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Reviewer: pottermania Signed Date: 2014.02.03 - 07:55PM Title: Prey: Badger and Raven Go Hunting

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Hmmm...the butcher had lost fingers but hadn't the sheriff also?

And is it possible that Linny is a victim herself?

Author's Response: Good questions, read on… -N-



Reviewer: potterfan2008 Signed Date: 2013.03.19 - 04:04AM Title: Prey: Badger and Raven Go Hunting

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Interesting. I really like the relationship you are setting up between Lavender and Susan - quite the odd couple there. You are really showing how much updating the Auror office needs.

Author's Response: The Lavender/Susan relationship will always be a bit prickly, but I've written enough about their futures (particularly Lavenders to know that Susan will (eventually) be Lavender's bridesmaid. -N-



Reviewer: Emlyn Signed Date: 2012.09.14 - 07:36AM Title: Prey: Badger and Raven Go Hunting

Oh, good, they've managed to stupefy the sheriff. It will be interesting to see how he ended up there. Coming to destroy evidence? Led there by something he found in Ginny's apartment? It certainly appears as if Linny is a victim also. Waiting for the next instalment.

Author's Response: The Sheriff? :-D
Okay, there is little point in my denying it. As for the how and why, you'll find out in the next chapter.
-N-



Reviewer: Cole Signed Date: 2012.09.02 - 12:43PM Title: Prey: Badger and Raven Go Hunting

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I'm very happy to see an update to this story. It's been at least a year so I was getting worried. I greatly enjoyed the chapter, although it's been so long since the last update that i re-read some of the preceding chapters to refresh some things in my mind.

I look forward to more and hope that it won't take a full year until the next update!

Author's Response:
Thanks for the review. Both this story and Aurors and Schoolgirls have been "sore neglected" for a long time. I decided that it was time to finish at least one of them, and this one is closer to completion.

My original plan was to get this completed before the end of this year. I still hope to make that target.

-N-



Reviewer: rbrt_emmer Signed Date: 2012.08.31 - 12:10AM Title: Prey: Badger and Raven Go Hunting

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I must admit at first I grumbled over the fact that I had to re read the first 14 chapters as it had been so long since I had read them. Now I'm glad that I did, I had forgotten just how great this story is. With each passing story set in your universe I look more and more forward to seeing what is next in store for us, your readers. At this point your storyverse is possibly even larger than the one that inspired you and every other writer on all of these Harry Potter fan fic sites. I look forward to seeing where this, and really all of your stories, goes.

Author's Response: Hi
It's probably a good thing that you started at the beginning, as I edited every chapter before submitting the new one (some more heavily than others). I'd forgotten some of the minor details myself! I'm still a long way below JKR's total word count, I think. Perhaps I should check.
-N-



Reviewer: crystaltips1 Signed Date: 2012.08.29 - 12:13PM Title: Prey: Badger and Raven Go Hunting

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Excellent...The plot is thickning very nicely indeed.As always superb story telling that makes you
wish for more .

I have been reading all your recent stories on fanfic , I thoroughly enjoyed them all. Nott and son being
my favourite (though Lavender /Albus Story was brillant) I loved your description of Azkaban and the security
measures now in place and that Harry,s idea in Grave days that the Goblins replace the Dementors came
to fruition.

I'm very intrigued by your Mr Theodore Nott and what he he has planned .Nott snr trained him very
well.I suspect that Mr Nott Jnr will always remain a slippery eel that the Aurors will never catch.

Cant wait for more (Which ever story) Updates.

Hope you have an enjoyable break.



Author's Response:
Thanks.

As you've probably realised, rather than write character notes for the minor characters, I seem to write one-shots. Although with Lavender it's more like a short story collection. I wrote that line in Grave Days almost as a throwaway, simply to allow Ginny to side with Harry. Bus since then the Azkaban security measures have become real to me.

Theodore will be back. Why do the Aurors need to catch him? Has he done anything illegal? :-D

No updates for a few weeks now, sorry, but I'm back on this, and Strangers, honest.

-N-



Reviewer: rpjames Signed Date: 2012.08.29 - 10:27AM Title: Prey: Badger and Raven Go Hunting

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Fantastic update. I have been nearly frothing waiting for the next chapter, not that I haven't enjoyed the other things you've been releasing in the meantime.

