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Reviewer: riegert8 Signed Date: 2014.06.17 - 02:39AM Title: Chapter 20 - The Gathering Storm

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Reviewer: pottermania Signed Date: 2011.03.01 - 04:25PM Title: Chapter 20 - The Gathering Storm

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It seems like the calm before the storm..they can see the grey clouds gathering ready for an almighty battle.

Author's Response: Thanks! I got the chapter title from the movie scene where Hagrid talks about the coming storm, that scene has always stuck with me for some reason.



Reviewer: ginnyweasley777 Signed Date: 2010.12.29 - 04:04PM Title: Chapter 20 - The Gathering Storm

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great chapter
I'm glad that Fleur got through to Molly
keep up the good work

Author's Response: Thanks! I think Fleur was one of the few people who could have gotten through to Molly.



Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2010.12.29 - 06:21AM Title: Chapter 20 - The Gathering Storm

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Great stuff. I think I see a fight coming. Can`t wait.

Author's Response: Thanks!



Reviewer: Goodygurl Signed Date: 2010.12.28 - 06:39PM Title: Chapter 20 - The Gathering Storm

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Reviewer: seekers_destiny Signed Date: 2010.12.28 - 03:50PM Title: Chapter 20 - The Gathering Storm

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An affectionate McGonagall is not something we get to see very often. I assume it was so unexpected for Harry and that is why he stiffened at first. The preparations made for this eventuality should have happened in canon. I'm sure it is more dramatic that the adults are of so little help but it certainly is not true to character for someone like McGonagall.

It seemed that everyone missed the possibility that Snape was saying the literal truth when he said "I must speak to Potter". I'm a bit surprised that McGonagall chose to attack rather than ask why. Hermione still finds it hard to believe that Harry could succeed without her. I'll enjoy the scene where she finds out that she was wrong about him. I also am anxious to see how Ron behaves when he sees Harry again.

Author's Response: Thanks, yes that is why he stiffened up. I agree that McGonagall would help however she could. She attacked Snape as she saw it in defence of one of her favorite students.



Reviewer: PotterBabe Signed Date: 2010.12.28 - 03:22PM Title: Chapter 20 - The Gathering Storm

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Love this story!!! I always felt that Ginny should play a bigger role in the hunt and battle....Update soon ;-)

Author's Response: Thanks! I agree, I was disappointed at how little Ginny was in DH.



Reviewer: zeta_one Signed Date: 2010.12.28 - 11:34AM Title: Chapter 20 - The Gathering Storm

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THe final fight is coming. How will Harry lose the Horcrux in him. Can't wait the find out.

Thanks for sharing.

Author's Response: Yes, it is. Next chapter should answer that question :)



Reviewer: lalachoa Signed Date: 2010.12.28 - 09:29AM Title: Chapter 20 - The Gathering Storm

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Reviewer: LeprechaunJV Signed Date: 2010.12.27 - 11:21PM Title: Chapter 20 - The Gathering Storm

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Reviewer: sabradan Signed Date: 2010.12.27 - 10:54PM Title: Chapter 20 - The Gathering Storm

And so it begins.


Also, I, too, would like to say that we've really found out who Harry's REAL friends are in this fic.

Author's Response: Yes, Neville and Seamus have been much better friends to Harry than Ron and Hermione.



Reviewer: sabradan Signed Date: 2010.12.27 - 10:53PM Title: Chapter 20 - The Gathering Storm

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Reviewer: GinnySavesHarry1998 Signed Date: 2010.12.27 - 10:26PM Title: Chapter 20 - The Gathering Storm

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Everything is coming to a head, and I can't wait to see how everything in your story pans out. Who lives and dies and how everyone reacts to Harry and Ginny after all the lies and misunderstandings with certain people named Molly and Hermione and Ron. :-)

Author's Response: Thanks!



Reviewer: Ginny Guerra Signed Date: 2010.12.27 - 08:50PM Title: Chapter 20 - The Gathering Storm

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The Battle should be an interesting scene. Update soon, please!

Author's Response: Yes, the battle is coming :)



Reviewer: lety77 Signed Date: 2010.12.27 - 07:01PM Title: Chapter 20 - The Gathering Storm

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I've really enjoyed this story. I nearly wept with joy when I got the notice of a new chapter. I can't help but think that Harry's best friends let him down miserably and his casual friends kept the faith with him and Ginny. I can't wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response: Thanks so much!



Reviewer: hgromance Signed Date: 2010.12.27 - 04:16PM Title: Chapter 20 - The Gathering Storm

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I was so excited to see another chapter posted. PLEASE let Harry and Ginny survive along with most of the Weasleys. I understand there's deaths in war but still...

Author's Response: Thanks! All will be revealed soon, but lets just say I'm a sucker for a happy ending :)



Reviewer: Macsr71 Signed Date: 2010.12.27 - 03:32PM Title: Chapter 20 - The Gathering Storm

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Excellent stroy - now I'm staring at the screen, trying to find the next chapter button...where is that damn button? Anyhow, love your interaction between Harry and GInny, and understand fully why you've kept Ron and Hermione out of it - do they get a change to redeam themselfs a bit during th final battle? Does Kreacher lead the house elfs into battle himself? Do all the weasleys make it out ok? (I hope) and Remus and the others - oh how you've got me on the edge of my seat... very well done.

Author's Response: Thanks! I already have the next chapter back and plan to post on Wed.



Reviewer: foxfire23 Signed Date: 2010.12.27 - 03:25PM Title: Chapter 20 - The Gathering Storm

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This is still an amazing story...one that rivals Jo's and is in some cases much better.

I just bet Bill was surprised to find Kreacher and Olivander on his door step.

Now all we need is Molly The Human Howler starting in on Ginny to come home where she belongs,,,not a good thing to do.

Author's Response: Thanks so much!



Reviewer: HGRHfan35 Signed Date: 2010.12.27 - 03:02PM Title: Chapter 20 - The Gathering Storm

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No No No No, do not leave us dangling over the cliffy again! *pulls hair*

A very uplifting and exciting chapter, I thought. Uplifting because the Weasleys will reunite once more and Harry making amends with Remus. Exciting because of the imminent battle.

So good to see you back. RL can really get in the way but hey, we live and learn. :)

Hope your Christams was good and may your New Year be filled with inspiration, peace, joy and reviews.

Hugzzzz. C


Author's Response: Thanks! I'm afraid if you didn't like this cliffy, you will hate the next chapter :) Merry Christmas to you as well.



Reviewer: jojo99 Signed Date: 2010.12.27 - 02:32PM Title: Chapter 20 - The Gathering Storm

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Great chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks!




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