Reviews For Hunters and Prey
Reviewer: pottermania Signed Date: 2014.02.01 - 06:24PM Title: The Snare: The Foolish Pride of Lions Never quiet in the life of harry potter!! Reviewer: bricat Signed Date: 2011.05.06 - 09:46PM Title: The Snare: The Foolish Pride of Lions No Review Reviewer: Vermouth Signed Date: 2010.12.31 - 03:25PM Title: The Snare: The Foolish Pride of Lions No Review Reviewer: foxfire23 Signed Date: 2010.12.04 - 02:14AM Title: The Snare: The Foolish Pride of Lions I know we all pick up on litle things...mine being an offhand comment Harry made about 'no secrets between him and Ginny,' so is anyone else aware of this? Are they feeding her somehing just to get information about Harry's mission by way of controlling her...silly thing to say since she can't seem to control herself, Reviewer: Arnel Signed Date: 2010.11.06 - 05:02AM Title: The Snare: The Foolish Pride of Lions Another brilliant chapter! I love your extra characters in this story, especially the Fiscal. She's so no-nonsense and forthright and no one would dare cross her without suffering dire consequences. However, to people like Harry whom she respects and treats like a normal officer of the peace, there's a softness to her that makes the right people like and respect her back. I also really like the fact that although Harry really wants to see Ginny before she's interviewed, the Fiscal won't let him near her for both propriety's sake and the legal aspects of the situation. Reviewer: freshwater Signed Date: 2010.11.04 - 07:30PM Title: The Snare: The Foolish Pride of Lions This is some multi-leveled story! I can't wait to see how all the pieces fit together. It seems likely, just now, that someone (Linny?) is drugging or imperiusing Ginny.....but to what end? Eagerly awaiting your next chapter! Reviewer: smokeylovegood Signed Date: 2010.11.02 - 08:41PM Title: The Snare: The Foolish Pride of Lions So the alcoholic pumpkin juice turns those who drink it into belligerent, violent drunks! Who is sneaking it to Ginny; a rival who wants her off the team, the Daily Prophet looking for a story, or the team lawyer sneaking it to her as some type of publicity stunt? Right now, my money is on the lawyer, he seems to show up conveniently. Am I on the right track? I like the story shifting back and forth - two story climaxes for the price of one. Really nice job on developing the story while dropping subtle hints that the reader doesn't know for sure are hints or not. Reviewer: loralu Signed Date: 2010.10.31 - 03:00PM Title: The Snare: The Foolish Pride of Lions You're just cruel. Excellent story teller.... but cruel. :p Reviewer: dshadel Signed Date: 2010.10.31 - 12:50PM Title: The Snare: The Foolish Pride of Lions just read this whole thing and so far loveing it. It has takeing a bit to get use to the jumping back and forth but now that I am, I can't wait to read more Reviewer: zeta_one Signed Date: 2010.10.29 - 10:03AM Title: The Snare: The Foolish Pride of Lions I got a feeling someone is doing something to Ginny. Reviewer: Grownupron1 Signed Date: 2010.10.29 - 08:59AM Title: The Snare: The Foolish Pride of Lions Speaking as a guy, Harry is no friend if he doesn't let Ron know to stop taking Hermione's crap. Ron didn't make her personality so combative and arrogant that a bit of alcohol turned her into a nutjob. Reviewer: Green Eyes Signed Date: 2010.10.29 - 07:51AM Title: The Snare: The Foolish Pride of Lions One small detail keeps coming to mind. All the way back in the Introduction, there is a description of the pictures that Harry has on his partition at work. There is a picture of Ginny from Christmas in which she is “rather drunk.” That picture may be completely unrelated to the mystery of Ginny’s current behavior, but something is clearly off in terms of Ginny’s relationship with alcohol. Several times subsequently in H&P, Harry talks about or thinks about the fact that Ginny doesn’t usually drink much. And yet, the Christmas picture suggests a different story. Anyway, Linny is clearly at the center of something shady. Just not clear what yet. Good chapter. Reviewer: ngayonatkailanman Signed Date: 2010.10.29 - 04:53AM Title: The Snare: The Foolish Pride of Lions Oh no! I cannot believe I have to wait! You are so naughty! What happened next? Reviewer: Ginny Guerra Signed Date: 2010.10.28 - 10:40PM Title: The Snare: The Foolish Pride of Lions I can only imagine the stress of Harry having to deal with those girls. Reviewer: hushpuppy22 Signed Date: 2010.10.28 - 08:36PM Title: The Snare: The Foolish Pride of Lions The explanation about Ron's behavior was actually pretty good. He's so wound up regarding Hermione that he's over-reacting to everything. Not sure whether Ginny has an excuse. How can she claim to be "confused" yet continue doing the same thing over and over again. Why didn't she go to family dinners? Why did she continue to go out with her roommates? Why didn't anyone question Linny's or Livy's influence? Linny told Ron that she would take care of Ginny and then they're in the news a few more times? Is everyone stupid? Reviewer: Birlan Signed Date: 2010.10.28 - 05:44PM Title: The Snare: The Foolish Pride of Lions Great chapter title--"foolish pride" is on point. And works as a Pride of Lions and the Pride of Lions--both of which are foolish. Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2010.10.28 - 04:37PM Title: The Snare: The Foolish Pride of Lions when the stuff hits the fan in harrys world it really does hit the fan...kutgw Reviewer: jojo99 Signed Date: 2010.10.28 - 04:15PM Title: The Snare: The Foolish Pride of Lions Oh this situation is just getting messier and messier. I'm really looking forward to Harry being able to see Ginny again. Poor Ginny - got herself into a real state without Harry around. | |||||||
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