And very nice with the cliffhanger. I have a feeling I know where you're going and how you're getting there. I'll have to wait and see (my wife says I ruin all the good mysteries).

Author's Response: Thanks for the review.
Hopefully there won't be such a large gap before you see the next chapter.
I suspect that you might be wrong about where this is going. But that's because I've already begin drafting the sequel.
-N-



Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2012.08.29 - 05:13AM Title: Prey: Badger and Raven Go Hunting

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Great update and possibly light at the end of the tunnel.

Author's Response: Thanks. I certainly hope so. The next chapter will explain a lot more. -N-



Reviewer: Heather Longbottom Signed Date: 2012.08.28 - 11:45PM Title: Prey: Badger and Raven Go Hunting

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Reviewer: Imperator 277 Signed Date: 2012.08.28 - 11:26PM Title: Prey: Badger and Raven Go Hunting

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I have been waiting a long time for updates to this story. I also read your other stories on Fanfiction.net. Will you update those as well? Keep up the good work! Cannot wait for more!

Author's Response: Thanks. Next from me may (at last) be the next chapter of Strangers. However it may be this. It may even be Molly and her Daughter. -N-



Reviewer: lunagranger Signed Date: 2012.08.28 - 10:37PM Title: Prey: Badger and Raven Go Hunting

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Finally an update in the story I am most interested in nowadays. Even if the chapter isn't about Harry and Ginny, it is great. We get to know better your version of Terry, Susan and Theodore, though I must confess that I didn't understand much why Nott told anything to the Trainees. I hope next chapter will come soon.


Author's Response:
Thanks.

Mr Nott has his reasons, and Susan suspects what they are.

This story was always intended as a Mystery/Adventure rather than straight romance. And it’s looking like there will be three chapters (this is the second) which sideline Harry/Ginny. I’ll get back to them soon.

-N-



Reviewer: agedhpfan Signed Date: 2012.08.28 - 09:15PM Title: Prey: Badger and Raven Go Hunting

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Just when I bust your chops a little over on FF.net for writing new stories rather than updating this one, you go and slip in another chapter on SIYE! That's me told!

Great as always, I like the new perspective on the story. Thanks!

Author's Response:
Thanks

It’s taken me a long tome to get this chapter into shap. I hope that, now it’s done, I’m on a roll wioth this story.

Next, another new perspective on things.

-N-



Reviewer: smokeylovegood Signed Date: 2012.08.28 - 07:00PM Title: Prey: Badger and Raven Go Hunting

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How exciting, an update. So much is starting to come together!
Is Pansy setting Daphne up? Maybe because of Draco and Astoria? Hmmm.....
Excellent chapter, I can't wait to read more, but won't hold my breath!
Have fun on the Italy trip, it must be nice to have so much, so close.



Author's Response:
It’s taken its time, but when I finally realised that Harry couldn’t possibly do everything himself, the whole thing finally fell into place.
A better question might be who is Theodore setting up? Harry? Daphne? Pansy? All of the above? :-D
I will do my very best to get this story finished by the end of the year.
I’m looking forward to the trip. Vesuvius, Pompeii, Herculaneum, Capri, Sorrento, walking in the hills!
-N-



Reviewer: Hugendubel Signed Date: 2012.08.28 - 05:54PM Title: Prey: Badger and Raven Go Hunting

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The plot thickens... The only person with three fingers missing on his left hand is Hamish Campell who most likely is following a lead he found in Ginny's flat. I wonder if Harry is with him.
The discovered bottles strenghten my suspicion from the last chapter that Linny is also under the influence of some potion, some sort of imperius-potion perhaps. Sadly I can't find the scene with the other person with that peculiar vacancy in their eyes. Puts quite a damper on my speculations :-(
I'm curious how Daphne fits in all of this. Was she actively doing something or was she too a victim somehow? I guess we will find out.
I want to thank you for sharing your great stories with us. I am in the process of reading all your work here and on that other site and I failed to find a story I didn't like. You have a wonderful way of combining canon-characters (who also stay canon) with great oc's and engaging storylines. The way your bring out less known canon-characters really adds to that. I never thought I could like Lavender that much.
I eagerly await your next update but first, happy holiday in Italy!
Cheers, H.

