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Reviewer: riegert8 Signed Date: 2014.06.17 - 01:28AM Title: Chapter 5 Godric's Hollow

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Reviewer: pottermania Signed Date: 2011.02.26 - 07:28PM Title: Chapter 5 Godric's Hollow

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I dont think healing spells are going to help in this situation unless it is Fawkes doing the healing.

What I also like about this story is the glimpses we get into life at Hogwarts which we dont get in DH.

Author's Response: Thanks! I wanted to show what they were going through as well.



Reviewer: Rowlingisgreat Signed Date: 2010.12.05 - 02:46AM Title: Chapter 5 Godric's Hollow

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Reviewer: Tindual Signed Date: 2010.10.15 - 12:35PM Title: Chapter 5 Godric's Hollow

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I was worried about what would happen when Harry met Bathilda and thank goodness for Fawkes, I always wondered what happened to the phoenix. Thanks for sharing!

Author's Response: Thanks! I thought Fawkes would seek out Harry.



Reviewer: HGRHfan35 Signed Date: 2010.10.09 - 12:32PM Title: Chapter 5 Godric's Hollow

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Oh my effing goodness!!!!

This was...

was.....

Damn, I'm speechless here.

Can Fawkes save Harry? Where will he take him? Hey....what about Sparkle!

Author's Response: Thanks! Don't worry, I won't forget about Sparkle :)



Reviewer: hot48cricket Signed Date: 2010.10.08 - 12:02PM Title: Chapter 5 Godric's Hollow

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If Voldemort's name is taboo....why did nothing happen when Harry said it in the cemetery?

Author's Response: I messed up, I will be fixing that part :)



Reviewer: zeta_one Signed Date: 2010.10.08 - 09:37AM Title: Chapter 5 Godric's Hollow

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Good chapter. Now Harry has the sword, but is it the real one. I can't wait to see how this change will effect Harry and Ron get back together.

Thanks for sharing.

Author's Response: Thanks!



Reviewer: ginnyweasley777 Signed Date: 2010.10.08 - 04:37AM Title: Chapter 5 Godric's Hollow

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oh, I hope Fawkes can heal Harry!
and I hope he doesn't forget about Sparkle

Author's Response: Thanks! Sparkle won't be forgotten :)



Reviewer: Bware0313 Signed Date: 2010.10.08 - 12:13AM Title: Chapter 5 Godric's Hollow

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Good story, I am really enjoying it.

I had only one thing that wasn't very believable. How is his parents house still liveable? I mean, I suppose it has to be as good as the hut on the rock, but theres no way the heat and water are still running... even by magic... those kind of charms would likely take some re-inforcement over periods of time.

Otherwise, Very good story. Harry no longer has his wand though? Well... that's the point where he lost his want in canon aswell... i like the parallel you're drawing with that!

Author's Response: Thanks! I guess I was thinking of the house as sort of being in stasis until a Potter entered the house.



Reviewer: Ginny Guerra Signed Date: 2010.10.07 - 11:54PM Title: Chapter 5 Godric's Hollow

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" You-Know-You..." Isn't it 'You-know- WHO?'
"Voldemort killed..." Harry already knows about the taboo on the name, and Snatchers didn't show up here...
"saw a smaller older woman..." smaller than whom?

Good thing Fawkes got there!

Author's Response: Yeah, I screwed up. I will be fixing that part :) Fawkes is definitely useful.



Reviewer: turtleman Signed Date: 2010.10.07 - 10:15PM Title: Chapter 5 Godric's Hollow

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wow this last chap was really good, like the build up is over and now the real story begins. This fic is great!



Author's Response: Thanks!



Reviewer: hgromance Signed Date: 2010.10.07 - 08:41PM Title: Chapter 5 Godric's Hollow

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I hope Fawkes takes Harry to the Burrow. But then what would happen to the kitten?

Author's Response: You'll have to wait and see :)



Reviewer: Prof McGonagall Signed Date: 2010.10.07 - 03:32PM Title: Chapter 5 Godric's Hollow

Well, you had me worried when you let Harry say Voldemort's name twice! And with good reason...Tom found him!
Now I can only hope that Fawkes can work his magic fast enough on Harry, to heal him.
Thanks for the quick updates!!!

Author's Response: Thanks!



Reviewer: Prof McGonagall Signed Date: 2010.10.07 - 03:27PM Title: Chapter 5 Godric's Hollow

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Well, you had me worried when you let Harry say Voldemort's name twice! And with good reason...Tom found him!
Now I can only hope that Fawkes can work his magic fast enough on Harry, to heal him.
Thanks for the quick updates!!!

Author's Response: Thanks!



Reviewer: seekers_destiny Signed Date: 2010.10.07 - 02:32PM Title: Chapter 5 Godric's Hollow

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He did slightly better than in canon but should still have been more suspicious. He most likely left behind both the sword and his wand. At least Fawkes can heal him. The big question is where Fawkes is taking him. It was nice that Harry found a temporary haven, I presume he will get back in time to rescue Sparkle.

Author's Response: Harry is still a bit naive, but I don't think that is a bad thing :)



Reviewer: Birlan Signed Date: 2010.10.07 - 02:02PM Title: Chapter 5 Godric's Hollow

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Nice to see Fawkes coming to the rescue--and seeing Nagini get the chop earlier than in canon. It wouldn't seem like Voldemort would get any earlier warning that Harry is hunting horcruxes since he was defending himself.

You do make me wonder why Fawkes didn't help Harry in DH--because it makes sense that it would.

I look forward to reading more. Thanks for writing and posting. I appreciate the rapid pace of the postings also. Don't know if it will continue.

Author's Response: Thanks! I wondered about the absence of Fawkes in DH as well. I hope to keep up the posting, I have almost the entire story written.




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