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Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2017.01.26 - 06:13PM Title: Chapter 17, Another Lineage Test

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What to do next is indeed the question. However, I am concerned about the beginning of this chapter with Wormtail, Voldemort and Lucius.

Author's Response: We'll eventually see what's going on in the Bad Guys' Camp.



Reviewer: Gin110881 Signed Date: 2016.11.18 - 09:26AM Title: Chapter 17, Another Lineage Test

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Now that all the identities have been clarified, I'm curious about how it'll go on with the two of them.

Evidently, evil is already waiting in the background. And matching to the changed tournament mode the snitch will be the portkey, right? Intriguing idea.
As much as I like the fluff, in case of HG fluff I even love it, it's great to see that some adventures might be waiting on the horizon. Otherwise our beloved couple and their friends will become lazy.


Author's Response: Interesting prognostication about the Quidditch angle. I guess we'll see, won't we?



Reviewer: potterfan2008 Signed Date: 2014.02.01 - 08:30PM Title: Chapter 17, Another Lineage Test

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Short, but to the point.

Author's Response: Yeah, I wasn't happy having it be so short, but perhaps it needed to be.



Reviewer: Senator of Sorcery Signed Date: 2013.11.02 - 01:57PM Title: Chapter 17, Another Lineage Test

More please! And soon!

Author's Response: Hopefully! And thanks!



Reviewer: mdauben Signed Date: 2013.08.09 - 05:58PM Title: Chapter 17, Another Lineage Test

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I just went back to reread this delightful story. It's a really fun, unique take on the Harry/Ginny relationship and I really enjoy what you have written so far. Looking, though, I notice its been close to a year since you last updated! I think this story has loads of potential so I hope you will eventually come back to it. I'd live to see how the people deal with the news of Harry and Ginny origins and just what Voldemort, Lucious and Pettigrew are up to.

Author's Response: Thanks for the nice comments, I'm glad you're liking it. And yeah, it HAS been awhile. I keep setting goals to work on writing, but somehow they seem to vanish through the archway in the Department of Mysteries.



Reviewer: Jewels Signed Date: 2013.07.23 - 10:19PM Title: Chapter 17, Another Lineage Test

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Well, I just read this chapter again and noticed that the review I left when I first read the chapter didn't show :(
Oh well, I'll just leave another now. I adore the originality of this story, although as time goes on there have been many other Harry Delacour stories written on other sites. However, since yours was the first I've read with this concept, I find myself enjoying it the best. Loved the chapter! The character interactions, and the anxiety of those involved there well written and believable. It was also good to see the beginings of the underlining plot with Tom, Malfoy and Wormtail. In fact, my only complaint is that we haven't seen a new chapter yet. Please try to post another one soon :)

Cheers!

Author's Response: Thanks for your comments, I'm always happy to receive such nice words. I haven't seen too many Harry Delacour stories, but what really prompted me to write this one was the idea of Veela!Ginny, which I'd NEVER seen. As for a new chapter, it's in the works, so hopefully in the not-too-far-distant future we'll get to see what's going on. -duke



Reviewer: sark Signed Date: 2013.02.18 - 11:24PM Title: Chapter 17, Another Lineage Test

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While this is a great idea for a story, you might consider not including so many damn details. Ancillary characters don't need to have anything discussed at length. It's like peppering this story with speed bumps. Plus i suspect you'll burn yourself out and give up on this story because of it.

Author's Response: Thanks for your comments. I agree with you on some of your points, although others not so much. I plan on having, at the end of the final chapter, a section of "Things I've learned while writing this story', so I can talk about some of the issues that you raise. -duke



Reviewer: dshadel Signed Date: 2013.01.28 - 07:16PM Title: Chapter 17, Another Lineage Test

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Finally all caught up on this. Great chapter great story can't wait for more

Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying it, thanks!



Reviewer: Senator of Sorcery Signed Date: 2012.10.02 - 03:56PM Title: Chapter 17, Another Lineage Test

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Beautiful! Now hurry up and finish it!!

Author's Response: I know, I am kind of taking the long road for this one, aren't I?



Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2012.09.15 - 10:50AM Title: Chapter 17, Another Lineage Test

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I thought the beginning of this chapter was more thought provoking than the end.

Author's Response: Interesting comment. Lots of people seem to wish to only have the fluff in there. I felt, though, that it was time to start getting our chess pieces set up. thanks!



Reviewer: pcoates Signed Date: 2012.09.15 - 12:42AM Title: Chapter 17, Another Lineage Test

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Glad to see you back. interesting story, nicely written.

Author's Response: Glad to be back. Thanks!



Reviewer: ProfessorBinns79 Signed Date: 2012.09.15 - 12:24AM Title: Chapter 17, Another Lineage Test

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I squeeled like a girl when I saw that this story was updated! Then, when my wife came home and I told her, she pumped her fist and said "Yes!" Are we weird? Well, I hope this means you are returning to this story in earnest and not that it just takes this long now for each short (but appreciated!) update.

At least we have no cliffhanger here (though we are anxious to see how things proceed). I came to this story just after the last update, read all 16 existing chapters in one sitting, only to end up on "You're my brother!" It's nice to see that was only a momentary outburst and that Ginny is still holding onto Harry's hand as she receives such life-altering news!

Thank you so much for the update, and I can't wait for the next one!

Author's Response: I think that's now my favorite reaction of all time. Thank you! And yes, it heralds my returning to writing more assiduously.



Reviewer: seekers_destiny Signed Date: 2012.09.14 - 08:38PM Title: Chapter 17, Another Lineage Test

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Well, I must say that after waiting over a year that was.... remarkably short. I won't poke fun at the quality though as I liked how the first scene built up some tension and the description of the chaos in the hospital wing was an absolute delight.

Author's Response: Yeah, it ended up being shorter than I'd planned, but it wanted to be broken right there, and who am I to direct the muse?



Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2012.09.14 - 07:33PM Title: Chapter 17, Another Lineage Test

Now it really has hit the fan....kutgw and update a little more quickly next time please

Author's Response: Thanks!



Reviewer: hgromance Signed Date: 2012.09.14 - 06:40PM Title: Chapter 17, Another Lineage Test

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hooray for another chapter! been thinking about this story a lot. wonder how that will affect Harry and Ginny, if at all. don't be a stranger now. just kidding.

Author's Response: Thanks--glad to know it has some screen time in your thoughts.




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