Author's Response:
Thanks for the review.
And well done, you’re correct about Hamish. You’ll find out who is with him in the next chapter, which will be from yet another perspective.
I’m always surprised by how much people manage to figure out. You’re doing really well. There will be three more chapters of this story, provided everything works out the way I have it planned. By the end of which, your questions about Daphne will be answered, Mark Moon will get a girlfriend, Theodore will be a happy man, and…
-N-



Reviewer: Birlan Signed Date: 2012.08.28 - 04:39PM Title: Prey: Badger and Raven Go Hunting

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Another excellent chapter. I enjoyed how you took the time to show why Bones and Moon work well together--because it wasn't obvious to me until now.

I am wondering who the 3 fingered man will turn out to be. It seems possible that there may be some misunderstanding but that may be me mis-remembering.

While I am complimenting you, I also enjoyed your Albus and James Sirius' looks forward on FanFiction.net. One of my favorite all time lines in yourr writing may be Mother Moon berating Albus over his father's superior basilisk hunting. And nice details in the JSP story also. I liked the confusion over having gone to school together. I was sorry to see both were one part stories because they were promising beginnings.

Thanks again.

Author's Response:
Thanks for the review.

Bones and Moon? Surely you mean Bones & Brown. :-D Mark has not met Lavender. However, in this story, Mark has appeared in the Snare chapters and Lavender in the Hunt chapters. I wonder if there is any significance in that fact?

The man with missing fingers …. it may be you misremembering, but it may not.

The next-gen stories were supposed to be one-shots, because I’m only writing one-shots until I get something else finished (this, I hope). However, I already have an idea for a sequel to James and Me (as I’m about to re-title it). I also need to write Violet, as, so far, she hasn’t actually appeared.

-N-



Reviewer: potternut190 Signed Date: 2012.08.28 - 03:57PM Title: Prey: Badger and Raven Go Hunting

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Yay! H&P updated! Another excellent (if seemingly short) chapter. I hope you don't keep us in suspense for too long. Looking forward to learning who the person missing the digits is--though if I re-read some of your other works I might find the answer.

I liked Susan having the conversation with Lav in her head. Classic!

Author's Response: Short! Almost 8,000 words of sweat, and you say short! :-D Strangers always seems to end up with 3,000-5,000 word chapters, This starts at 5,000+ I've no idea why. Fortunately, the next chapter is started. Glad you enjoyed the Susan/Lavender banter. Will I be able to finish this before the end of the year? I hope so. -N-



Reviewer: Brennus Signed Date: 2012.08.28 - 03:35PM Title: Prey: Badger and Raven Go Hunting

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Fantastic, an up-date on H&P. As much as I enjoy your one shots (mostly on MuggleNet), it’s your longer stories I prefer. Bringing in Susan & Terry at this stage gives it a nice twist I wasn’t expecting. BTW was Theodore Nott stroking a cat when the Aurors entered? That would have set the scene perfectly – ‘Ah, Miss Bones, I have been expecting you…’. Of course, a chapter with this title is badly timed for me. Channel 4 have been running their ‘twenty years of comedy’ specials at present and I’ve been watching a lot of Harry Hill reruns. Now I’m expecting a badger parade at the end of the story. Will Susan & Hannah give us a song?

Author's Response: This chapter took me a lot longer to write (and rewrite) than I expected. At least I already have the skeleton of the next one ready to flesh out. Terry and Susan Appearred briefly (along with Dominic Strang) in Chapter 3 (at least, I think it was chapter 3). I am going to have a lot of fun with Theodore Nott. Given my foolish determination to use animal related chapter titles, I was a bit stuck with this one. No singing Hufflepuffs, sorry. -N-



Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2012.08.28 - 02:42PM Title: Prey: Badger and Raven Go Hunting

Sometimes all you need to be is a little lucky and a little brave, and just plain in the right place at the right time.....kutgw

Author's Response: Sometimes, however, you're in the right place at the wrong time. -N-



Reviewer: AliR Signed Date: 2012.08.28 - 02:32PM Title: Prey: Badger and Raven Go Hunting

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great great great chapter!!!
you make me happy
thank you=)


Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Glad you liked it. -N-



Reviewer: SYLVELLE Signed Date: 2012.08.28 - 01:49PM Title: Prey: Badger and Raven Go Hunting

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Yay.. you're back. Good one, nice cliffie.. who has 3 fingers???

Author's Response: Back, and away again. I'm off to Italy so I'll be off line for a couple of weeks, starting Friday.
-N-
ps you don't expect me to answer that question, do you?




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