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Reviewer: hpf2114 Signed Date: 2009.12.13 - 07:01PM Title: Don't Go

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Reviewer: Arnel Signed Date: 2009.09.02 - 12:42AM Title: Don't Go

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I'm so glad they're talking. Even if they can't tell each other the entire truth yet, it's still a step in the right direction. And my fluffy-meter is pegged in the red zone and is threatening to go haywire it's so happy for them. Terrific chapter.



Reviewer: knightsbridge Signed Date: 2009.08.15 - 05:56PM Title: Don't Go

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Well, that's a ruddy mess...LOL, not your story which is fantastic...I meant Harry and Ginny. Two very lost souls, neither of which knows that the other is waiting for the magic of love.

Darian

Author's Response: Two lost souls ... let's hope they find what they don't know they are looking for ...



Reviewer: Prof McGonagall Signed Date: 2009.08.04 - 09:46PM Title: Don't Go

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You know, I had to think about this one for a while. And after reading everyone else's comments, I have to respectfully disagree.

I don't think Ginny is ready to know that Albert is Harry. She would just bolt, or distrust any word he says. She would not believe it if he said he didn't care about her magic. She would be worried that he says it out of pitty for her. She needs to really feel, that someone gets to know her how she really is - NOW. Not someone who will compare her to whom she used to be. AND she needs to see that a wizard can be just as comfortable in the muggle world, in case her magic never comes back. Harry, of course, is the only one who has lived in both long enough to manage just fine...

Once she feels safe around him, maybe her self-esteem will strengthen enough to deal with the truth...and THEN - we all hope - her magic will come back to her as well ;)

Did I get it right???

Author's Response: Yeah I think you have it mostly. She needs someone who is *not* Harry before she can have Harry. She wouldn't let herself open up to Harry.



Reviewer: Zanthus Signed Date: 2009.07.30 - 12:31AM Title: Don't Go

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Reviewer: Zanthus Signed Date: 2009.07.30 - 12:29AM Title: Don't Go

G'day Kezza,
The truth will win. Love your style of how they are starting to communicate to each other, very sweet and to think about it, even positive. If this has a few more chapters I think I'll have to restock the tissues. Loved it. Enjoy the future.
Z

Author's Response: Yeah it looks like being about ... 20 chapters, maybe? It should pick up soon though! LOL grab a box of Kleenex JIC!



Reviewer: hms42 Signed Date: 2009.07.29 - 12:23AM Title: Don't Go

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Reviewer: Penny Lane Signed Date: 2009.07.28 - 09:35PM Title: Don't Go

Confession: I cheated and read several chapters ahead on another site, so I know which way things are going. But having read this chapter again now that you've posted it here, it really does hold up to repeate readings. At first, I was worried the style might get a bit old after a while, but it doesn't; it continues to work beautifully.

I want to hug Harry and Ginny. They're both so lost and sweet, and the way they're slowly, timidly beginning to reach out to each other is very touching. Also, this line...

"Harry thought she might have broken his heart."

...was like a punch in the gut. In a good way.


Author's Response: You don't know how relieved I am that the style works so well. I'm truly surprised by that!



Reviewer: annep Signed Date: 2009.07.27 - 05:47PM Title: Don't Go

I read all 7 chapters today and really enjoyed your story. You’re doing an excellent job with this different writing style; the sentence structure and symmetry in each chapter work very well for the tone of this tale.

Your presentation of depression in these two is sensitive and realistic. I noticed several reviewers saying that Ginny and Harry should hurry up and tell the truth, but they’ve both spent a long time in protective mode and it’s going to be very difficult to open up. If everything came out in the next chapter it would be totally against the characters that you’ve drawn.

Mrs. Figg’s motives for pushing Harry and Ginny together interest me—she suspected Miss Parker wasn’t a muggle, but did she suspect which witch? Mrs. Figg didn’t react at all to the broken plate (other than to clean it up), so it seems that she wasn’t surprized by Harry’s reaction. Is Mrs. Figg still in Little Whinging? If so, Harry should get double hugs for not only visiting her but for going back to a neighborhood full of bad memories.

