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Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed
Date: 2016.01.30 - 05:58PM
Title: The Void
Rather depressing chapter, though I admit it could hardly be anything other than depressing. Hoping for a positive turn of events in the next chapter.
Author's Response: Yup, this is not the fluff it started life as. If you'll excuse my French, these kids are going to see some shit. Have some faith in them :)
Reviewer: Ranma-sensei Signed
Date: 2016.01.27 - 09:11AM
Title: The Void
*blink, blink* All right, then.
I think I'll postpone the verdict until I know where you're going with this; everything else would be unfair to you.
Keep narrating,
Ranma-sensei
Author's Response: Heheh, there's no quick and easy way out for any of them. While Quirrel-Mort was a formidable opponent, he was also a weakened and cursed one. The diary has been slowly manipulating the kids and gaining in strength for months. The last couple of chapters are an exercise in proving that no matter what tricks the kids pull out of the bag, there is nothing that they can do with brute force, and Riddle is several steps ahead strategically. If you really want a clue, look in the genres list. But please don't be unhappy because the kids are losing. They're not going to just steamroll everything that comes their way :) Thanks for reviewing. I hope you do like where this goes :)
Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed
Date: 2016.01.23 - 12:41PM
Title: The Void
Oh no harry really did screw up big time this time...ginny needs to get her head back on straight fats or else she si going to wish she was never born....kutgw
Author's Response: Thanks :) You may be right.
Reviewer: Gin110881 Signed
Date: 2016.01.23 - 10:56AM
Title: The Void
Ah yes, the abundant Christmas season is followed by the Lenten season with a very short chapter.
Apparently the diary is in Ginny's possession again. I had briefly thought that we have reached the end of the diary. But I've forgotten that the term is still far from over.
Obviously Harry is out of action and everything depends on Ginny now. (Can I trust you that this is really obvious? We will see...)
Lets hope that Ginny is strong enough and that the loss of Harry will awaken her.
Author's Response: Indeed. The timing worked out quite well there :) I'm not quite cold-hearted enough to turn around and say 'game over - bad end', no :) There's more of the diary yet to come. Spoilers... Such a tragedy will shake anyone, certainly. Thanks for reviewing!
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