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Reviewer: aimless Signed Date: 2016.10.27 - 10:18AM Title: A Welcome Holiday

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To be honest "helical cingulate" confuses even me :/

Author's Response: XD
It's nonsense on the face of it. The cingulate gyrus is heavily implicated in motivation and learning, but helical cingulate is a nothing, and Luna knows it. Well, she's making it up at any rate, she's not an anatomy buff, but you know. Harry's right, she is taking the mickey.



Reviewer: Gin110881 Signed Date: 2016.02.29 - 05:22AM Title: A Welcome Holiday

I was somewhat surprised that Harry thinks that he is too young for heavy snogging sessions. That's something I knew from fanfiction stories, written by grandma's for their grandchildren, lol.
However, I am well aware of your intentions. Ginny's self-confidence must be weakened for Tom. And Harry does his best to help.

Many thanks for another great chapter!



Reviewer: Gin110881 Signed Date: 2016.02.29 - 05:22AM Title: A Welcome Holiday

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I was somewhat surprised that Harry thinks that he is too young for heavy snogging sessions. That's something I knew from fanfiction stories, written by grandma's for their grandchildren, lol.
However, I am well aware of your intentions. Ginny's self-confidence must be weakened for Tom. And Harry does his best to help.

Many thanks for another great chapter!

Author's Response: I remember the first major issue I ran into with the story was that a couple of reviewers seemed almost offended by the idea of kids kissing at the age of 10. Honestly, it just varies. This Harry is scared. He's scared of ruining what they have, and of the urges and thoughts he is having. That ties into your more recent review - the Dursleys' treatment of him most certainly still affects him.
Honestly in planning this Harry's psychological issues were laid out before Ginny's. But yes, this does work very much in Tom's favour.
Cheers!



Reviewer: Ranma-sensei Signed Date: 2015.01.27 - 01:26AM Title: A Welcome Holiday

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Reviewer: mwinter Signed Date: 2015.01.23 - 11:44PM Title: A Welcome Holiday

Awaiting more.



Reviewer: carolyn jinn Signed Date: 2015.01.22 - 02:34PM Title: A Welcome Holiday

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Great chapter.
Luna is such is free spirit.

Author's Response: Thanks :D
She is quite the character.



Reviewer: zeta_one Signed Date: 2015.01.22 - 02:19PM Title: A Welcome Holiday

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Other nice chapter.

Thanks for sharing.

Author's Response: Cheers :D



Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2015.01.22 - 06:58AM Title: A Welcome Holiday

Ginny might be rushing thing with Harry and harry is the only one seeing it.now Luna on the other hand is keeping Harry right where she wants him and Harry has no clue.....kutge

Author's Response: Cheers :)
I don't think anyone in Potterverse has an easy time with Luna to be honest, lol



Reviewer: Dreaming Haven Signed Date: 2015.01.22 - 12:00AM Title: A Welcome Holiday

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Really good chapter. I love how you had them kissing earlier and Harry worried about their ages. People don't realize how young kids are when they start making out for the first time. I went to good schools with no real problems, yet I had a girl in my 5th grade class get pregnant by her 6th grade 12 year old boyfriend. She missed 6th year and came back for 7th the family even kept the baby. I had several friends lose their virginity in their early teens, they just learned from her mistake, and were careful. I myself was pretty young. So I think your portrayal of the issues these two preteens are going through with their hormones is very well done. I liked how Harry got very caught up for a while as most boys would. Yet you showed what a nice boy he is by stopping himself. Though I think Ginny is still worried Harry will leave her, hopefully he can help to prove that nothing to worry about.

Author's Response: Thanks :D
Yeah, I've seen similar things. These parts of their relationship are the harder bits to sort out in the story, I've found. I can see where it's going, but still, they're much harder for me to plan and execute than an action scene. I'm glad you think I pulled it off, and I hope you enjoy the way that it develops.




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