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Reviewer: Dreaming Haven Signed Date: 2015.05.23 - 03:14AM Title: Chapter 13
Aww, stupid Harry should have just listened to her. Now he go bat boogie hexed. Lol
I would think he would realize Ginny isn't the type of girl who would mess with his feelings. After all she was the one who was hurt by his ignoring her before. She wouldn't want to do that to someone else, especially when she cares to them.
Anyway great story. I hope you update soon.
Reviewer: GREYWOLF Signed Date: 2015.05.21 - 12:12PM Title: Chapter 13
Well, I am glad to see that Ron has calmed down, as you know I thought his response was exaggerated a bit.(You like drama, I take it).
I was very glad to see that Ginny has the confidence to initiate physical affection with Harry, but I thought Harry's angry response decidedly odd. He had just been considering whether they would be able to have an intimate physical relationship, when Ginny comes down and kisses him. Therefore Harry's response did not seem to make sense.
I saw your response to Tom Bombedil, so I understand your intention, that Harry's insecurity caused his response. But thought the sudden reversal was too abrupt. This part of the chapter needs a bit more work to clarify the situation, in my opinion. Otherwise a good chapter.
Author's Response: I am sorry the chapter er didn't ring true for you. Lesley.
Reviewer: TomBombadil Signed Date: 2015.05.21 - 12:23AM Title: Chapter 13
Hard to believe Harry could become a bigger douche than Ron! Oh, well, I have little doubt that Ginny will straighten him out!
Author's Response: You're equating Harry's moment of insecurity over the state of Ginny's true feelings for him with Ron's aggression and anger? A bit harsh I think. After all, Ginny has never told Harry she loves him; in fact, she has pretty much gone out of her way to hold herself aloof from him even after she agreed to marry him. Granted, Harry hasn't expressed his true feelings in words either, but he has consistently shown in his actions that he truly cares for both Ginny and her daughter. Things were going well with their little interlude, but Harry's insecurities rushed to the fore when he realised Ginny had overheard him and Hermione discussing her. He thinks she is feeling sorry for him and that she feels she has to make an effort to show her feelings are engaged. Poor Harry is the one being lambasted left and right when he is the one who has been open and affectionate right from the start. I can understand his insecurity, but then, I am the author. Lesley.
Reviewer: carolyn jinn Signed Date: 2015.05.20 - 09:15PM Title: Chapter 13
Good chapter. Just wish they would take the time to listen to each other instead of presuming they know what the other is thinking.
Looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: Yes, listening would be a big step in the right direction. Thanks for the review. Lesley
Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2015.05.20 - 05:19PM Title: Chapter 13
Now does Ginny remember how to do said curse....something tells me Harry is in for a world of hurt......kutgw
Author's Response: Ginny hasn't got amnesia. She remembers everything she learned at Hogwarts, she is just rusty with her execution. Don't forget, she is using Harry's powerful wand. Thanks for the review. Lesley
Reviewer: Arnel Signed Date: 2015.05.20 - 01:06AM Title: Chapter 13
Uh oh... what a way to ruin a nice, romantic interlude. Harry's stepped in it now and Ginny's not pleased at all. I just hope nothing horrible will happen and that the bats will just be huge.
You did a nice job of the conversation between Ron and Harry. While Ron is still a bit of an idiot, I can't blame him for wanting to show his brother protectiveness when it comes to his sister. However, I'm glad Hermione came when she did and eventually took him home.
Overall, a very nice chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you for the review. Glad you're still enjoying the story and that you think Ron has redeemed himself a little. Lesley
Reviewer: ginnyweasley777 Signed Date: 2015.05.19 - 11:08AM Title: Chapter 13
Super chapter, I think this story is brilliant
I would say it's mean of you to leave the cliffhanger there, but I've been reading on the other site
Hope you update again soon :)
Author's Response: Thanks for the review., It's a compliment that you are so anxious for the next chapter, you go to the other site to read it. The next chapter will be up here very soon; I am formatting it now. :). Lesley
