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Reviewer: riegert8 Signed Date: 2014.06.17 - 01:44AM Title: Chapter 9 - Missing

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Reviewer: pottermania Signed Date: 2011.02.27 - 03:16PM Title: Chapter 9 - Missing

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Ron and Hermione in this story are conceited, arrogant twats. Glad Seamus and Remus put Hermione in her place in this chapter.

I wonder if Ginny and Harry will stay at the castle for long? I presume that not all the items they are looking for will be there and if they do find something they are going to have to look in other places for the others.

Author's Response: Thanks! No not everything will be there.



Reviewer: ginnyweasley777 Signed Date: 2010.10.17 - 11:21AM Title: Chapter 9 - Missing

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another good chapter and I really liked the locket scene
Hermione was a bit nasty here, I hope it did here some good when Remus was sharp with her :)

Author's Response: Thanks! I'd like to think so :)



Reviewer: Tindual Signed Date: 2010.10.16 - 06:22PM Title: Chapter 9 - Missing

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I wonder if Harry and Ginny would be out of Hogwarts before they can get to them. Alhough, if they are in the chamber, surely no one but a parselmouth can get in so they'll be ok. I really do like the way you write, thanks again for sharing, so quickly at that!

Author's Response: Thanks for the complement :)



Reviewer: HGRHfan35 Signed Date: 2010.10.16 - 05:01PM Title: Chapter 9 - Missing

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.....we can make arrangements for them to stay with Fleur’s family in France.
Aaaah yes, let's ship 'm of to France! :D
Hermione's really getting on my wig here.

Very emotional scene surrounding the locket.

Great....again! :)


Author's Response: Thanks! Yes, Hermione is a bit annoying at the moment. I did like how the locket scene went :)



Reviewer: LeprechaunJV Signed Date: 2010.10.16 - 10:08AM Title: Chapter 9 - Missing

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Reviewer: seekers_destiny Signed Date: 2010.10.15 - 08:32PM Title: Chapter 9 - Missing

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Very little Ron, that was good. I was susprised how surly Hermione got - she may be upset about slavery of house elves but she shouldn't have judged Ginny so harshly. I was also disappointed with her certainty of her being right and Harry wrong, not the mark of a good friend. It seems like a good thing if those two are shipped off somewhere else now.

I'm anxious to see how Harry and Ginny fare on the horcrux hunt. Harry is close to one now but I'm curious to see how he will get the hint he needs to find the cup. There's also the unintended horcrux also. I loved the H/G part of the chapter (of course). I'm not worried about a search of Hogwarts, with the map and a secure hiding place only Voldemort himself could find him and then only if Harry is careless. I forgot to mention last chapter how much I like how Seamus and Neville are handling things and that continued this chapter. I always felt that JKR did not include Neville enough.

Author's Response: Thanks! I view Hermione as being a bit lost at the moment. I hope you enjoy the Horcrux hunt :)



Reviewer: Larry Signed Date: 2010.10.15 - 06:02PM Title: Chapter 9 - Missing

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Great chapter and what a reunion between Harry and Ginny, It will be interesting to see how Ron reacts to Harry now that the cat is out of the bag, and Hermione getting slamed wow what a blow to her ego. Great read and a even greater story. Looking forwar to your next update.

Author's Response: Thanks!



Reviewer: zeta_one Signed Date: 2010.10.15 - 06:02PM Title: Chapter 9 - Missing

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So Ginny is going to finish the job with Harry. Ron and Hermione are out. I wonder how this is going to play out when Harry has to go into the forest? Good chapter.

Thanks for sharing.

Author's Response: Thanks!



Reviewer: jojo99 Signed Date: 2010.10.15 - 04:24PM Title: Chapter 9 - Missing

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Reviewer: Birlan Signed Date: 2010.10.15 - 02:38PM Title: Chapter 9 - Missing

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Another good chapter--Hermione shows her character weaknesses and Ron has another Ron moment. I liked Remus reminding Hermione that Harry isn't always wrong when he gets an idea in his head. I look forward to seeing how the story progresses. I like that Harry is looking forward to being with GInny and isn't lamenting the loss of Ron and Hermione.

How's this for a trick question though--why didn't Harry just have Kreacher take the note to the Burrow instead of to McG.

And why exactly is Robards looking for Ginny--how is his finding her going to be a good thing for anyone who cares about her? Her family knows she is with Harry and that's not perfect but its certainly better than being with the Carrows or the Malfoys.

Author's Response: Thanks! I figured because she disappeared from school, McGonagall would share the news. I reread the paragraph about Robards, he is looking for whoever killed the Carrows, but Kingsley point was he might be able to find some clue about what happened to Ginny.




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