Thanks for writing!


Author's Response: I have been very pleased with how well the tone, style and structure has worked for this fic. It was a real experiment on my part and more than a little scary! I agree with you about Harry and Ginny hurrying up and talking. Honestly there would be no fic if they did that, so I tend to get frustrated when I receive 'help' that indicates what the next plot point should be. I usually ahve it plotted out what happens next and this fic is no exception. Mrs Figg is not in Little Whinging and does not know who Miss Parker *is* but she knew enough ... you know? ;) LOL



Reviewer: LadyRuthless Signed Date: 2009.07.27 - 12:38PM Title: Don't Go

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Excellent, again. Keep us hanging for as long as you can. More angst=more chapters.
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Author's Response: LOL I anticipate 20 chapters. We'll see what happens ...



Reviewer: WickedLoz Signed Date: 2009.07.27 - 08:40AM Title: Don't Go

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Oh this is so good. But I'm getting really impatient, urgh... :P

Author's Response: Patience, grasshopper ...



Reviewer: juice14 Signed Date: 2009.07.27 - 12:38AM Title: Don't Go

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Ouch ... well now looks like Harry's about to do something momentous. Go Harry!



Author's Response: Hmmm ... I wonder what Harry will do ...



Reviewer: Professor_Chris Signed Date: 2009.07.27 - 12:13AM Title: Don't Go

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Another great chapter, I am glad that Ginny is at least aware that Albert is a Wizard, I certainly hope that Harry will tell her soon who he is and let the cards fall where they will. If she rejects him again at least he will know.


Author's Response: Harry is terrified of telling her but hopefully he can get his act together ;)



Reviewer: ReaderRabbit Signed Date: 2009.07.26 - 11:56PM Title: Don't Go

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Do you know how absurd it is to read as slow as possible and try not to look at the scroll bar because it will confirm that your almost to the end of the chapter. A chapter that you have been checking for every day and wishing they were either much longer or more frequent?

Well that's what you have reduced me to.

I hope your happy!

Author's Response: I know how absurd that is ... I do it All The Time ... I feel kinda special I made some other poor soul do it! More coming soon!



Reviewer: hgromance Signed Date: 2009.07.26 - 10:13PM Title: Don't Go

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Good beginning.

Author's Response: Thanks!



Reviewer: hawkeye2008 Signed Date: 2009.07.26 - 09:42PM Title: Don't Go

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Keep on writing!

Author's Response: I will! :)



Reviewer: Bethina Signed Date: 2009.07.26 - 08:53PM Title: Don't Go

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Great chapter! Is it Ginny's magic left her or, due to some experience that she is too sad or in some way exhausted to use her magic? I hope Harry comes clean soon.

Thanks for the update.

Beth

Author's Response: We'll find out what's up with Ginny's magic ... eventually ...



Reviewer: Ginny Guerra Signed Date: 2009.07.26 - 08:38PM Title: Don't Go

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OMG!
They're getting o close to uncorking the bottle!!
Updae soon, please!

Author's Response: Okay! I'll do my best! I have my corkscrew at the ready!



Reviewer: memasuzy Signed Date: 2009.07.26 - 08:35PM Title: Don't Go

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I got one of my wishes so far - he knows she isn't really happy being a muggle.
What will it take for him to tell her who he really is . . . maybe she will have to tell Albert about her feelings for a boy she knew in school - one with messy black hair and emerald green eyes who was too busy saving the world to notice her?
Very good chapter - please keep updating!



Reviewer: Phx tears Signed Date: 2009.07.26 - 05:25PM Title: Don't Go

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bad idea.

When you say Ginny can't do magic anymore do you mean she hasn't done it for so long that she can't do it, she's unhappy so she can't do it, or she was cursed somehow and lost her magic?

thanks for the update kezza/betas

Author's Response: Well now, wouldn't you like to know? *smirk* You'll find out ...




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