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Reviewer: hgromance Signed Date: 2013.08.29 - 08:10AM Title: Chapter 12 The Honeymoon re-reading your story again because it's such a good one. noticed there towards the end of the chapter you put in parseltongue instead of parselmouth. parselmouth is the person who speaks parseltongue the language. not majorly distracting, just something I noticed. Reviewer: pottermania Signed Date: 2012.07.02 - 06:25PM Title: Chapter 12 The Honeymoon Gosh, does that mean that all these things have already happened ie...that she has already been lost to him but their love has overcome the separation and they have reclaimed their bond? Or are they going to find they are separated once more because of the meddling of others such as Molly and Dumbledore? Reviewer: aimless Signed Date: 2011.11.15 - 04:52PM Title: Chapter 12 The Honeymoon I like the story so far, but this 2nd prophecy... Could you make it more descriptive? "The mate of Choosen One shall have freckles and be the youngest of seven. Choosen One will live with his awfull relatives for a while..." . :P It's nice to have Dumbldore to realise that with his approach to Harry he almost failed the war, but still prophecy should be something more vague. Reviewer: ginnyweasley777 Signed Date: 2010.04.11 - 03:22PM Title: Chapter 12 The Honeymoon beautifully written chapter - well done Reviewer: hgromance Signed Date: 2009.07.23 - 12:38PM Title: Chapter 12 The Honeymoon Great story so far. One problem I've noticed in this chapter specifically. You use the term Parseltongue when decribing a person. Parseltongue is a language. The term you're looking for is Parselmouth. Otherwise, awesome story. Reviewer: Female Marauder Signed Date: 2009.06.18 - 06:37PM Title: Chapter 12 The Honeymoon Wow! This is a really cool story. It's very original and well-written. I can't wait to find out what happens next! Reviewer: HGRHfan35 Signed Date: 2009.06.18 - 06:29AM Title: Chapter 12 The Honeymoon Lovely Honemoon that was and the Hebrides are quite beautiful, rough but so beautiful. Reviewer: HarrynGinnyfan Signed Date: 2009.06.18 - 03:24AM Title: Chapter 12 The Honeymoon I'm going to go with harry on this one - "another prophecy??" :P Reviewer: zorica Signed Date: 2009.06.18 - 01:36AM Title: Chapter 12 The Honeymoon Beautiful love scene. And another prophecy! Sounds like there is a bit of angst coming up with "she will be lost to him". Am looking forward to lots more. Thanks Reviewer: GREYWOLF Signed Date: 2009.06.17 - 03:53PM Title: Chapter 12 The Honeymoon I thought the sexuality between Harry and Ginny to be quit lovely, because it is honorable. I find the administrators of the site to be quit two-faced. They object to descriptions of sex between a married Harry and Ginny, but OK stories depicting illicit or even extra-marrital sex. Not to mention a drunken Ginny, a stoned profane Harry etc, etc. These I find offensive, not descriptions of loving sex between a married Harry and Ginny. | |||||||
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