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Reviewer: Gin110881 Signed
Date: 2016.01.22 - 12:17PM
Title: Prologue Pt.2
I just started my re-read. So, in the next few day I'll harass you with the one or the other thought I had while reading.
I'm still a bit confused about a specific part in the sorting scene. I always thought that the other resident in Harry's head is the horcrux. However, the statement "it doesn't look at all hostile", which already left me confused during the first read, is a hard argument against my suspicion. I'm not sure, but it also could be the beginning of a link to someone other. Certainly it would explain a part of the conversation during Ginny's sorting. However, I'm pretty sure that we will see...
Author's Response: Sounds good to me :) I don't see the harm in telling. The horcrux lies utterly dormant, lacking the power to fight Harry, especially with his mother's protection smothering it so thoroughly. Therefore the Hat sees the shade of another mind, but cannot see beyond that. The 'familiarity' of Ginny's mind is meant to throw people off that trail - the Hat has certainly encountered magical bonds before, but human horcruxes are something else.
Reviewer: Gin110881 Signed
Date: 2015.02.05 - 02:47AM
Title: Prologue Pt.2
Now that everybody has taken the starting position the suspense is killing me.
Its a brilliant setting of the story until now.
Thanks!
Author's Response: Cheers :D
Reviewer: Arnel Signed
Date: 2014.02.26 - 10:12AM
Title: Prologue Pt.2
Looks like everyone has been Sorted where they should be. Poor Ginny, having to wait to be Sorted until dead last. What suspense! And Harry... his conversation with the Sorting Hat was nicely unique with that hint about another resident in his mind. Now onward to the next chapter... Well done.
Author's Response: Hey, thanks :) Yeah, no surprises there. That bit though, that did look like foreshadowing, didn't it? :D
Reviewer: BobVosh Signed
Date: 2014.02.25 - 12:36PM
Title: Prologue Pt.2
If you still need a beta, I'm willing to proofread your stuff.
Reviewer: jini Signed
Date: 2010.11.16 - 02:11AM
Title: Prologue Pt.2
nice chapter.
i'm glad she's staying!
again thank you for writing
Reviewer: foxfire23 Signed
Date: 2010.10.29 - 06:00AM
Title: Prologue Pt.2
I should of reviewed the first chapter/prologue, but I went on to this chapter,,,anxious little bugger that I am.
What does the hat see in Harry's head? The horcrus Voldemort left behind, or Ginny?
What was so familiar about Ginny? Is the hat seeing James and Lily and the resemlence or something else?
I know...lol, you will tell us in your own good time! :)
Author's Response: To be fair, the hints are all there. E-cookies to the firs person who figures out what the hat means - I'm not the first person to include this kind of thing in their story. There are others where the Hat notices it, but they tend to be more obvious. Come on, it's staring you all in the face! :P
Jonathan
Author's Response: Oh yeah, and one of your answers is right....
Reviewer: DukeBrymin Signed
Date: 2010.06.10 - 06:50PM
Title: Prologue Pt.2
So, she's staying, but not attending classes? Sounds kind of boring to me.
Good to see a new chapter, looking forward to seeing H/G's relationship develop.
Reviewer: ginnyweasley777 Signed
Date: 2010.06.05 - 12:19PM
Title: Prologue Pt.2
now that is interesting with the sorting hat :)
one thing - I'd suggest putting thoughts into italics instead of quotes, just to seperate them out from speech and make it easier to read
I look forward to the next chapter as I'm assuming that you've got a reason for Ginny staying
Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed
Date: 2010.06.05 - 11:21AM
Title: Prologue Pt.2
good thing all plays out but i hope hermione and ron and harry and ginny get together at some point and hope hermione will be ok till that point...kutgw
Reviewer: Dad Signed
Date: 2010.06.05 - 05:49AM
Title: Prologue Pt.2
Good start.
Reviewer: hms42 Signed
Date: 2010.06.05 - 01:20AM
Title: Prologue Pt.2
No Review
Reviewer: Potterfan922 Signed
Date: 2010.06.04 - 11:42PM
Title: Prologue Pt.2
Interesting story! I like where this os going! Please update soon!
Reviewer: sabradan Signed
Date: 2010.06.04 - 08:12PM
Title: Prologue Pt.2
So, what, she's just gonna sit around twiddling her thumbs for a year? You've got something up your sleeves.
Reviewer: Comet Moon Signed
Date: 2010.06.04 - 02:00PM
Title: Prologue Pt.2
She has to do something over the year
What has your evil mind got planned?
LFTM
Ja ne
Jim
Author's Response: Well, if you have a look tomorrow, you ought to find out. If Chapter 1, which will be called 'Finding Each Other', isn't up by then, I swear I just uploaded it. Promise :)
Reviewer: LeprechaunJV Signed
Date: 2010.06.04 - 12:49PM
Title: Prologue Pt.2
No Review
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