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Reviewer: pottermania Signed
Date: 2014.02.04 - 07:44PM
Title: Prey: Welsh Green and Hebridean Black
Could that be lavender?
Daphne and her beau certainly seem to be involved! And I'm not convinced they didn't set up Susan and terry
Author's Response: Interesting thoughts. Were Susan and Terry set up? -N-
Reviewer: Silas Signed
Date: 2013.02.23 - 07:50PM
Title: Prey: Welsh Green and Hebridean Black
Can we get a estimate for when we are likely to get another chapter? I'm sure I'm not the only one checking regularly to see if this (or any of your SIYE stories) has been updated.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review, and sorry for the delay in my reply. Personal issues have slowed me down a lot over the last few weeks (fortunately, I now know that my job is safe for a few more months). The next chapter is almost ready, and I’m hoping to be able to mark this story as complete by the end of April at the latest.
-N-
Reviewer: Imperator 277 Signed
Date: 2012.12.08 - 05:04PM
Title: Prey: Welsh Green and Hebridean Black
Great Chapter! glad to see you havent forgotten to update. They are closing in on the people who drugged Ginny. Hope they get what is coming to them soon. Please keep up the good work and hope to read more soon!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I haven't forgotten any of my unfinished stories, it's simply been a lack of time. I'll try not to dash your hopes too much. -N-
Reviewer: ladymblack Signed
Date: 2012.12.06 - 07:39PM
Title: Prey: Welsh Green and Hebridean Black
Good God, man, what are you trying to do to us? It was a great chapter and certainly had me on the edge of my seat, well, it still does. I was good friends with a couple of Welshmen when I was in high school and I've got to say that I love how you captured the accent and manner of speaking. It was like going back in time for me. This has been a fantastic story and I'm sure I speak for all of your readers when I say that we're dying for the next chapter!
~Maria
Author's Response: MariaThanks for the review I’m trying to increase the tension, is it working? The Welsh have a Yoda-like habit of putting the subject and verb at the end, isn’t it? (Confused, are you?) And they really do use “isn’t it?” as a redundant tag question, though not as often as you’d think.More soon. -N-
Reviewer: gemz1313 Signed
Date: 2012.12.05 - 06:36AM
Title: Prey: Welsh Green and Hebridean Black
Brilliant chapter! Please dont keep us in suspense too long!
Author's Response: Thanks. I’ll do my best to update soon.
-N-
Reviewer: crystaltips1 Signed
Date: 2012.12.03 - 01:29PM
Title: Prey: Welsh Green and Hebridean Black
Brillant !.....utterly brillant.
ooh is that Lavender Mark is going to rescue?
Really cant wait to read more.
Author's Response: Thank you. It seems likely, given what you know, although it will be a while before ther meet again. -N-
Reviewer: louie Signed
Date: 2012.12.01 - 10:21PM
Title: Prey: Welsh Green and Hebridean Black
Gaaah!
This is the frustration of reading a story that is still being written. I really want the next chapter now! Please say that this story will wrap up this holiday season (or is that too much to ask?).
You have the knack for writing gripping action. Wonderful, wonderful work!
Now on to the frustrating wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks. As I’ve said. I’d hoped to complete this one before the year end. Unless I give up work, and cancel Christmas, that won’t happen. :-( It should be complete early in the new year. -N-
Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed
Date: 2012.12.01 - 09:03PM
Title: Prey: Welsh Green and Hebridean Black
Now the plot thickens.....nice to see you have not lost you will to write....kutgw
Author's Response: Thanks. I’m back in the swing of things, although Christmas will obviously interrupt me. -N-
Reviewer: Dad Signed
Date: 2012.12.01 - 07:03PM
Title: Prey: Welsh Green and Hebridean Black
This is an early Christmas present. Good stuff.
