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Reviewer: Arnel Signed Date: 2009.09.01 - 11:57PM Title: Notice Me
Yeah! Allyson and Albert are attracted to each other! You've hit my fluffy spot and made me giggle. I hope they start talking to each other.
Author's Response: LOL@fluffy spot *giggles*
Reviewer: Penny Lane Signed Date: 2009.06.18 - 07:17PM Title: Notice Me
Oh, Albert, just tell her who you really are already!!! *headdesk*
You have a really lovely way with language. I don't know quite how to explain what I mean by that, except to say that everything is worded so beautifully and effectively. The way you often use sentence fragments, rather than full sentences, somehow gives it more of a powerful emotional punch. The parenthetical comments are good too: Sometimes funny, sometimes sad, always meaningful.
Adding this to my favorites. Don't want to miss an update!
Author's Response: Silly Albert ... thank you so much for your thoughts about the style - it's a new one I've been trying and so far I seem to ahve pulled it off quite well.
Reviewer: ProfessorBinns Signed Date: 2009.06.16 - 10:47PM Title: Notice Me
The richness of your characterizations is great. You have a great way of using both language and symbols to evoke the characters' states of mind. I look forward to reading how it goes.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I hope you enjoy the rest too!
Reviewer: Ginny Guerra Signed Date: 2009.06.15 - 10:53PM Title: Notice Me
Are those two ever going to get what's going on between them?
'Harry no one wanted to duel him ...' Wonder the meaning of this phrase...
Author's Response: I'm pretty sure I just meant no one wanted to duel Harry cos he's Harry Potter ... are they ever going to get it? Perhaps ;)
Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2009.06.13 - 11:54AM Title: Notice Me
i think harry and ginny need to do this just so they can have the life they always wanted btut hen again life finds away to screw it all up...kutgw
Reviewer: danno Signed Date: 2009.06.12 - 01:35PM Title: Notice Me
I think you're killing me. Ugh.
They need to figure it out. And Ginny needs her magic back. Seriously.
But you're killing me. Every time I read a chapter and I get to the end and realize that nothing has changed. Still. I'm. Dying.
But I loved it.
Author's Response: I know, I know, they need to seriously figure things out. I think ... I think they might ;)
Reviewer: ginnyweasley777 Signed Date: 2009.06.12 - 09:18AM Title: Notice Me
great chapter
I feel as though I want to bang their heads together and tell them to stop being stupid
can't wait for Ginny to find out who Albert is
Author's Response: *hands you a clue by four*
Reviewer: Zanthus Signed Date: 2009.06.12 - 07:43AM Title: Notice Me
Cmon Kezza
I nearly had to get a box of tissues out. After reading your yarns, I've gone out and bought shares in Kleenex. They have got to communicate and I'm looking forward to how it happens. Great yarn. Enjoy the future.
Cam
Author's Response: *solemnly hands you a tissue* I'm sorry ... glad you liked it though!
Reviewer: Prof McGonagall Signed Date: 2009.06.12 - 12:32AM Title: Notice Me
That's what you call miscommunication. Or rather no-communication! Sigh! Poor Ginny, poor Harry. Don't you just want to knock them upside the head, lock them in a room together and tell them "TALK"?!?
I guess what I am trying to say is, GREAT chapter! Can't wait for more!!!!
Author's Response: Well, that's one way of fixing it :)
Reviewer: Prof McGonagall Signed Date: 2009.06.12 - 12:32AM Title: Notice Me
That's what you call miscommunication. Or rather no-communication! Sigh! Poor Ginny, poor Harry. Don't you just want to knock them upside the head, lock them in a room together and tell them "TALK"?!?
I guess what I am trying to say is, GREAT chapter! Can't wait for more!!!!
Reviewer: Professor_Chris Signed Date: 2009.06.11 - 09:45PM Title: Notice Me
Oh boy this is getting interesting.... Looking forward to seeing what will happen, especially when Ginny finds out who Albert really is :).
Author's Response: Ah .. yes ... what will happen then ...
Reviewer: Phx tears Signed Date: 2009.06.11 - 09:12PM Title: Notice Me
i have a feeling this idea of his is going to end in tears, heartbreak, and an epic make up...it'll be great! i'm in the mood for something like this. write on my friend!
Author's Response: I'm writing, I'm writing ... I don't think you'll need the heartbreak and the tears though ... ;)
