Reviews For Heart To Heart
Reviewer: pottermania Signed Date: 2012.09.05 - 08:51AM Title: Heart To Heart Ahhhhh.... I want to know what happens...lol! Reviewer: beryl Signed Date: 2011.06.09 - 11:43PM Title: Heart To Heart I liked it. Building up to their romance. :) Reviewer: pottermania Signed Date: 2011.01.10 - 06:24PM Title: Heart To Heart But how long will it take him? Reviewer: pottermania Signed Date: 2010.10.15 - 10:35AM Title: Heart To Heart Awww this needs a sequel (grins) Reviewer: M_And Signed Date: 2010.05.20 - 05:07PM Title: Heart To Heart Bloody greasy tosser! Just when we get to the good part, Snape steps in and leaves us all hanging. What a Git! AS for your story...it was fantastic! My only critism, in case you couldn't tell, is that I wanted more. Greedy little bugger, aren't I? I liked the way you portrayed Harry and ginny's interaction. It felt natural, not forced. Excellent job! - Mike Reviewer: Arnel Signed Date: 2010.05.20 - 09:47AM Title: Heart To Heart A nice missing moment piece. I'm glad Ginny was bold enough to counsel Harry to tell whoever he fancies that he's smitten with her. You did a nice job of capturing their personalities. Reviewer: GREYWOLF Signed Date: 2010.05.20 - 09:25AM Title: Heart To Heart I liked this story, the gentleness of Harry and Ginny 'dancing'. But one thing was hugely distracting. Since Snape is alive this story has to occur in book 6. Ron and Hermione don't get together till end of book 7. A diiferent device to initiate their discussion would have made the story better I think. Reviewer: Old guy Signed Date: 2010.05.20 - 03:37AM Title: Heart To Heart Don't you think you should have finished this story? Reviewer: AoiKazeToMidoriAme Signed Date: 2010.05.19 - 09:18PM Title: Heart To Heart Hmmmm, good writing, but it's missing more emotional development and dialogue. They spoke only a handful of sentences to each other, half of which bothered Harry, yet they confessed to having a wonderful time. I think there needs to be more light hearted banter here. Also, it doesn't seem like their conversation lasted nearly long enough to take up a detention with Snape. Lastly, it ends a bit too abruptly. I think there needs to be anotehr sentence or two tacked on here at the end, to wrap it up emotionally. It s a sudden drop in intensity with the end of the story, more of a chapter ending than a one shot ending. Still, great work, I really enjoyed it. Keep up your stories! Reviewer: GoDons Signed Date: 2010.05.19 - 07:04PM Title: Heart To Heart Loved it. Very in-character, too. This fic wouldn't tie in with Shared Encounters, would it? Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2010.05.19 - 04:54PM Title: Heart To Heart ginny i like u alot ......then again harry is not that brave..kutgw Reviewer: harryluvsginny Signed Date: 2010.05.19 - 04:26PM Title: Heart To Heart this is so pretty and sweet! | |||||||
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