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Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2017.01.26 - 05:57PM Title: Chapter 16, Including The Gratuitous Veela At The Cup, How Many Veela Were There?

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Well, even though Ginny has a definite point, fortunately Harry is not actually her brother. Still, this is an overwhelming situation, and I have no doubt the sparks are about to fly, figuratively and perhaps even literally!

Author's Response: Of course, no one actually answered the question in this chapter's title...



Reviewer: Gin110881 Signed Date: 2016.11.18 - 09:16AM Title: Chapter 16, Including The Gratuitous Veela At The Cup, How Many Veela Were There?

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Considering the earth shattering revelations made on such a big family gathering it ended up quite peaceful. Well, maybe Ron's absence is one of the reasons, lol.
Well done! Thank you!

Author's Response: Yes, Ron's having been absent was rather helpful, wasn't it?



Reviewer: potterfan2008 Signed Date: 2014.02.01 - 08:05PM Title: Chapter 16, Including The Gratuitous Veela At The Cup, How Many Veela Were There?

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Interesting - can't wait to see everyone's reactions.

Author's Response: I hope they matched your desires.



Reviewer: Jewels Signed Date: 2012.05.28 - 04:56PM Title: Chapter 16, Including The Gratuitous Veela At The Cup, How Many Veela Were There?

Argh! You're doing this to torture us, aren't you...lol? 9 months...9 long agonizing months. I read this story so many times since the last update was given, but I need more. Okay, all joking aside I know you've got your reasons for the long delay and that you've said before you won't abandon the story, but would it be possibly to give a vague timeframe of when we might be able to expect the next chapter? The story rocks and your loyal readers are patiently (or anxiously in my case) waiting for more.

Btw this was not meant to sound nagging or complaining just to try to offer you some motivation. Hopefully it works:)

Good luck!

Author's Response: Honestly, I'm not doing it to torture anyone--I fully intend to bump this up in my priority list, so, although I'm not promising anything, I'm going to try to get a significant number of chapters ready in the not-too-distant future. And thanks for the motivation!



Reviewer: Albus H Potter Signed Date: 2012.05.15 - 12:18PM Title: Chapter 16, Including The Gratuitous Veela At The Cup, How Many Veela Were There?

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Hmm, I`m doing now somthing what I usually don`t. Great story, very orginnal plot.
Could you said if you will continuing this story or its abandonem?

Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying the story. It has not been abandoned, and never will be, thanks for asking!



Reviewer: DracosPhantom Signed Date: 2012.02.11 - 07:05PM Title: Chapter 16, Including The Gratuitous Veela At The Cup, How Many Veela Were There?

I LOVE this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Hurry up and finish it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'm dying to know what happens!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you're enjoying it. And it shouldn't be too horrendously much longer for the next chapter.



Reviewer: Phoenix Signed Date: 2012.01.27 - 06:40AM Title: Chapter 16, Including The Gratuitous Veela At The Cup, How Many Veela Were There?

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What can I say, other than iris is simply the best WIP I have ever had the fortune to come across and one of my top 3 fics ever. I don't often leave reviews, but I love this story and hopefully, while it is no much, this review will give you just that bit more encouragement to continue this fantastic story. Thanks for this amazing creation, and hopefully there is more to come in the (hopefully) near future!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your kind words. And yes, they really do help motivate me to write faster!



Reviewer: alyssa_S Signed Date: 2011.11.06 - 06:42PM Title: Chapter 16, Including The Gratuitous Veela At The Cup, How Many Veela Were There?

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Hi,
Great chapter! I wonder what will happen next. Is an update on the way soon?
A lot happened in this chapter... i can't wait to see the reactions of Molly and Arthur to the news about their daughter and Harry.
This is a great story with a plot line which i really have not seen before, but trully do enjoy.

Author's Response: I'm so glad you're enjoying it, thank you! Yes, hopefully there will be more soon, now that the Christmas season is over.



Reviewer: ProfessorBinns79 Signed Date: 2011.09.13 - 02:29PM Title: Chapter 16, Including The Gratuitous Veela At The Cup, How Many Veela Were There?

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I'm pretty new to the fanfiction world (been reading since DH2 came out), and you're one of the best authors I've found so far (right up there with the likes of Northumbrian!). After reading all of your one-shots, missing moments, and short stories, the beginning of this one surprised me. It didn't seem like your normal style (although I guess it is similar to Harry and the Chocolate Factory), but after you got your premise all set up I came to love this story. Reading all of this story that exists so far and having to stop at this point, however, is agonizing! I kind of wish this whole reveal was a single chapter. As someone who enjoys all of your work, may I make a reader request? Please focus on this story! I can wait forever for more one-shots, but I'd rather wait less for more of this.

Again, I really appreciate your work, so thank you!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your kind comments. It's always nice to know that my readers appreciate my work. Looking back on Birds, there are a few things I would do differently if I had to do it again. Hopefully I can take those lessons and apply them to my other stories in the future. In particular, the setup for Birds took much too long--I can see many ways that I could have gotten the action moving sooner. And that last chapter was a real pain--one of the reasons why it's as short as it is. And, I promise that I won't ever abandon Birds--it might take a little time to get the chapters written, but I like my people too much to let them languish for too long. Thanks again for reading!



