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Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2017.01.25 - 06:29AM Title: Chapter 12, The Next Day

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Interesting conversation. I guess I am a bit surprised that the whole Mate situation hasn't been discussed, and that they talked about Fluer being Veela, but not Harry. I guess I am just eager!

Author's Response: Well, they really do have a lot to discuss, it'll take awhile to get everything out.



Reviewer: Gin110881 Signed Date: 2016.11.18 - 07:25AM Title: Chapter 12, The Next Day

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Ever since their first meeting, the story has captivated me so much that I have completely forgotten to take notes. That's the reason why my reviews have been a bit short since then. I'm sorry. On the other hand, this is also a praise, isn't it?
... oh, and now I'd almost forgot: many thanks for another wonderful chapter!

Author's Response: That's high praise indeed, thanks!



Reviewer: hgromance Signed Date: 2011.01.13 - 05:25AM Title: Chapter 12, The Next Day

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just loved the sparkling reference with Cedric. I got a good chuckle out of it. I'm glad Harry and Ginny met while THIS age instead of being younger. I'm curious to know if Harry will ever learn of his true identity and how that will come about.

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked Cedric-not too many people have commented on it, so it's nice to get feedback.



Reviewer: Comet Moon Signed Date: 2010.12.27 - 02:20PM Title: Chapter 12, The Next Day

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Sappy harry.

Must be the french connection.

Ouch, reminds me of a joke on the best lover in the world, but it wasn't a frenchman.

Bit much for this site.

Good show old boy.

Hope you enjoyed your christmas


Ja ne

JIm

Author's Response: Yeah, Harry's in love, and not afraid to act sappy because of it.



Reviewer: jojo99 Signed Date: 2010.12.22 - 05:43AM Title: Chapter 12, The Next Day

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love the comment about Cedric's hair and the glitter. you had me laughing for quite a while.

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it.



Reviewer: aragrn Signed Date: 2010.12.09 - 12:26AM Title: Chapter 12, The Next Day

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I love this story-Just wish it was updated quicker-

Author's Response: So do I. And thanks!



Reviewer: potterfan2008 Signed Date: 2010.12.08 - 07:39PM Title: Chapter 12, The Next Day

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Another great chapter! I love the relationship between Harry and Fleur, it is very sweet. The comment about the glittery skin was great!

Author's Response: Thanks! I like to think of Harry and Fleur getting on much better than did I and my sister. . .



Reviewer: dshadel Signed Date: 2010.12.08 - 05:36PM Title: Chapter 12, The Next Day

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Great chapter, im glad to see a new one for this story. Can't wait for the next update

Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it!



Reviewer: foxfire23 Signed Date: 2010.12.07 - 11:31PM Title: Chapter 12, The Next Day

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I reviewed this on ff...came back to this site to nominate you for the trinket

Good luck...

Fox

Author's Response: Thanks! That's very thoughtful of you.



Reviewer: Seritha Signed Date: 2010.12.07 - 10:21PM Title: Chapter 12, The Next Day

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AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH HHH do i really have to say anything else?

Author's Response: THAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA AAAAANNNNNNKKKSSS!!!



Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2010.12.07 - 09:07PM Title: Chapter 12, The Next Day

Wel I think they'll are more into talking to one other then they would have been and now they'll know more about each other and can work on mo friendships...kutgw

Author's Response: Yeah, talking is always good, especially if you find yourself head-over-heels in love.



Reviewer: Jorgie Signed Date: 2010.12.07 - 08:04PM Title: Chapter 12, The Next Day

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I love this story and wish that it could be updated more often, though I rather have it well written than rushed just to get it posted. Great job on keeping charcters real and the story line moving and coming together. I look forward to the next chapter.

Author's Response: I wish I had more time to write--I don't like taking so long between chapters, either. Thanks!



Reviewer: seekers_destiny Signed Date: 2010.12.07 - 06:36PM Title: Chapter 12, The Next Day

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Cedric glittering - cute. You even managed to make fun of his hair. Hopefully Robert Pattinson is too busy to see this and hunt you down. ;-)

Although I looked back on this chapter and realized not a whole lot had happened, I still enjoyed it. Things don't always have to be as frenetic as the HP movies after all.

erratum:
Text burst out laughing
You usually call him Tex...

Author's Response: You're only the second person to comment on that--maybe I was too subtle. . . You're right--nothing too major happened, except for some needed exposition and advancements in relationships. The next chapter should have more "action". And thanks for the typo-checking. It's amazing what still slips through.



Reviewer: hushpuppy22 Signed Date: 2010.12.07 - 05:57PM Title: Chapter 12, The Next Day

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Reviewer: Ginny Guerra Signed Date: 2010.12.07 - 03:35PM Title: Chapter 12, The Next Day

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Interesting Development.

Author's Response: I'm glad you think so.



Reviewer: HGRHfan35 Signed Date: 2010.12.07 - 02:43PM Title: Chapter 12, The Next Day

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Dear Bob,
An excellent chapter as always :) and I love that you keep alternating between pov's. It does seem a bit slow but that probably has its reasons.

Not much going on but it is clear to me that you are trying to establish interactions/friendships between the characters and are trying to develop them. Make them more close. I like that.

Fleur....still ♥ her and I'm looking forward to the future where she will meet Bill, hope she'll fall hard! :D

Hugzzzzzz. C



Author's Response: Hi Collinda! I was hoping to hear from you! I think this chapter is a little slower-paced because it was originally part of a much longer section that needed to be broken up. But I also wanted to show some of the relationships, and give a good base for some things in the future. If I could only figure out who Luna wants. . .



Reviewer: Aragorn Signed Date: 2010.12.07 - 01:04PM Title: Chapter 12, The Next Day

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Just caught up on the whole story so far...and am really enjoying it. A nice AU...

Thank you.

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you're enjoying it!



Reviewer: bridgetkelly Signed Date: 2010.12.07 - 11:54AM Title: Chapter 12, The Next Day

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Very fun. I'm excited to see how the truth will come out. Thanks. B

Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying it!



Reviewer: LeprechaunJV Signed Date: 2010.12.07 - 11:37AM Title: Chapter 12, The Next Day

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No Review

Author's Response: Thanks!



Reviewer: Vlk Signed Date: 2010.12.07 - 07:16AM Title: Chapter 12, The Next Day

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Finally. I thought that it remains unfinished.
amazing.

Author's Response: Nope--none of my stories are abandoned--it just takes awhile to carve out writing time.




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