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Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2017.01.26 - 05:33PM Title: Chapter 15, Sisterly Conversations

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Oh, what a wonderful chapter! I am literally crying and must move on quickly to the next. Well done!

Author's Response: That's high praise indeed, thanks!



Reviewer: Gin110881 Signed Date: 2016.11.18 - 08:35AM Title: Chapter 15, Sisterly Conversations

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Ah finally, Ginny's Veela background has been revealed, and it is Fleur's turn to have "The veela talk" with her sister. I wonder how everybody will take the news. However, I think that it'll be the hardest for Molly to deal with this revelation.

Author's Response: I like a good Ginny/Fleur sisterhood--canon Ginny didn't give Fleur much of a chance.



Reviewer: potterfan2008 Signed Date: 2014.02.01 - 07:56PM Title: Chapter 15, Sisterly Conversations

Great chapter. Hermione is a bit strident - she's always thinking the worst in people. Twice in this chapter her first question was if someone attacked her. I really can't see her and Neville together - I mean poor Neville, she'd walk all over him. She really needs someone she can respect, who she would see as her equal.

Author's Response: I think Neville has a shot with Hermione--they've been friends for quite some time, and while he's usually in the back, perhaps this year he's been able to change enough to really come into his own. Perhaps we'll see that happen.



Reviewer: Lord Jawblinneron Signed Date: 2011.08.05 - 11:16AM Title: Chapter 15, Sisterly Conversations

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And here presents the ramifications of what I said in my previous review: Hermione, like Ron, (and the only similarity between them) can not keep her mouth shut.

I really like the pairings you chose, they are similar to what I thought would be the pairings since the first book (Harry/Ginny, Hermione/Neville, Ron/Rosy Palm)

I'd like to note that this is the first story that I have read that I wasn't able to find any spelling or grammatical errors while reading though I did notice that in chapter 9 you said that Hermione did not attend the World Cup, but in chapter 12 she mentions seeing the Veela at the World Cup.

I am looking forward to your next update of this story,
Will

Author's Response: I've often thought that Hermione could do a lot better than Ron. I have read some stories where Ron actually matures into a good match for her, but that's rather rare. My betas will be happy that you didn't find spelling/grammar issues--we work really hard on that. Sometimes we miss plot continuity issues, as you mentioned. Now I have to go back and see if I can fix the World Cup issue. . . I think it'd be easier if I wrote the whole story out ahead of time, rather than just individual sections. We'll see, I guess. Thanks again for commenting!

Author's Response: Oh, and I fixed Chapter 12. Thanks again for pointing it out!



Reviewer: matthunt101 Signed Date: 2011.07.18 - 01:41PM Title: Chapter 15, Sisterly Conversations

This is excellent!!! Hope you keep up the good work!!! Can't wait to find out what happens next!!!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you're enjoying it.



Reviewer: Jewels Signed Date: 2011.07.10 - 04:33PM Title: Chapter 15, Sisterly Conversations

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I'm very much enjoying this story. Creative and original concept, the characters interact well and a nice job of incorporating familiar scenes with the new plots. Definately looking forward to your next update. Thanks for writing!

Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you're liking it!



Reviewer: paradise31 Signed Date: 2011.06.29 - 07:37PM Title: Chapter 15, Sisterly Conversations

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What a great story. I can't wait to find out what happens when Ginny wakes up.

Author's Response: I'm looking forward to it also!



Reviewer: Seritha Signed Date: 2011.05.10 - 07:53PM Title: Chapter 15, Sisterly Conversations

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so this is the first time i read this chapter mainly because i have only been out of boot camp for about four days but alas i am at the library and got the chance to get on the internet and lo nad behold the next chapter and it is now making me want more. Awesome as always and am dying to read more!

Author's Response: Thanks for reading--and congrats for finishing boot camp! That is, if you really did finish, and aren't just on a short leave. You have my admiration. Thanks!



Reviewer: sark Signed Date: 2011.05.05 - 08:50PM Title: Chapter 15, Sisterly Conversations

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I like this story a lot, please continue sharing, thanks.

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you're enjoying it.



Reviewer: Ginny Guerra Signed Date: 2011.04.07 - 09:05PM Title: Chapter 15, Sisterly Conversations

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I was wondering why Harry would have any Veela traits...

Update soon, please!