Reviewer: Seritha Signed Date: 2011.08.31 - 07:05AM Title: Chapter 16, Including The Gratuitous Veela At The Cup, How Many Veela Were There?

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that was awesome I cant wait to read more!

Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you're enjoying it!



Reviewer: writetress Signed Date: 2011.08.29 - 07:13PM Title: Chapter 16, Including The Gratuitous Veela At The Cup, How Many Veela Were There?

Can I just say I love this? Because I do, like a Veela loves their Mate. I'm greatly enjoying the history of Veelas and
this different universe you came up with. I adore the fact that no matter which way they grew up, Harry and Gin were
always meant for each other. So, thank you for writing it! :) I'll wait for the next chapter now. Au Revoir!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm very glad you're enjoying the story. And one of my prime beliefs was stated best by my wife, as we made Harry Potter t-shirts for Half-Blood Prince: "No matter the universe, world, or weather, Harry and Ginny belong together."



Reviewer: dshadel Signed Date: 2011.08.19 - 08:12PM Title: Chapter 16, Including The Gratuitous Veela At The Cup, How Many Veela Were There?

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loved it, great ending now i realy can't wait for the next chapter

Author's Response: Thanks!



Reviewer: Truthrowan Signed Date: 2011.08.12 - 04:13AM Title: Chapter 16, Including The Gratuitous Veela At The Cup, How Many Veela Were There?

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So glad to have an update, I was afraid this story had been abandoned. Please tell me the next won't take quite so long?

Author's Response: Nope, definitely not abandoned. Just suffering from the writer having a real life. I hope it doesn't take too long, but we'll just have to see.



Reviewer: Ginny Guerra Signed Date: 2011.08.11 - 06:59PM Title: Chapter 16, Including The Gratuitous Veela At The Cup, How Many Veela Were There?

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Good thing Harry's adopted, so there's no problem there.
Please update soon!

Author's Response: Yes, and now Ginny just needs to be reminded of that important fact. Thanks!



Reviewer: jediprankster Signed Date: 2011.08.11 - 06:32PM Title: Chapter 16, Including The Gratuitous Veela At The Cup, How Many Veela Were There?

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While I don't recognize the title of the chapter as being an allusion to a movie, I do find the end of the chapter to be similar to the film, 'Say It Isn't So.' A movie that I thought was rather funny.

As for the chapter itself: I thought it was great.

Perkins with the Sea Monkeys was funny, but now I want to know what Arthur was working with when Perkins burst into the room.

I suppose that in all the excitement and emotion of the moment, Ginny has forgotten that Harry is adopted as well, and therefore NOT her brother.

I can't wait to see how this resolves.

Author's Response: Arthur, poor guy, didn't tell me what he was demonstrating. Sometimes I wished he'd be a little bit less quiet, you know? Ah well.



Reviewer: harryluvsginny Signed Date: 2011.08.11 - 06:14PM Title: Chapter 16, Including The Gratuitous Veela At The Cup, How Many Veela Were There?

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Well this was quite and eventful chapter. This was really lovely though. I can't wait for the next update!

Author's Response: Glad you liked it, thanks!



Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2011.08.11 - 04:38PM Title: Chapter 16, Including The Gratuitous Veela At The Cup, How Many Veela Were There?

im not sure what u had there before but if it means a long wait to make it work right and this seems to work right than thats ok with me....life is not perfect and if it takes time to work it out then do it for the good of the story....kutgw

Author's Response: Thanks for the support--I'd rather make a good story than a quick story. Although, I always hope to be able to write faster. . .



Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2011.08.11 - 01:04PM Title: Chapter 16, Including The Gratuitous Veela At The Cup, How Many Veela Were There?

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A fascinating, if not entirely unexpected chapter. Such fun to read.

Author's Response: Yeah, it's not such a secret for us readers, is it?



Reviewer: Jewels Signed Date: 2011.08.11 - 12:59PM Title: Chapter 16, Including The Gratuitous Veela At The Cup, How Many Veela Were There?

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Oh I was so excited when I saw this update. Really enjoyed the character reactions. My only wish was that the chapter was longer so that more of the issue got staightened out. I know Ginny has received quite the shock and freaking out with the possibilities, but I don't think she would forget that Harry was adopted and not actually her brother since she just recently made the discovery of Harry's identity. Can't wait for more to see how this plays out.

Author's Response: Yeah, it used to be longer, but the rather horrible second half got axed for the good of everyone involved.



Reviewer: seekers_destiny Signed Date: 2011.08.11 - 12:45PM Title: Chapter 16, Including The Gratuitous Veela At The Cup, How Many Veela Were There?

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I have no clue about the previous second half of the chapter but I think this version is great. Poor Ginny got such an information overload that she has forgotten that he's a "brother" only through adoption. Therefore, it isn't even as important as her other objections to being a Delacour, although they are more humorous.

I loved the references to Molly's reputation, the poor Delacours (except Ginny, of course) are woefully unprepared for "Hurricane Molly". I also loved the earlier part of the H/G discussion, overall this is very well written and I'm anxious for more - even if it is slow in coming.

Author's Response: I'm glad you like the new ending--much better than it was.. Thanks!




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