed Date: 2009.01.28 - 03:51PM Title: You've burned your breakfast, so far ... things are goin' great

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love the Hermione panacking parts - very funny. Glad I'm not eating that toast.

Author's Response: I think they threw the toast out! I hope so ... maybe Ron ate it anyway ...



Reviewer: Ella Signed Date: 2009.01.28 - 04:31AM Title: You've burned your breakfast, so far ... things are goin' great

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Kezza, the story is even better on reread! I still can't believe how amazingly fast all of these chapters flew out of you.

Now, I read that someone took issue with the fact that Ginny was drunk. While in certain circumstances this could be viewed as destructive behavior, I really don't think that having a few at a hen party is grounds for thinking she's a wastrel. I also don't like the fact that 1) the reviewer claimed that Ginny was going to hurt Harry badly, and 2) the amusing drunk should be rejected as a literary device because it promotes drug abuse. I forgot the part where alcohol is a drug (an illegal one). Arrest me! I love Jesus, but I drink a little.

I have said it before, and I will say it again. GREYWOLF needs to stick with his Bible for reading material. Or at least not constantly advertise the fact that he's a Puritan. Annoyyyyyyying.




Author's Response: I am also stunned at how fast these things just flew right outta me and onto the keyboard. Amazing ... heck even *I* am enjoying it on a re-read! LOL



Reviewer: WickedLoz Signed Date: 2009.01.27 - 05:16AM Title: You've burned your breakfast, so far ... things are goin' great

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Did you piss someone off on this site or something? The not-validated thing is getting a tad anoyinggggg!

Haha, I'm finding this story hilarious. Yes, poor Harry, but we know he'll get his happy ending eventually!

Ginny is interesting as not being in the know. Heheh, its probably for the best that Harry doesn't tell her what happened - being too sloshed to remember what you did that was so embarrassing is always for the best! (speaking from experience here... :P)

Author's Response: I'm not aware that I pissed anyone off *shrugs* There's just a backlog. I'm glad you are enjoying the story :D



Reviewer: GREYWOLF Signed Date: 2009.01.26 - 01:24PM Title: You've burned your breakfast, so far ... things are goin' great

Like other reviewers, I think you have Ginny a bit too clueless, but a bit of exaggeration for the sake of the story is OK.

I have a different overall take, however. Yes, Harry is going to be badly hurt by Ginny’s actions, even if it was inadvertent. But, it is also the direct result of her poor choice in getting herself drunk.

I know this is a fairly common scenario, the amusing drunk, but, we should totally reject this as a literary device because we do not want any suggestion whatever that drug abuse is acceptable.

Sorry, I’m a bit sensitive on this subject. A good friend’s daughter was killed by a drunk driver.


Author's Response: It's just supposed to be a piece of fluff.



Reviewer: quidditch Signed Date: 2009.01.26 - 12:03PM Title: You've burned your breakfast, so far ... things are goin' great

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this story made my day!
can't wait for the next chapter.
when will it be validated? :)



Author's Response: I have no idea when it will be validated, sorry. Glad you are enjoying the story.



Reviewer: HGRHfan35 Signed Date: 2009.01.26 - 06:17AM Title: You've burned your breakfast, so far ... things are goin' great

Just saw your page so I should have guessed looking at your userpic :D



Reviewer: HGRHfan35 Signed Date: 2009.01.26 - 05:42AM Title: You've burned your breakfast, so far ... things are goin' great

Kezz, either you don't live in the States or you are up in the middle of the night!?
Tell Ginny yourself, it's your story! And besides, my love life is even more dreadfull than theirs. Mine is non-existend! Beat that LOL.

Author's Response: I'm Australian. :D



Reviewer: Harrylovesginny Signed Date: 2009.01.26 - 04:47AM Title: You've burned your breakfast, so far ... things are goin' great

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You have got the right idea. if they hadnt been going out I think this is how they would shirt about each other. even conviding in each other with out realising that they were made for one another.

Author's Response: Anything is possible :D



Reviewer: valondon Signed Date: 2009.01.26 - 03:25AM Title: You've burned your breakfast, so far ... things are goin' great

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ugh this is frustrating get them together already

Author's Response: But ... but ... then where would my story go? ;)



Reviewer: HGRHfan35 Signed Date: 2009.01.26 - 02:25AM Title: You've burned your breakfast, so far ... things are goin' great

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Ouch, poor Harry, that has got to hurt! I feel so sad for him *tear trickles down chubby cheek*
Damn Ginny, stop being so tick and see what is right in front of you! You stupid woman.
Hermione......so hysterical in both ways!
Fantastic as always. Until next time, take care. C

Author's Response: Yeah, you tell that stupid Ginny person how it really is!



Reviewer: hms42 Signed Date: 2009.01.26 - 02:04AM Title: You've burned your breakfast, so far ... things are goin' great

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Reviewer: Phx tears Signed Date: 2009.01.26 - 02:01AM Title: You've burned your breakfast, so far ... things are goin' great

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awww ginny sounds so sad..

i want to cry for harry now - i can't believe how thick ginny is being. someone should knock some sense into her. poor bloke. will you give our hero a break?

good work.



Author's Response: You tell 'er ... :P



Reviewer: monty1 Signed Date: 2009.01.26 - 01:55AM Title: You've burned your breakfast, so far ... things are goin' great

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I'm loving this story, great work. I also agree "not validated" is horrible!

Author's Response: I am glad you enjoy! woot! Brace yourselves for another Not Validate before the end of the week. hmmm I wonder who I can bribe .... ;)



Reviewer: knightsbridge Signed Date: 2009.01.26 - 01:28AM Title: You've burned your breakfast, so far ... things are goin' great

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Just friends...for now

Author's Response: No, really, they are, I swear! ;)



Reviewer: KMACKD Signed Date: 2009.01.26 - 01:01AM Title: You've burned your breakfast, so far ... things are goin' great

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Did you make someone mad on the site? They really seem to be over doing the 'not validated' phrase for your story. They seem like great chapters to me, that should role right out onto the site.

Isn't it usually Harry that remains clueless for the longest time? This is really funny, especially when it's Harry that she's ranting to about how unfair the world is to her. He obviously is starting to have feelings for her and she can't even see that he is the love of her life.

Makes me wonder if Harry will just confront her eventually or just keep pulling away till she comes to confront him. Either way the story is coming along wonderfully. Can't wait for the next chapte.

Author's Response: There is just a backlog in validation atm. It is usually clueless Harry. I enjoyed writing a clueless Ginny for a change of pace. Don't worry she won't be clueless forever ;)



Reviewer: sagefemme Signed Date: 2009.01.26 - 12:14AM Title: You've burned your breakfast, so far ... things are goin' great

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It's official now, 'not validated' is my least favorite phrase in the language.

Ginny's clueless-ness in this chapter is just perfect. I like this slightly callused Ginny.

Author's Response: Not validated is becoming very evil indeed. Yeah I think she's callused enough without being too bitter. :)




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