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Reviewer: Chazbites Signed Date: 2010.04.15 - 03:26AM Title: Hogsmeade: Miscommunication

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Reviewer: twinsmom Signed Date: 2009.12.21 - 02:22PM Title: Hogsmeade: Miscommunication

Ginny has got to learn to be more gracious. I like her spunk in the book when she insisted that Luna go to Ravenclaw room w/Harry. But, the vest is over the top and unnecessary. Yikes! Hope she learns from this hard lesson.

~ck

Author's Response: The vest worked the last time, though she didn't make it so tight. (this is a reference to Grave Days Chapter 8 Mourning before Mourning. This is a sequel to that almost completed tale. -N-

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Reviewer: Feff Signed Date: 2009.11.23 - 11:30PM Title: Hogsmeade: Miscommunication

This has taken a turn for the angsty side of town. I don't think Harry would mess Ginny around, as Ron said. But ones does have to wonder what the ten weeks and wednesday was all about. And isn't a girl allowed one wardrobe malfunction in a relationship.....

*Starts up the Death to Cho Chant*

Best of Wishes,
Feff

Author's Response:
Cho is a nice girl who is seriously misunderstood (especially by Ginny – in my version of the future). You won’t find out what’s going on between Cho and Harry until Ginny does, which won’t be for another seven (probably) chapters. Except that this story is only four chapters long…

What seems to be a good idea in private can be a wardrobe malfunction in public. (-:

-N-

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Reviewer: Phx tears Signed Date: 2009.11.23 - 05:26PM Title: Hogsmeade: Miscommunication

although i get what you're going for, it seems uncharacteristic of ginny to wear a top so tight - especially the way you're describing it (sound uncomfortable).

and the way their relationship just got all confusing, it doesn't make a lot of sense. maybe it will next chapter :P

why would harry be so shy if he didn't like the way the guys were looking at her. i'd think he'd be angry. and where was ron? shouldn't he have growled at the guys?

Author's Response:
I don’t want to give too much away. But…

All of my stories are interlinked and interrelated, even After Breakfast . A tight top had the effect Ginny desired in Grave Days Chapter 8 (Morning before Mourning). She’s starting to wear Muggle clothes, but hasn’t quite got the balance right yet, as this wardrobe malfunction (credit to Feff) shows. You’ll find out what Ron’s been doing next chapter.

Aurors and Schoolgirls is an experiment on my part. Can I write from different points of view (especially female points of view) and make the story make sense? “Quidditch� and “Hogsmeade� are Ginny. The next “Quidditch: Slytherin� will be Harry’s POV. Ron doesn’t get a turn until Christmas and I’m putting off writing from Hermione’s perspective because I find her hardest to write. You won’t find out what Harry’s thinking (and why) until the Quidditch match.

Thanks for your comments, I now know which bits need work in the next chapter.
-N-

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Reviewer: Birlan Signed Date: 2009.11.23 - 09:35AM Title: Hogsmeade: Miscommunication

Painful place for a chapter break. Not surprisng that they get their signals crossed at times when they don't see eachother for a month.

Using Ginny as a narrator is a good choice. Her understandable self-absorption makes her situation more dramatic. She's forgotten that they got along fine for the first part of the visit, and she thinks all the other men there are going to treat her differently because of how she is dressed (which may be true for some but not for all).

I will be interested to see if she figures out what is going on with Harry. As opposed to him (or Hermione) telling her.

Incidentally I liked Fred and George's big adventure on another web site.

Author's Response:
I like painful places for chapter breaks. (-;

This story is my first attempt at writing from a female POV so I was a little wary (and it has taken me a long time to write). I appreciate your comments. You’re spot on with most of your observations. Cho brings out the worst in Ginny and there’s no drama without the two lead characters misunderstanding each other and their motives. They need time alone together, but will they get it?

I will be deleting “Fred and George� from this site. The next chapter (the bulk of the story) has been rejected as it isn’t a Harry/Ginny fic. A shame, as it gives some background to Grave Days, but it certainly doesn’t meet SIYE submission guidelines.
-N-

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Reviewer: amanda163 Signed Date: 2009.11.23 - 09:08AM Title: Hogsmeade: Miscommunication

I can't wait to read the next chapter!

Author's Response: Hopefully the wait won't be as long as the wait between chapters 1 and 2, but Grave Days 11 is next. -N-

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