Author's Response: Did you get your question answered? He has some Veela traits because back in his ancestry there was a Veela.



Reviewer: seekers_destiny Signed Date: 2011.04.06 - 08:59PM Title: Chapter 15, Sisterly Conversations

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Time for another revelation! I was kind of wondering when it would come but the speed of it surprised me. Poor Ginny though - if finding out she was part veela made her faint, what will finding out she is a Delacour (fortunately Harry really isn't) do?

Back to the beginning then. I thought that Fleur was endangering her 'good big sister' image with her initial antics but it was funny anyway. There wasn't much unexpected for the reader though. I was slightly surprised that Ginny was unaware of her veela heritage (the fireballs should have been a good clue). I had begun to suspect it though from her reactions in previous chapters.

Author's Response: Thanks for the nice review--it's good to get feedback like that. Yeah, the revelations are kind of coming thick and fast, but it felt right to me to have those things happen like that. There's a reason for Ginny's being unaware of her Veela-itude, but we haven't found it out yet, although there have been some clues. Anyway, thanks again!



Reviewer: hot48cricket Signed Date: 2011.04.06 - 06:20PM Title: Chapter 15, Sisterly Conversations

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Oh, please say it wont be so long for another update!!!! This was a terrific chapter!!

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it, and it shouldn't be so long for the next one. Real Life isn't interfering as much right now.



Reviewer: GinnySavesHarry1998 Signed Date: 2011.04.06 - 03:24PM Title: Chapter 15, Sisterly Conversations

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And there it is! :-) I was wondering when the connection would be discovered. Interesting that Madame Pomfrey mentioned Lily Evans. I wonder if Harry caught that part (if he's even aware that was his Mom's maiden name) or if he was too wrapped up in the part about Pomfrey knowing Ginny was a veela.

Also, glad to see you back. It's been awhile since you updated.

Author's Response: I guess we'll have to wait and see whether Harry noticed--although it would be rather hard to pay attention to anything else, right?



Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2011.04.06 - 01:28PM Title: Chapter 15, Sisterly Conversations

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All I can say is "Waiting for more!".

Author's Response: On tenterhooks?



Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2011.04.06 - 12:25PM Title: Chapter 15, Sisterly Conversations

and the hits just keep on coming....kutgw

Author's Response: Thanks!



Reviewer: hgromance Signed Date: 2011.04.06 - 12:04PM Title: Chapter 15, Sisterly Conversations

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oh boy. we're about to get into somewhat ickiness here. maybe not ickiness, but you get my meaning I hope. Ginny originally being Madeline and is the Mate of Harry, having been adopted by Madeline's parents, the whole adopted sib thing. glad to see another chapter and can't wait for the next.

Author's Response: Ickiness? Well, it all depends on the adoptions now, doesn't it?



Reviewer: Comet Moon Signed Date: 2011.04.06 - 11:05AM Title: Chapter 15, Sisterly Conversations

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Awww, Harrry's brood will be Deleclour blood.

This about confirms the belief for me that a powerful and subtle confusios charm on her identity was cast on Ginny.

She'll always be Ginevra Deleclour Weasley to me.


LFTM


Ja ne

JIm

Author's Response: Very interesting supposition--we'll have to see whether you were right or not.



Reviewer: sacrutchfield Signed Date: 2011.04.06 - 07:52AM Title: Chapter 15, Sisterly Conversations

nooooooooooooooooooooooooo, that is not cool to leave us hanging like that. but can not wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response: As a reader, I detest cliff-hangers. As a writer, I love them. Quite a dichotomy.



Reviewer: HP18 Signed Date: 2011.04.06 - 03:29AM Title: Chapter 15, Sisterly Conversations

nice chapter I like that Ginny doesn't hat Fleur this time

Author's Response: Yeah, it's good to see Ginny giving Fleur a chance.



Reviewer: lemsv Signed Date: 2011.04.06 - 03:20AM Title: Chapter 15, Sisterly Conversations

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I nearly forgot about this story! But I am glad to read an update. The moment of truth is near. So that does make Harry and Ginny brother and sister? ;-)

Author's Response: Forgot? Oh, how sad. I know it takes me awhile to post, but it's definitely not abandoned. Are they brother and sister? Well, Ginny's been blood adopted by the Weasleys, so there's at least that much difference. . .




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