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Reviewer: riegert8 Signed Date: 2014.06.18 - 12:27AM Title: Chapter 12 The Honeymoon

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Reviewer: hgromance Signed Date: 2013.08.29 - 08:10AM Title: Chapter 12 The Honeymoon

re-reading your story again because it's such a good one. noticed there towards the end of the chapter you put in parseltongue instead of parselmouth. parselmouth is the person who speaks parseltongue the language. not majorly distracting, just something I noticed.

Author's Response: Thanks! This is really strange, because I was just rereading this story as well. I fixed the parseltongue/parselmouth error as well as what seemed to have been thousands of comma/period issues. Oh well, it was my first story. I'm glad that you are still enjoying it :)



Reviewer: pottermania Signed Date: 2012.07.02 - 06:25PM Title: Chapter 12 The Honeymoon

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Gosh, does that mean that all these things have already happened ie...that she has already been lost to him but their love has overcome the separation and they have reclaimed their bond? Or are they going to find they are separated once more because of the meddling of others such as Molly and Dumbledore?

I'm glad they enjoyed their honeymoon:)

Author's Response: I hope it will become clear as you read further. Thank you again for reviewing as you read. I always love to hear what people think of my stories :)



Reviewer: aimless Signed Date: 2011.11.15 - 04:52PM Title: Chapter 12 The Honeymoon

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I like the story so far, but this 2nd prophecy... Could you make it more descriptive? "The mate of Choosen One shall have freckles and be the youngest of seven. Choosen One will live with his awfull relatives for a while..." . :P It's nice to have Dumbldore to realise that with his approach to Harry he almost failed the war, but still prophecy should be something more vague.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Writing the prophecy was rather difficult - it's a fine line between too vague and enough detail that makes sense.



Reviewer: ginnyweasley777 Signed Date: 2010.04.11 - 03:22PM Title: Chapter 12 The Honeymoon

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beautifully written chapter - well done
the idea of the twins teaching Ginny how to produce a Patronus is funny!

Author's Response: Thanks!



Reviewer: hgromance Signed Date: 2009.07.23 - 12:38PM Title: Chapter 12 The Honeymoon

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Great story so far. One problem I've noticed in this chapter specifically. You use the term Parseltongue when decribing a person. Parseltongue is a language. The term you're looking for is Parselmouth. Otherwise, awesome story.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review and spotting my mistake! :) Sharon



Reviewer: Icanedo Signed Date: 2009.07.05 - 12:16AM Title: Chapter 12 The Honeymoon

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Reviewer: Female Marauder Signed Date: 2009.06.18 - 06:37PM Title: Chapter 12 The Honeymoon

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Wow! This is a really cool story. It's very original and well-written. I can't wait to find out what happens next!

Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you are enjoying it.



Reviewer: HGRHfan35 Signed Date: 2009.06.18 - 06:29AM Title: Chapter 12 The Honeymoon

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Lovely Honemoon that was and the Hebrides are quite beautiful, rough but so beautiful.

Another prophecy huh......but then why seal of the chamber under Grimmald.......unless the stone IS there already and they thought no 'light' Wizard could enter?

Author's Response: Thanks!



Reviewer: HarrynGinnyfan Signed Date: 2009.06.18 - 03:24AM Title: Chapter 12 The Honeymoon

I'm going to go with harry on this one - "another prophecy??" :P

Author's Response: I couldn't resist:) Sharon



Reviewer: zorica Signed Date: 2009.06.18 - 01:36AM Title: Chapter 12 The Honeymoon

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Beautiful love scene. And another prophecy! Sounds like there is a bit of angst coming up with "she will be lost to him". Am looking forward to lots more. Thanks

Author's Response: Thanks! Hope you enjoy.



Reviewer: GREYWOLF Signed Date: 2009.06.17 - 03:53PM Title: Chapter 12 The Honeymoon

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I thought the sexuality between Harry and Ginny to be quit lovely, because it is honorable. I find the administrators of the site to be quit two-faced. They object to descriptions of sex between a married Harry and Ginny, but OK stories depicting illicit or even extra-marrital sex. Not to mention a drunken Ginny, a stoned profane Harry etc, etc. These I find offensive, not descriptions of loving sex between a married Harry and Ginny.

A new prophesy, goody. I always thought Ginny would be intimately involved in Voldemorte's defeat. That was my big disappointment with DH.

Author's Response: Thanks! I agree.




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