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Reviewer: pottermania Signed Date: 2012.03.22 - 11:20AM Title: By the Lake

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You have captured the light and happy times so successfully here. I've laughed and grinned at so many different points throughout the chapter as well as sighing with happiness as well. Such a pity we all know it's going to be turned on its head and going to become very dark...



Reviewer: riegert8 Signed Date: 2011.09.13 - 03:09PM Title: By the Lake

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Reviewer: memasuzy Signed Date: 2011.08.05 - 07:24PM Title: By the Lake

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I was going to wait until I caught up to you to comment but I had to tell you that I absolutely love this chapter. You made me smile - especially with Ginny's treatment of Romilda. JKR left "the walk down by the lake" to our imaginations and you gave us a wonderful rendition of what it might have been like, along with all those "sunlit days".
I know you are retelling cannon and I was critized for doing the same, but you are telling it from Ginny's POV which gives it a whole new take, and since I will never tire of reading Harry (& Ginny's) story, I am truly enjoying it. I know things are about to change for them but I'm looking forward to seeing how you handle what comes next.
You have a few type-o's but I read your bio and noticed your age. This is amazing writing for someone so young. KUTGW!!



Reviewer: Lovegood34 Signed Date: 2011.08.01 - 12:53AM Title: By the Lake

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Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2011.07.31 - 06:25AM Title: By the Lake

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This put a big smile on my face. Thank you. Not an original plot, but very well written.




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