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Reviewer: Marinka Signed Date: 2013.11.13 - 10:06PM Title: One Hundred and Eleven Days: Plan, What Plan?

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"Arthurmolly" just made me laugh so loudly at work!!

Author's Response: Should you be reading fanfiction at work? :-D -N-



Reviewer: swede Signed Date: 2012.05.15 - 08:03AM Title: One Hundred and Eleven Days: Plan, What Plan?

Hmm... It seems like I forgot to add my tiny nitpicking section. Sorry. Isn't 'hippy' someone with wide hips and 'hippie' someone who 'dresses like Tarzan, has hair like Jane and smells like Cheeta'. Or does that question and quote betray all of my americanisms in one go?

Oh, and there is an 's' missing from 'jeans-wearing' . Normally I would not bother with nitpicking but a story as good as this deserves to be perfect. :-)

Author's Response: I have no idea what you're talking about, hippie is spelt correctly on the two instances it appears! (Attempts to look innocent.) Seriously - thanks - it's fixed -N-



Reviewer: Silas Signed Date: 2012.05.07 - 10:17PM Title: One Hundred and Eleven Days: Plan, What Plan?

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Brilliant as always. I especially love the 'advise' given to Harry by the brothers. That alongside Harry's fears for Ginny's Hen Night really made the chapter.

I however have both a question and a comment. Was George's drunken rambling about pregnancy leading to marriage a bit of cunning foreshadowing for how his marriage would come about (as we are told in Sleepless Night) or simply coincidence? As for seating, I'm surprised none of them came up with the idea of putting Auntie Muriel with the Dursleys, giving everyone a break.



Author's Response: Thanks for the review.
Was George’s drunken rambling foreshadowing? Well, it certainly wasn’t a coincidence. :-D
Seating arrangements have yet to be finalised. Perhaps Muriel will end up next to the Dursleys “quite by chance.”
-N-



Reviewer: 2TsMom Signed Date: 2012.01.05 - 04:42PM Title: One Hundred and Eleven Days: Plan, What Plan?

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Always thrilled to see you've written another chapter. Hopefully you're thinking about the Harpy Hellions because you're working on H&P??



Author's Response: Thank you. Writing slowed more than I expecte over the Christmas Holidays, but I'm back on various stories now H&P is one of them. -N-



Reviewer: potternut190 Signed Date: 2012.01.03 - 08:40PM Title: One Hundred and Eleven Days: Plan, What Plan?

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As usual, fantastic!

Author's Response: Thanks. -N-



Reviewer: Emlyn Signed Date: 2012.01.03 - 01:00PM Title: One Hundred and Eleven Days: Plan, What Plan?

Absolutely hilarious! Love the hat idea. Victoire and her colours are precious. And Molly is so oblivious - of course Harry meant it.

Author's Response: Thank you. If Molly has a weakness, in my opinion, it's that she thinks all families are caring. -N-



Reviewer: sapphire200182 Signed Date: 2010.11.24 - 04:28AM Title: One Hundred and Eleven Days: Plan, What Plan?

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Hah, I snorted when I read the brothers' reactions. Well played. Looking forward to more.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. The next chapter may be some time, sorry. N



Reviewer: potterfan2008 Signed Date: 2010.11.13 - 12:40PM Title: One Hundred and Eleven Days: Plan, What Plan?

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Another great story! I loved Ron's sage advise (who'd have thought?). I loved Ginny's comment about not letting Ron and Hermione sit together! I would have done the same thing!

Author's Response: Thank you. Even by the end of HBP Ron has matured to the point where he is comfortable consoling Hermione. I’m very fond of Ron. Ginny’s comments actually relate back to my story “After Breakfast” (as you probably realise). N



Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2010.11.13 - 12:20PM Title: One Hundred and Eleven Days: Plan, What Plan?

Sometimes i think moms over thing stuff and daughters dont give a crap thne again thats what i see , or the reveral...kutgw

Author's Response: I think that Molly and Ginny are so like each other that it’s scary. -N-



Reviewer: ginnyweasley777 Signed Date: 2010.11.13 - 10:43AM Title: One Hundred and Eleven Days: Plan, What Plan?

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oh, I sense a lot of fun coming :)
I loved the "draw the names out of the hat" and especially that Arthur agreed to it
keep up the good work, I'm looking forward to more

Author's Response: What else can you do when the bride's family is four dozen people and the groom's is four people? (-: -N-



Reviewer: HGRHfan35 Signed Date: 2010.11.13 - 05:44AM Title: One Hundred and Eleven Days: Plan, What Plan?

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Ooooh, you are on a roll here!

Love the style, the humour and the ideas.


Author's Response: Thanks, this has been ready for ages, but chapter 2 isn’t even started. More Drakeshaugh before I continue this. -N-



Reviewer: 1OldHPFan Signed Date: 2010.11.12 - 06:55PM Title: One Hundred and Eleven Days: Plan, What Plan?

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Very good as usual.

I like the names in a hat idea!!!!!


LOL sprog three



Author's Response: Thanks. I’m sure that I’m not the only person who thinks that Percy named his firstborn Molly as an apology. -N-



Reviewer: Ginny Guerra Signed Date: 2010.11.12 - 06:18PM Title: One Hundred and Eleven Days: Plan, What Plan?

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Great advice from the brothers!

Author's Response: Thank you. When there is more, you’ll be the first to know (-:



Reviewer: Quidditchmum Signed Date: 2010.11.12 - 12:32PM Title: One Hundred and Eleven Days: Plan, What Plan?

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Really cute! I loved it.

‘Well they can’t!’ Ginny said. ‘Hermione wouldn’t let Harry and I sit together at their wedding. Ron can have Luna instead.’

I can so see Ginny doing that.

Author's Response: Ginny strikes me as someone who will hold a grudge for a very long time. -N-



Reviewer: Birlan Signed Date: 2010.11.12 - 09:20AM Title: One Hundred and Eleven Days: Plan, What Plan?

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Wow. Another WIP. Nice beginning. I enjoyed the brothers advice. Every one seemed in character to me

Look forward to more.

Author's Response: Thank you. H&P, A&S and Drakeshaugh are not ready (yet) so I thought that I’d throw something else out. -N-



Reviewer: firestar Signed Date: 2010.11.12 - 07:46AM Title: One Hundred and Eleven Days: Plan, What Plan?

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nicelt written - I enjoyed it :0)

Author's Response: Thanks -N-



Reviewer: harryluvsginny Signed Date: 2010.11.12 - 07:44AM Title: One Hundred and Eleven Days: Plan, What Plan?

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So sweet and perfect, as usual. I can't wait to see where this goes.

Author's Response: It goes from 2 February 2003 to 24 May 2003 (111 days later) and then it stops. (-: -N-



Reviewer: ngayonatkailanman Signed Date: 2010.11.12 - 05:28AM Title: One Hundred and Eleven Days: Plan, What Plan?

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LOL. You have too much time in your hands. You crack me up. Wonderful.

Author's Response: I do this week. Thank you. -N-



Reviewer: Old guy Signed Date: 2010.11.12 - 04:50AM Title: One Hundred and Eleven Days: Plan, What Plan?

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Very nice. Keep going!


Author's Response: Thanks, I will. -N-



Reviewer: GoDons Signed Date: 2010.11.12 - 12:42AM Title: One Hundred and Eleven Days: Plan, What Plan?

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