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Reviewer: riegert8 Signed Date: 2014.06.18 - 12:29AM Title: Chapter 25 Attack on Diagon Alley
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Reviewer: TomBombadil Signed Date: 2012.12.15 - 01:48AM Title: Chapter 25 Attack on Diagon Alley
Kudos on a job well done with this lengthy battle scene. I have always found these difficult, but you pulled it off perfectly -- moving from confrontation to confrontation, then weaving it all back together. I a, quote impressed with your product!
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I actually made a map of Diagon Alley and labelled everything so I knew where people were and what they were next to, etc. I'm glad my work paid off :)
Reviewer: pottermania Signed Date: 2012.07.06 - 06:39PM Title: Chapter 25 Attack on Diagon Alley
That certainly was unexpected...with dumbledore dead AND the minister of magic chaos is sure to reign and voldermort is going to take over the ministry and I can't see how the others can stop it.
Author's Response: I know - not good at all :)
Reviewer: aimless Signed Date: 2011.11.19 - 12:08AM Title: Chapter 25 Attack on Diagon Alley
Well. Seems to me like Dumbledore fell down a bit too easy, tho i already gathered that he's far from mane figure in this story, still I'm bit disappointed.
Your style definitely improving over the story, not the top marks in my opinion, but you are getting there.
Author's Response: Thanks! I figured that Dumbledore would not be as cautious around a mother of one of his students and he really is not central to the end of the story.
Reviewer: LuvinHG Signed Date: 2011.10.01 - 09:39AM Title: Chapter 25 Attack on Diagon Alley
Poor Harry sure gets hurt a lot. :( I can't believe Bella is dead. Wow! Good chapter. I like action.
Author's Response: Yes, he does tend to get hurt a lot, but I figure he is the focus of Voldemort's anger so it makes sense. I thought it made sense for Neville to get his revenge.
Reviewer: ginnyweasley777 Signed Date: 2010.04.12 - 03:09PM Title: Chapter 25 Attack on Diagon Alley
I'm glad Neville had his turn to kill Bellatrix, I always thought that it would have been fitting for him to have killed her in DH
a well written fight scene, not over done like some I've read
Author's Response: I wished he could have gotten her in DH! Thanks, I worked fro a while on the fight scene.
Reviewer: LeprechaunJV Signed Date: 2009.11.23 - 12:54PM Title: Chapter 25 Attack on Diagon Alley
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Reviewer: Goodygurl Signed Date: 2009.11.22 - 09:32PM Title: Chapter 25 Attack on Diagon Alley
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Reviewer: dshadel Signed Date: 2009.11.22 - 05:27PM Title: Chapter 25 Attack on Diagon Alley
Great chapter You did the action very well. Its good to see you sticking with this story its one of the only left that I realy look forward too. can't wait for your next update!!
Author's Response: Thanks! Writing the action was a challenge, but fun. Don't worry, I am not going to abandon this story :)
Reviewer: hgromance Signed Date: 2009.11.22 - 04:26PM Title: Chapter 25 Attack on Diagon Alley
Awesome chapter but having read this on another site, I knew that already.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading - on both sites!
