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Reviewer: Gin110881 Signed Date: 2016.01.23 - 05:49AM Title: Home Is Where Your Heart Is

When I read the story the first time I'd always wondered why Ginny disappears so often and what she's doing when she's away. Now I think it is actually obvious. Maybe my English reading skills are improved in the meanwhile, lol.
In the meanwhile, I know that the passages which confuse me often are a subtle hint for something that happens later, lol. One example is the growing mutual awareness ... and the broken blood wards.
The way how Ginny puts her brother in his place was impressive. Lets hope that this issue is clarified now.
Incidentally, my remark in the previous chapter regarding Harry's eye-sight was not related to this story, it was more generally and even in relation to the canon ... and I've learned that during a Quidditch match the sun isn't always shining to illuminate the snitch, lol.

Oh. sh **, I've just noticed that the half of the chapter is missing in my ebook because of a < p in the text. Actually there are two < p in this chapter. OK, I'll be back when I finished this chapter.

Author's Response: Everyone has to have their own lives. Ginny just spreads herself out a little more than the others :) Hindsight is a powerful thing :D
Yup, everything was planned :D
Yes, and intended that way. Harry and Ginny will not always agree on how best to solve a problem, but with the singular pressure of 'Voldemort's going to wreck shit up if we don't do this' they haven't much chance to have those disagreements yet.
Certainly on an overcast day I have no idea how people see the damned thing. But yes, his eyesight is awful. From the descriptions it might even be worse than mine. What we owe to optics...
I'm trying to sort out the formatting on some of the older chapters, but there are some oddities that just sort of happen. It's not the code itself, it's just the way the website processes it. Either way, hopefully this chapter is fine now.



Reviewer: Gin110881 Signed Date: 2015.02.06 - 08:01AM Title: Home Is Where Your Heart Is

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First of all I want to thank you for quite a long and entertaining chapter. I like long chapters;-)
Even at the risk of repeating myself, I like the character Ginny. Her actions are often somewhat unpredictable, but I think this is quite normal, at the age of 10. She wants to gain recognition of her relatives and friends. And because of her inner uncertainty she often is a bit hot headed and fights her fight for recognition with no holds barred.

Author's Response: I'm quite fond of them myself XD
Yeah, she's both fun and difficult to write in that sense. Well, difficulty in writing her is more later on, but you know... spoilers. But yeah, thanks :)



Reviewer: SYLVELLE Signed Date: 2014.02.26 - 04:17AM Title: Home Is Where Your Heart Is

Wish you hadn't kept the bold going for the whoe story.

Author's Response: Sorry, it's an issue with the HTML tags. Thanks for pointing it out.



Reviewer: hptrump Signed Date: 2011.07.10 - 09:33PM Title: Home Is Where Your Heart Is

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Please tell me you really have not completed this story. This story is so great. It feels like it just got started into a even greater story. Hope to see more.

Author's Response: Oh I'll definitely be back :) Although my beta and I have quite a few issues in RL that keep cropping up to cause delays, so... be patient? :D I can tell you that I have skeletons for the next eight or so chapters right now, so you haven't got anything to worry about. I'm really flattered that everyone likes it so much, and I'm really thankful for these reviews. They're surprisingly motivating when I find myself in a rut :)



Reviewer: harryluvsginny Signed Date: 2011.07.08 - 05:32PM Title: Home Is Where Your Heart Is

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What a clever story! I love where you're taking this! Can't wait to see where our favorite couple goes next! :]

Author's Response: Thanks! :)



Reviewer: ginnyweasley777 Signed Date: 2011.07.07 - 10:35AM Title: Home Is Where Your Heart Is

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fantastic chapter as always
keep up the good work :)

Author's Response: Oh, girl, you just made my day. And since I've spent the whole day filming a network security lecture (still ongoing, btw) that was especially valuable.



Reviewer: Jewels Signed Date: 2011.07.06 - 11:28PM Title: Home Is Where Your Heart Is

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Wow, just came across your story and I'm intrigued. It is certainly an interesting spin yet the characters are true to form with the exception of Ginny's super powers. I'm guessing Harry and Ginny are soul mates and that dumbledore, arthur, and Molly are all aware of it, at least that's what has jumped into my mind while reading this story and their character reactions to things. It would also add to the explanation of Molly's rage (not that she needed another reason to be angry) towards Dumbledore. It kind of sounded like she was aware and had taken an interest in Harry's well being and who would raise him back when he was a year old. Well I guess I'll just have to await your next update (or the next few) to find out. Dumbledore got off really light considering he admitted to knowing how Harry was treated, hmmmmm. It's been hinted that Harry is just as powerful as Ginny so I'm curious why he isn't taking an extra class with Ginny in the evenings to help control and learn to manipulate his own wandless magic abilities. One last thing I'm not sure of was why Ginny is not being allowed to take regular classes completely with the rest of the first years? What is the reason for Dumbledore and the rest of the professors wanting her to wait a year before starting first year and not just moving to second year with everyone else? I'm really enjoying this story and I'm looking forward to seeing where it goes from here. Thanks for your story!

Author's Response: Wow. I have never before wanted so badly to just blurt my entire plot, and never been more resolved not to. You'll find this stuff out later :-)

However, on the subject of Ginny, I am just trying to show the idea that people don't like change. It was far easier for Hogwarts and her staff if Ginny was simply made to wait her turn. Since her special classes are extra-curricular, that doesn't count. And hopefully later you'll see my conception of Hogwarts's bureaucracy :-)

Thanks for reviewing.



Reviewer: Emlyn Signed Date: 2011.07.06 - 10:17PM Title: Home Is Where Your Heart Is

Interesting chapter. So, Harry is now free of the Dursleys. People seemed awfully dismissive of the fact that Dumbledore admitted to knowing that Harry was being abused. Disturbing. Many things are changing. It will be interesting to see what happens next.



Reviewer: Starscape91 Signed Date: 2011.07.06 - 03:04PM Title: Home Is Where Your Heart Is

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Great chapter! I can't wait to read more!



Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2011.07.05 - 05:27PM Title: Home Is Where Your Heart Is

Well at lease now Harry has an idea of what is going on now and he is not having to worrie about going back to the pains in the butts but then again now he needs to learn about family.....kutgw



Reviewer: hgromance Signed Date: 2011.07.05 - 09:00AM Title: Home Is Where Your Heart Is

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I was just thinking about this story the other day. Glad you got a chance to update. I hope Ginny gets to stay with Harry's year, next year. Glad that Harry's getting to stay with the Weasleys and not getting left behind for the holidays. Molly took H/G relationship really well considering the two's ages.

Author's Response: Cheers :) Yeah, it is curious, isn't it? That's all I'm saying...



Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2011.07.05 - 06:39AM Title: Home Is Where Your Heart Is

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Harry and a super power Ginny makes for an excellent pairing. Good story.



Reviewer: LeprechaunJV Signed Date: 2011.07.05 - 01:08AM Title: Home Is Where Your Heart Is

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Reviewer: mdauben Signed Date: 2011.07.04 - 11:30PM Title: Home Is Where Your Heart Is

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This is my first review of your story, but I'm really enjoying it so far. It's definetly putting a spin on the original story from the first book. I'll be looking forward to the next update!




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