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Reviewer: mcepl Signed Date: 2019.04.22 - 02:15AM Title: Commitals

Sorry, I should have explained, that I've got to the fight on Reddit defending your position “No, there is nothing wrong with Draco being in the Epilogue free and having spent enough time out of jail to conceive a child", and I was sorely beaten by the opposition.



Reviewer: ngayonatkailanman Signed Date: 2013.02.19 - 11:09PM Title: Commitals

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Awwww..... how bitter. sweet.

Author's Response: Thank you. -N-



Reviewer: hms42 Signed Date: 2010.03.03 - 09:42AM Title: Commitals

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Reviewer: hgromance Signed Date: 2010.02.23 - 08:41PM Title: Commitals

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very good so far. I can't imagine being in Hermione's position right now. It's nice that you've decided to explore this avenue along with the rest of the story.

Author's Response: This is the penultimate chapter. If it wasn’t for my attempt at a challenge fic I’d probably have the last chapter submitted. -N-



Reviewer: hpf2114 Signed Date: 2010.02.23 - 02:28PM Title: Commitals

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Reviewer: minerfan Signed Date: 2010.02.20 - 09:25PM Title: Commitals

This was good, but they should not have fixed up the house, I thinK- so that the Grangers could truly see that the danger was real.

Author's Response: Thanks. I’m not sure that leaving the house as it was would do anything but convince the Grangers that the wizarding world was dangerous and prejudiced. -N-



Reviewer: de88jr Signed Date: 2010.02.20 - 01:01PM Title: Commitals

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Congratulations on 100 reviews! I enjoyed this chapter very much even though I was hoping to listen to the snarky comments of the extended Weasley clan. Molly impressed me with her understanding as I feel people often write her as over-bearing even in moments when I feel her nurturing side wold come out... kuddos! It is also nice watching the depth of Harry and Ginny's relationship grow... so love that couple! Looking forward to more. kutgw

Author's Response: Thank you. The internal family stuff Molly, H/G, R/H and Percy’s insight, were what I wanted to focus on. I didn't want to go into reams of details about the Weasley relatives simply because, although we know that there are a lot of them, they aren't detailed and they aren't that important. -N-



Reviewer: blackhair Signed Date: 2010.02.20 - 11:57AM Title: Commitals

Well i personally don't think Harry would have allowed both Ron/Hermione to get separated for long and also at a time when both of them need each other.
Well i agree with u when u wrote that it was something which only Hermione could have solved but knowing Harry and his "I M RESPONSIBLE WITH EVERYTHING AND SHOULD SOLVE EVERY PROBLEM THAT IS BEEN FACED BY HIS LOVED ONE'S IS BECAUSE OF HIM AND I SHOULD SOLVE IT" would have allowed it to happen. Well he could have shown Hermione's parents the memory of his parents and what was his life without them "I know that's quite private for him" but he actually never cared for his own self and always thought abt his friends and loved ones first. By showing them the death of his parents and the nightmares that he has witnessed for sixteen years would have made it sufficient for Mr. & Mrs.Granger to understand what it was liked.
I personally feel that Harry won't have allowed Ron and Hermione to be separated at a time when they have just come out of wars and funerals, and when both need each others comfort and love to deal with it.
since Harry never had it he would know that's something no one should go through.
After all he is their best friend

Well this something that i thought Harry would have done to prevent his friends from this trauma

Author's Response: I have to disagree (obviously, because that’s not what I wrote). Harry has never been good at sharing his emotions (as you say) and although he cares deeply about his friends, he rarely interferes in their family lives. He did not try to bring Ron and Hermione together, although he was well aware of their feelings for each other. Despite the advice he’d received he met Hermione’s parents and tried to talk to them. I think he did what he could. -N-



Reviewer: hushpuppy22 Signed Date: 2010.02.20 - 02:33AM Title: Commitals

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Reviewer: ladymblack Signed Date: 2010.02.20 - 12:00AM Title: Commitals

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Great chapter as always. I had hoped to see these horrid Weasleys first-hand, but ah well! I thought that your handling of the situation with the Grangers to be very interesting. In the third-to-last paragraph, though, Ron shook the Grangers' hands...not the Weasleys'. Ah, one small mistake, Freudian error I suppose, if you will. As always, I'm looking forward to the next chapter!

Author's Response: Damn! Three beta rerders and who knows how many re-reads and still a stupid mistake. It's now fixed. -N-



Reviewer: Ginny Guerra Signed Date: 2010.02.19 - 10:42PM Title: Commitals

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Poor Ron! Hopefully the Grangers will recover teir good sense soon.

Author's Response: It will have to be very soon. The next chapter is the last! -N-




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