Reviews For Restless Heart Syndrome
Reviewer: ravenclaw_girl101 Signed Date: 2012.07.26 - 01:56AM Title: Chapter 14: Coming Clean I love this story so much! I do hope it will be updated soon. I wanna see Harry's reaction to Jackson. Keep up the great work! Reviewer: cheeks813 Signed Date: 2012.05.28 - 04:21PM Title: Chapter 14: Coming Clean Another great chapter, you write really well, especially the emotional stuff! Can't wait to see what happens next :) Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2012.05.25 - 03:19PM Title: Chapter 14: Coming Clean FIRST OFF WHAT IS UP WITH THE LONG WAIT PAL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!leave a clif and no new chapter for 6 months NOT COOL>>>>>>>>k now thats out glad to see ginny and company have made it and now harry is seeing his son soon and and to meet the family as he should........kutgw and update soon Reviewer: tloulee Signed Date: 2012.05.24 - 11:40AM Title: Chapter 14: Coming Clean Wow...I'm glad Ginny finally came to her senses to tell Harry about Jackson and realized how unfair she was being to her son....can't wait for the next chapter Reviewer: sockless Signed Date: 2012.05.24 - 11:25AM Title: Chapter 14: Coming Clean AHHHHHHHHHHHHH! This has been the bright spot in my week.I can not wait for the next chapter!!! Its ok if its a little long. I wont mind. Reviewer: Harte Signed Date: 2012.05.23 - 08:59PM Title: Chapter 14: Coming Clean I really loved the way you wrote this chapter, showing the emotions of Teddy, Ginny and Jackson and how on edge they are at first. I got the impression part of Teddy's nervousness was due to his uncertainty of how Harry would treat Jackson. It was ideal that you had the two little girls answer the door when Ginny arrived. Their innocence and ignorance of the tension created by Ginny's arrival made the scene perfect. Reviewer: Clearly Signed Date: 2012.05.23 - 07:05PM Title: Chapter 14: Coming Clean Oh my goodness, I can't believe it ends there!!! Please bring on the next chapter soooooon. I beg of you. This is turning out to be my new fav Fan-fic (alongside Foolish of course). Great work so far! Reviewer: RedHeadGin Signed Date: 2012.05.23 - 12:06PM Title: Chapter 14: Coming Clean At last, H/G on the same page, interacting, readers feeling/ knowing what they exactly mean to each other (rather than being told " so and so " in comments). That is when the writing becomes powerful, heartfelt. Excellent chapter. Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2012.05.23 - 09:26AM Title: Chapter 14: Coming Clean Congratulations on the graduation. I am glad to see we will not have to wait 6 months for the next bit of this fabulous story. A pleasure to read. Reviewer: Tonksaholic Signed Date: 2012.05.23 - 08:35AM Title: Chapter 14: Coming Clean I was a huge fan of your epic "Normalcy" and I recently discovered this fic. It's a lovely bit of an AU journey, filled with a lot of what-ifs that don't have easy answers. What really sets great fic apart from regular fanfic, I feel, is the sense of humanity, the emotions of the characters. Everyone in your story is so real and vibrant and responds to the situations you put them in with real emotions. Nothing seems artificial and I'm never scratching my head, wondering what the heck someone is doing. Reviewer: r3in9 Signed Date: 2012.05.23 - 03:34AM Title: Chapter 14: Coming Clean what the???? Reviewer: Aragorn Signed Date: 2012.05.23 - 01:48AM Title: Chapter 14: Coming Clean I do love this story! Amazingly well-developed, tentative reconnection...rippling with authentic emotions. Look forward to the "next day or so". Reviewer: wwwednesday Signed Date: 2012.05.23 - 01:37AM Title: Chapter 14: Coming Clean So glad to see you back! There are so many good stories out in FanFic cyberspace that have not been updated or even finished and yours is one of my favorites! Loyal readers understand that real life takes over but we are so grateful to have our favorite stories continue. Hope to see more from you soon. (I agree that Foolish is a great story) Reviewer: sidnandragin Signed Date: 2012.05.23 - 01:13AM Title: Chapter 14: Coming Clean welcome back. I am glad that things are going well. And truth be told, this story is right on time. I loved the drama as it unfolds. I think it was sad to see that Ginny had to make the first move (as always) when it comes to Harry. I really hate that they are all tip toeing around him. I think he would feel even more guilt for being (pardon me) a shit. I hope he addresses it and soon. I know it is getting even better because your writing is really touching off a bit of the anger I have for Harry. Looking forward to the next great chapter to see what lies ahead for Ginny and Jackson as they confront Harry. Reviewer: Ciscochic Signed Date: 2012.05.22 - 10:35PM Title: Chapter 14: Coming Clean So excited to see you update here! I'll be honest I've been stalking your LJ looking for updates on this story and was thrilled to see P1 a while back ! Your writing is just so descriptive ... I can visualize every scene in my mind and their emotions carry through amazingly!! Hopefully you're able to put up Part 2 soon! Reviewer: Green Eyes Signed Date: 2012.05.22 - 10:27PM Title: Chapter 14: Coming Clean I mentioned after I first read this over on LJ, but I just want to reiterate: This had to be an incredibly tough chapter to write. H and G's initial reunion was always going to have so much baggage and conflicting emotion to go along with it. I thought that you portrayed that inner turmoil very well for both characters. It just felt very, very real. Awesome job. Reviewer: destin4fl Signed Date: 2012.05.22 - 10:26PM Title: Chapter 14: Coming Clean ahhhhhhh!!!!! after such a long wait an awesome cliffy! well done! Reviewer: dseay Signed Date: 2012.05.22 - 09:23PM Title: Chapter 14: Coming Clean Wow, what can I say except I love your writing style and LOVE your story. Thank you for the update because it is torture waitiing but congratulations on the graduation and hope the ove was a good one. What an absolutely wonderful chapter and now looking forward to the meeting between Harry and Jackson. Also looking forward to seeing where this goes between Giiny and Harry. Reviewer: drummersgirl Signed Date: 2012.05.22 - 07:49PM Title: Chapter 14: Coming Clean YAY!!! more more Reviewer: zorica Signed Date: 2012.05.22 - 07:35PM Title: Chapter 14: Coming Clean THANK YOU! | |||||||
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