Reviewer: Gin110881 Signed
Date: 2016.02.23 - 05:42AM
Title: The Trapdoor
I am glad that Ginny is doing so well in her exams. Fortunately Hermione didn't know about Ginny's exams, so she was able to prepare herself at rest, lol.
Ginny's was magnificent at the Mission Trapdoor. I'm pretty sure that more Ginny would have done good to the canon books. More then once I've considered to read book 1 to 6 again. However, the lack of Ginny's involvement has always been a reason to drop this idea. I rather stick with fanfiction.
I cannot tell what exactly has changed, but I had the impression that, starting with this chapter, the story is more fluently readable, at least for me. Please don't get me wrong, it was well readable before, but now it's better.
A big THANK YOU for another great chappie!
Author's Response: And that totally wasn't why she didn't tell her :D
Yep, a big disappointment for me personally. Felt like rather a dick move on Harry's part to utterly ignore her in Prisoner.
It might be how extensively planned out these few chapters were.Or it might have been the several years between my writing this and that which went before. I started writing this at 12 or 13 as I recall.
You're more than welcome :)
Reviewer: Dreaming Haven Signed
Date: 2014.11.18 - 12:28AM
Title: The Trapdoor
Great chapter. I love how you had Neville and the twins help out. The might have been a pair of pranksters but they were both very smart and talented. I hope you update soon, I'm dying to read the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks :D They are pretty cool, not going to lie. The update will hit in two and a half weeks, and I hope you enjoy it :)