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Reviewer: hpf2114 Signed
Date: 2010.02.23 - 10:57AM
Title: The Corpse in the Cemetery
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Reviewer: CraZMe Signed
Date: 2010.01.09 - 05:28PM
Title: The Corpse in the Cemetery
WOW! I just started this story and I immediately fell in love with it! I can't wait for the next chapter! :]
Author's Response: Only three chapters to go. The next should be submitted within the next few days. -N-
Reviewer: hushpuppy22 Signed
Date: 2009.12.02 - 04:38PM
Title: The Corpse in the Cemetery
Excellent as usual.
Author's Response: Thank you. I can see the end approaching.
-N-
Reviewer: GREYWOLF Signed
Date: 2009.12.01 - 02:01PM
Title: The Corpse in the Cemetery
Very nice, glad to see that Lavender was able to contribute.
Author's Response: I feel guilty about Lavender.
Reviewer: sweetdreamer285 Signed
Date: 2009.12.01 - 02:18AM
Title: The Corpse in the Cemetery
I can't keep quiet any longer.
Reading your story brought back the excitement that I've haven't felt since HBP film premiered last July. It's good to be back to the sunlit days.
And thank you for allowing more Cho in the story too; I’ve always had a suspicion she had some lingering interest in Harry after that one fleeting scene (“disappointed”, huh? Hmm…) before Harry went looking for the Ravenclaw Diadem. Heheh, not while Ginny’s around, Cho dear…. XD
I’m looking forward to the next update ^_^
Author's Response: Thank you (-:
The DA will continue to make fleeting appearances (some more fleeting than others) in my stories. I agree with you about the Diadem scene. Cho and Ginny really need to have a girl to girl talk (or a catfight).
Reviewer: Ginny Guerra Signed
Date: 2009.11.30 - 05:31PM
Title: The Corpse in the Cemetery
Can't wait for what's coming!
Author's Response: Lots of funerals?
Reviewer: Birlan Signed
Date: 2009.11.30 - 08:06AM
Title: The Corpse in the Cemetery
Nice job using the action to show us something about the skills of the DA--and about George's reaction to everything. I liked his interaction with friends and famiiy.
Author's Response: Thank you, I've been trying to show George see-sawing emotionally over the past few days. Happy when there's lots of chaos, maudlin when things are quiet.
Reviewer: harrypotterspirit Signed
Date: 2009.11.30 - 07:42AM
Title: The Corpse in the Cemetery
Ginny's a bit protective!
Author's Response: Damn right! This is a good thing, isn't it?
Reviewer: SarahBeth Signed
Date: 2009.11.30 - 04:09AM
Title: The Corpse in the Cemetery
Wow, that's a lot of action for one chapter!
I have to admit, I'm a little odd - I prefer stories with less action and more character-based interaction (but that's just a personal preference). However, the action in this chapter was very clear. One of the reasons I normally dislike it is because I find it difficult to keep up and keep engrossed (simple minds and all that...) but the formatting here made it easy to follow and easy to visualise, whilst keeping it fast paced and exciting.
There were a couple of typos here and there (one or two missing capital letters, etc) but nothing to distract from the excellent writing and storyline.
I only wish I'd given this story a chance sooner - I could have been enjoying it for so much longer!
Author's Response: There had to be one action-packed chapter in this story, to keep me happy. (-; I’m glad that you thought that the action was clear. It was never going to be an epic, end of the story battle, though I was a little worried about sticking (almost) every member of the DA into the fight. One on one combats are a lot easier to keep track of. Thanks for the compliment, and the review. Only four chapters to go, I hope to be finished by Christmas. -N-
Reviewer: Feff Signed
Date: 2009.11.29 - 10:12PM
Title: The Corpse in the Cemetery
Author's Response:
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