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Reviewer: SYLVELLE Signed Date: 2014.08.31 - 12:29AM Title: Chapter 51 Voldemort's Fall

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Well you didn't kill Fred but you did maim him huh., killed Ted, Colin and Angelina but save Lavender. Go figure
Good battle though, but I think I'll need to read it again to understand everything.
Thanks
Tricia

Author's Response: Thanks so much! Glad you enjoyed it :)



Reviewer: riegert8 Signed Date: 2014.06.18 - 12:36AM Title: Chapter 51 Voldemort's Fall

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Reviewer: pottermania Signed Date: 2012.07.23 - 07:28PM Title: Chapter 51 Voldemort's Fall

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Brilliant battle! Did the imperious curse not work because fo the bond? Or were they expecting it and had prepared a defence?

I hadn't even thought of the amulet being a poisons. I thought it was added protecton(maybe I've been watching too much of The House of Anubis...lol!) Thank goodnessn they saved the baby and boy was that baby saved....in more than one way. Imagine being raised to serve The Dark Lord but I suppose most of these slytherins were...how sad and what a waste:( I like the connection to canon...Andromeda raising a baby.

Author's Response: Thanks! Yes the bond prevented the Imperius from working. I actually got the idea for that whole sequence from the story of the wife of a Nazi leader who killed herself and all of her children rather than letting them live in a world without Nazi rule - pretty sick. I liked giving Andromeda a baby to take care of :)



Reviewer: I Love Ginerva Signed Date: 2012.02.26 - 06:25AM Title: Chapter 51 Voldemort's Fall

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Reviewer: ginnyweasley777 Signed Date: 2012.02.16 - 08:01AM Title: Chapter 51 Voldemort's Fall

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brilliant chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks!



Reviewer: Jewels Signed Date: 2012.02.10 - 07:20PM Title: Chapter 51 Voldemort's Fall

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Wow! You certainly covered a lot in that chapter. Well done and very well organized although it felt a bit rushed. I had Narcissa pegged, but I didn't expect her the air all her secrets like that in front of everyone. I half expected her to go for more of a vindictive planned revenge. I love the fact that Andi will be raising her nephew. It'll give her something to focus on after losing Ted. I still say Molly needs to get her head out of her arse. I'm hoping her children don't forgive easily and that she's forced to work for a reunion that will always be a little strained. I hope Percy gets an azkaban sentence for his decisions surrounding the dark lord's pureblood agenda. All those people that were contaminated as a rebellion to his act can be laid at his feet. Thanks for not killing off Remus, Tonks, and Fred. I really thought Fred was going to be killed off there for a moment. If any Weasley dies it should have been stuck-up pompous Percy. I hope he continues to be disowned by Ginny and Bill.

Anyway, sorry to hear about your health, but thanks for getting this chapter out there. Can't wait to see a bit of normal life for Harry and Ginny. I'm hoping Harry doesn't become an Auror, because I really never saw him doing that as a career after all the fighting he's already done and the working for the ministry after everything just doesn't feel right. Whatever you decide to do will be right for your story and eagerly await the next update.

Cheers!

Author's Response: Thanks! I had Narcissa's ending planned for quite some time. I actually modeled it on the actions of one of Hitler's advisors wives who killed herself and all of her children when it became apparent Hilter would be defeated. It seemed an appropriate parallel. I see her revealing all of her secrets as she was so bewildered why they didn't work. Percy - lets just say I have plans for him :) I do want to show a bit of normal life for Harry and Ginny and I will show all of the babies being born.



Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2012.02.10 - 12:15PM Title: Chapter 51 Voldemort's Fall

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I knew this was going to be a good chapter. Full marks.

Author's Response: thanks! Glad you enjoyed it.



Reviewer: LeprechaunJV Signed Date: 2012.02.10 - 10:14AM Title: Chapter 51 Voldemort's Fall

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Reviewer: aimless Signed Date: 2012.02.10 - 10:04AM Title: Chapter 51 Voldemort's Fall

rather fast ending ). I like the fic tho

Author's Response: Thanks!



Reviewer: hpforever85 Signed Date: 2012.02.10 - 07:57AM Title: Chapter 51 Voldemort's Fall

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Interesting battle. I can honestly say I was surprised that Narcissa was behind it all, and I was surprised that Ginny would risk the babies to fight. I know she would want to participate and help her husband, but what would she have done if it had cost them the twins?

Author's Response: thanks! Ginny was well hidden for most of the battle. The only reason she was anywhere near the battle was the prophecy that it would take the two of them to bring down Voldemort.



Reviewer: Imperator 277 Signed Date: 2012.02.10 - 07:24AM Title: Chapter 51 Voldemort's Fall

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Great chapter. A bit anticlimactic but worth the wait. Cannot wait for more. keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Thanks! I was stuck for a while on how to write the final battle, I'm glad it turned out okay.



Reviewer: Ginny Guerra Signed Date: 2012.02.09 - 10:16PM Title: Chapter 51 Voldemort's Fall

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Hope you're feeling better.

Author's Response: Thank you so much!



Reviewer: hot48cricket Signed Date: 2012.02.09 - 08:54PM Title: Chapter 51 Voldemort's Fall

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Ha! Serves Narcissa right that her son will be raised in a light family!!!

Author's Response: Thanks! I thought it was only right.



Reviewer: Goodygurl Signed Date: 2012.02.09 - 06:15PM Title: Chapter 51 Voldemort's Fall

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A little anticlimactic but still very good.

Author's Response: Thanks!




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