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Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2017.01.22 - 08:45PM Title: Chapter 5, Weasleys Happen

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Enjoying this story so much! Will Harry be attending Hogwarts or Beauxbatons? I am extremely curious!

Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying it!



Reviewer: Gin110881 Signed Date: 2016.11.16 - 04:12AM Title: Chapter 5, Weasleys Happen

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Ah, finally, Lucius's plan why he kidnapped Ginny has been revealed. I'd suspected that he wanted to foist Ginny on the Weasley's, and I was pretty curious why.

It was a very interesting summary of the family life of the Weasley’s over the years.
The prank that Bill pulled on Dumbledore was splendid. I'd reckoned that Bill would find and examine Dumbledore's monitoring tools for Harry on this occasion. Unfortunately (or fortunately?), it didn't happen.

Author's Response: Thank you!



Reviewer: potterfan2008 Signed Date: 2010.04.14 - 09:35AM Title: Chapter 5, Weasleys Happen

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I loved watching the Weasleys grow up. Bill always seemed like a great older brother!

Author's Response: He would have had to be, I think.



Reviewer: Comet Moon Signed Date: 2009.10.18 - 01:13AM Title: Chapter 5, Weasleys Happen

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Ok, so I'm rereading the whole story.

You know, you might want to add a diversionary charm that Lucius cast of Ginny that would hide her. Other wise it was likely that a magical child would have been found.

Hogwarts is acomin'

Hmmm, wonder how Harry feels to going to pretty sticks?

Ja ne

JIm

Author's Response: I've always loved the name of Beauxbatons, although JKR probably meant it to be "beautiful wands". Ginny wasn't left alone for very long before she was found, so I don't think a diversionary charm was really necessary. Thanks for reviewing again.



Reviewer: HGRHfan35 Signed Date: 2009.05.26 - 02:58PM Title: Chapter 5, Weasleys Happen

Harry in BeauxBaton's blue/gray! I was already thinking up a banner with Harry in those coulors. :D

Ron: I think Ron could become his own person given the chance. Hermione could be a good influence on him but they met once due to the presence of Harry but now Ginny's there so what to do.
I do hope that you'll give him a chance.

Percy could be a so much better person if someone, other than Bill, would take the time to see what he is about and would listen to him because being family means listening to eachother. Wether it's about Quidditch, Pranks, Dragon, Eckeltrikety, Tombraiding or the bottom thickness of Cauldrons.

If I'd make a banner, how far will this story go. all the years?

Let's see where Harry's going because he could even be coming to Hogwarts during the Tri-Wizard Tournament where his sister Fleur would star.

hinthintnudgenudge? LOL


Author's Response: Hmmm, how much to answer without spoiling the future plot. . . Harry at Beauxbatons--most probably will happen. Ron--There's a possibility of him going either way. I think he'll be a good guy, once he matures--I've always seen that at his major problem. So perhaps in a couple of years. Percy---I still don't know what to do about him. I'll think about whether he'll fit in to this story, and if not, maybe in my Making of a King series. I know this will go up through year 4, with the Tri-Wizard tournament playing a huge role. I don't know about 5, 6, and 7, although it would be fun to write. And your comments about Harry coming to Hogwarts because his sister will be entering the tournament are VERY INTERESTING (hint, hint). Thanks! And I'd love to see a banner. . .



Reviewer: HGRHfan35 Signed Date: 2009.05.26 - 07:20AM Title: Chapter 5, Weasleys Happen

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Hi Robert,

Again, a very pleasurable chapter to read.
The idea that Lucius Malfoy could have been a brother in law to Giselle was quite shocking but also good to know he didn't get there because she loathed him, so does his wife for that matter.
Knowing that Arthur is much better of, family and love wise that is, is much more fun to think about.
I absolutely loved your description of the Weasleys and their decade of family love and smiled all the way through it. I guess next chapter would be Harry's turn?

I must also compliment you on your usage of timelines because I couldn't find any mistakes in it as I have in others. Well done.

I do sometimes feel sorry for Percy and Ron. Percy is so serious and studious and that is fine but he just doesn't seem to fit the group of Weasleys and therefore is being left on his own by his sibblings because they are not interested in his doings. He must surely miss Bill a lot and I think that his own attitude and the way his sibblings act towards him came a long way in driving him toward the point where he left the family in canon. I hope yours might turn out differently? You never know :D

Ron seems lonely at times because he now shares a birthday with Ginny (no lime-light for Ron) and he's getting the idea in his head quite early on that he seems to be less important than his other sibblings because they excel in their own things and he doesn't know how to be just him, just Ron, who is a great person in his own right. It struck me in your last sentence *~*But perhaps the most portentous happening of all, was that this fall was when Ginny started Hogwarts.*~* So what about Ron, what is he, chopped liver? He's going to Hogwarts as well.

Harry, mon ami, will he be attending Hogwarts or will he attend BeauxBatons (Harry in a light blue,airy BB uniform? LOL). Hope to read that in the next chapter of this fabulous story.

Gods, I yakked away quite a bit didn't I. I seem to have trouble at keeping it short
Until next time, take care. C

Author's Response: Hi again, Thanks so much for your wonderful review--it's such a happifying thing to know people are enjoying my story enough to respond to it. I really enjoyed watching the Weasleys grow up through those years--it was fun to see their individual personalities start to come out, and start to make them the person they would become. To be honest, I'm not sure how Percy will turn out. I've got most of the brothers' futures in mind, but Percy has normally been somewhat of a non-entity in my mind, so his future is more nebulous than the others'. Ron, on the other hand, is pretty clear in my mind, and I'm somewhat sorry for him. I can't imagine him being able to excel by himself, and with Ginny being in his year, and Ron already acting like a prat, I think it'll be hard on him. It'll be interesting to see what happens as the years pass. Next chapter is, of course, Harry, and we'll get to see where he attends school, although you'll probably have to wait until the chapter after that to see the various reactions to his final destination (which I'm not saying--at least, I don't think I'm saying--maybe I said it before?). Thanks again for taking the time to review, I look forward to your comments!



Reviewer: Bethina Signed Date: 2009.05.25 - 11:17PM Title: Chapter 5, Weasleys Happen

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Hmmm...Will anyone notice that Harry doesn't show up to Hogwarts? Interesting story. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Author's Response: Ah, good question. Some time in the next couple of chapters we should see the consternation at Hogwarts. Thanks for reviewing!



Reviewer: hms42 Signed Date: 2009.05.25 - 06:11PM Title: Chapter 5, Weasleys Happen

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Reviewer: seekers_destiny Signed Date: 2009.05.25 - 05:37PM Title: Chapter 5, Weasleys Happen

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It isn't easy to write a story that keeps jumping forward in time and still tell a satisying story (I know from personal experience). You really pulled it off by adding some interesting background material that JKR never brought out. Top Marks!

By the way, I am anxious to see more. No pressure or anything. :-)

Author's Response: Thanks! I really appreciate your kinds words. It _was_ hard to keep interest in the 8 years that needed to pass, and I'm glad that, in your opinion, I succeeded.



Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2009.05.25 - 03:20PM Title: Chapter 5, Weasleys Happen

well i have to say this is a fun story so far and nice to see that ginny still took even with not being birthed by molly...then again harry will be different as well...kutgw

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing--I'm glad you're enjoying it.



Reviewer: LeprechaunJV Signed Date: 2009.05.25 - 02:11PM Title: Chapter 5, Weasleys Happen

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Author's Response: Thanks!




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