Author's Response: Thanks, glad you liked it. -N-
Reviewer: intikhabalam12 Signed
Date: 2012.12.01 - 06:35PM
Title: Prey: Welsh Green and Hebridean Black
Good and exciting story. This chapter, although it doesn't involve our favorite couple, is still entertaining to read. I really wish for a quicker updates. I just wish that you finish this story and then concentrate all your writing energy to "Strangers at D" as there is so much gap in the timeline that it is difficult for me to keep track. Anyhow I like your stories alot and hope that you also write some pre-battle stories like HBP GINNY POV stories. :)
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. The next chapter will be Harry, Ginny, and pretty much all of their friends. This story is now very close to completion. I update as quickly as I can, but I reread and re-edit everything several times before I submit, so one chapter a month is about it. I also leave every chapter for at least a week, because that way I can come back to it with a fresh eye and spot the silly mistakes I missed on earlier read-throughs (although I missed a fairly spectacular one here, which I’ve now corrected. -N-
Reviewer: potternut190 Signed
Date: 2012.12.01 - 05:42PM
Title: Prey: Welsh Green and Hebridean Black
Practick Alley. Love it!
Where there two operations going on (operations Prey and Lavender) or did you...
Gee, I wonder who the girl in the men's white shirt is that Mark is running to save? ;-)
Great chapter and I can't wait for the next installment.
Author's Response: Thanks Practick Alley had dozens of rubbish names until I finally found one I liked. I messed up, it’s fixed now. Any resemblance between the final scene and this: “First saw five years ago” sounds like you passed me on a street or something. You didn't just “see me”; you pulled me out of a burning building and took me to St Mungo's! – is not coincidental. :-D I was hoping to get this finished before the year end. That won’t happen, but early in the new year, it should be done. -N-
Reviewer: Mistress_Lrigtar Signed
Date: 2012.12.01 - 05:22PM
Title: Prey: Welsh Green and Hebridean Black
I'd forgotten how much I had invested in this story, glad to see you are updating it. Looks like things will be coming to a head soon. Can't wait to see what happens next!
Author's Response: There are either two or three chapters to go. (The next chapter is currently 2500 words and it’s looking like it will be two chapters, not one – hence my uncertainty.) Things are certainly reaching a climax. -N-
Reviewer: ProfessorBinns79 Signed
Date: 2012.12.01 - 05:18PM
Title: Prey: Welsh Green and Hebridean Black
Hello and thanks for the update!
In response to a review I left a while ago you indicated that you were re-editing this whole story and posting the results on MNFF to catch it up to SIYE (through chapter 14) and that when you began posting new chapters at SIYE you would update those previous chapters with the newly updated versions (so that all websites would match). Has that happened yet? I wanted to know because I intend to re-read the whole story once the fully updated and final versions have posted. I follow you (and other authors) here as well as on MNFF and FFNet. Do all versions of this (and other stories) now match on those three sites?
Thanks again for all your work! Your extended universe is one of the great accomplishments of the fanfiction world, and I look forward to each new update. You have an almost Dickensian way of weaving character connections throughout your stories. I find I need to make a character map to remember all the connections for either of you!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. The chapters here have all been updated and revised (mostly minor typo fixes, but a few sections got significant rewrites. You can be certain that the full and final edited version will appear here first. I think that I’ve updated this on ffn too, I’m sure I remember doing it, but I’ll have to check. I tried to create only a small cast of original characters for the background. Some of them (like Mark and Fenella and Polly Protheroe and Auror Aloysius Webb) appear often. Others (like the thick-accented Erasmuson) will probably never appear again. If you’re interested, although this is Rhys’s first appearance, he was mentioned in Beard Hunters. -N-
Reviewer: Emlyn Signed
Date: 2012.12.01 - 03:08PM
Title: Prey: Welsh Green and Hebridean Black
Well, that was certainly exciting. Now the two sides have connected. Great to see it from the other side. I take it, it was Lavender who was just downed? So nice to see an update.
Author's Response: Thank you. Two chapters to go! (Okay, possibly three), and everything is happening at once. You'll find out for certain who is in the burning building soon, but you correctly identified the Sheriff, :-D -N-
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