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Reviewer: Gin110881 Signed Date: 2016.02.22 - 08:22AM Title: The Forbidden Forest

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This was an interesting variant of the episode in the Forbidden Forest, and Norbert's delivery as well. It's always more exciting when Ginny is part of it, right?
I was a bit surprised that Neville hangs out with Hermione so often...and Ron isolates himself so often.
I wonder if Hermione will ever realize that she isn't always right?

Author's Response: I loved that little divergence. I'll get to write a lot more fun stuff once I don't have to deal with Tom messing around with their heads. That little plot device was originally intended to lend credence to Tom's power, but the duration over which it stretched made it a little taxing for the readers.
Ron doesn't really isolate himself that much. But he's really been struggling with his insecurities over Harry and Ginny being so much 'greater' than him, so he's been trying to deal with it by finding ways to be more significant. With Dean and Seamus he's just one of the lads without anyone being particularly 'special'. The fact that it was kind of a phase here doesn't mean the problem is dealt with, though.
Neville hangs out with Hermione and Harry because they are his closer friends. He doesn't have a massive amount in common with Ron and neither does Hermione, and Harry and Ginny have a tendency to be Harry and Ginny, so he spends more time with Hermione.
Hey, I need to keep some mystery :D
Thanks :)



Reviewer: Firecaptain Signed Date: 2014.09.10 - 05:22PM Title: The Forbidden Forest

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Great story :).



Reviewer: carolyn jinn Signed Date: 2014.09.09 - 06:58PM Title: The Forbidden Forest

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Good chapter.
More, please.



Reviewer: SYLVELLE Signed Date: 2014.09.08 - 05:00PM Title: The Forbidden Forest

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Well you can skip by this stuff you know, we don't need to hear it again. I like your take on the forest and how Harry ended up there, and at least the professor didn't send them in the forest a night.
Tricia

Author's Response: True, but I have my reasons :) It just wouldn't sit right with me to skip it, to be honest, since things are happening differently now and I feel like scenes of this magnitude deserve to be given screen time.
Speaking of which, thanks, that was something I was keen to change coming into this. Hope you enjoy my take on what happens next :D



Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2014.09.07 - 07:47AM Title: The Forbidden Forest

Something tells me Ginny did something to the scare and it's now with Ginny on her hands....kutgw hope they use ther heads for the rest of the adventure.

Author's Response: No comment :D Thanks. And yeah, I mean I told them to but I don't know if they'll listen.



Reviewer: Dreaming Haven Signed Date: 2014.09.07 - 05:40AM Title: The Forbidden Forest

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Good update. Just love seeing those kids get up to stuff.:)

Author's Response: Thanks :D



Reviewer: mwinter Signed Date: 2014.09.06 - 11:41PM Title: The Forbidden Forest

Awaiting more.

Author's Response: More's coming :)




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