The sudden mention of Ron had me wondering if he is the one involved with the pictures. His character has really been down played in this story...could it be him and not Percy? However, Percy seems to just dig himself into bigger and bigger holes!

Going into the Chamber of Secrets took a lot of courage for Harry and Ginny and maybe made it more real for the other three. What on earth happened to them when the touched the stone!?

Author's Response: I can reassure you that Ron is not evil, he just isn't in this story as much. I agree it did take a lot of courage to go down into the Chamber!

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This was a great chapter and I completely understand the RL problems that can get in the way. :)

Nothing hideous to comment on but for 2 instances where you used the word whole instead of hole :D
“You are going to wear a whole in the carpet.�
Ron was trapped on the other side and he cleared a whole for us to get through.�

But this read like a charm otherwise.

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Percy....what an idiot. How can a Weasley be so blind. Oh wait....there's Molly to consider. :)
But I am sure she will come around rather sooner than later. Percy might, once he sees what reaction will follow on his actions. Regret always comes after the fact.

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So they found the Sword of Slythy......mmmm......it's an ill wind that blows, I tell ya. What is this reaction that Harry got and why. Will Ginny be hurt as well. Will Voldemort now realize what they are doing?
This is all so bloody exciting!!!!!


Author's Response: Thanks! I can't tell you how many times I read right over the whole vs hole parts and never dawned on me. Percy is rather an idiot - Molly we'll see. Glad you are enjoying it - questions will be answered - eventually :)

Noooo! Don't end it there! Just kidding, I'm glad you updated as I didn't expect you to so soon. Thanks for that. This is one of those stories that once its finished I'll want to read again and again, i really like the premise it was such a novel idea.
I also forgot to add earlier that I'm glad you paired Hermione with Charlie, her and Ron can be very boring at times. Thanks again for this story.




Author's Response: Thanks! i'm really glad you are enjoying it, it has certainly been a fun story to write. I think Ron/Hermione could work under some circumstances, but at the point in my story he is too young and too immature.

Interesting..........
Would molly give up percy if she found out percy tends to put in regulations that will adversely affaect bill (her eldest son). Since she shows feelings that she needs to think twice when deciding between ginny and percy.
Update soon.

Author's Response: I agree. More about molly in the upcoming chapters :)