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Reviewer: Aragorn Signed
Date: 2013.10.18 - 11:21PM
Title: Swimsuit Quidditch
Have read this several times but not in a couple of years. When the site popped it up, couldn't resist. It's too much fun!
thanks
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. It's a while since I've read this one, too. -N-
Reviewer: ravenclaw_girl101 Signed
Date: 2012.07.06 - 03:35PM
Title: Swimsuit Quidditch
Brilliant!
Author's Response: Thanks -N-
Reviewer: LuvinHG Signed
Date: 2012.05.27 - 12:00AM
Title: Swimsuit Quidditch
HAHAHAHAHA! OH MY!!!! That ending was so funny. I'm surprised Harry could keep up with Ginny. Nice one. I loved it. hehehe. Too funny. Ron cracked me up because obvious, he's heard Ginny and Harry act out like this before. lol!
Author's Response: Thanks for th review. This is Ginny's 20th, she and Harry have had years of practice and their banter, and at baiting Ron. What else are brothers for? :-D-N-
Reviewer: Mistress_Lrigtar Signed
Date: 2012.05.19 - 11:39PM
Title: Swimsuit Quidditch
I have tears in my eyes this was so funny. Your disclaimer had me laughing before I even read this story. Thank you so much!! Your writing is, in a word - brilliant!
Author's Response: Thanks, ratgirL (interesting name choice). :-D This was a lot of fun to write, and as I've said, I worried that the comedy of the double entendre might not be popular. How wrong I was. This is my mosr read and reviewed one-shot. Amazing! Thanks again.-N-
Reviewer: swede Signed
Date: 2012.04.27 - 04:04PM
Title: Swimsuit Quidditch
Oh. My. God. If I could send you a standing ovation via TCP/IP I'd do it.
*sigh*
I guess I'll have to settle for giving you an "O" rating.
This (along with the rest of your writing) is just brilliant. Excellent use of language, descriptive without being long-winded, in what I can only assume is perfect brit-speak with wonderful characters that all conform to what JKR wrote (and what I made of her texts in my head). Add to this a story that made me laugh so hard I woke my wife up. (Curse you in-bed iPad reading.)
Thank you, thank you, thank you.
If I’m allowed I would just like to ask one tiny question. Was this written prior to “Player Rites”? If it wasn’t then why doesn’t the last paragraph read:
“ ‘Stop, we haven’t even started playing Quidditch yet.’ Ginny told him. ‘Come on, Harry, it’s time for my warm-up!’ "
…or some paraphrasement thereof? For your long-time fans it would evoke ... deliciously evil thoughts of squirming Weasleys.
Oh well - can't have everything! 11 out of 10 for this, it was the first story of yours that I read and now, a week later, I've just re-read it after reading the rest on this site and others. I'll review your other stories as and when I can think of enough praise to do them justice. Again; Thank you!
Author's Response: Tack så mycket. (I checked your profile) Sweden, the land where doors open out into the street, something which catches me out every time. Despite two visits; once to Malmo, Lund and Fotevickens, and once to Varberg, that's the extent of my Swedish (and I almost misspelt Tack as Tak - I blame the Danes for that).I’m happy to hear that you like my stories. My Brit-speak is as British as I am. I sometimes worry that some of my word usage is decidedly northern English, but, so far, no one has complained. This story was written before Players Rites, although that story comes first chronologically. Unfortunately, I appear to be writing my timeline in a chrono-illogical order. For that, I can blame only myself. You make a good point about the warm up, that would have been a damn good ending, and it’s how this story should have ended. Perhaps it will.-N-
Reviewer: Chocolate Fish Signed
Date: 2012.01.31 - 05:46AM
Title: Swimsuit Quidditch
That was fantastic
Author's Response: Thank you. -N-
Reviewer: hpforever85 Signed
Date: 2012.01.17 - 09:31AM
Title: Swimsuit Quidditch
No Review
Reviewer: bricat Signed
Date: 2011.03.31 - 11:47PM
Title: Swimsuit Quidditch
That was too funny. Another well written one.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review.
-N-
Reviewer: pottermania Signed
Date: 2011.03.23 - 05:52PM
Title: Swimsuit Quidditch
Just what the doctor ordered! Great lines!
Author's Response: Thanks you. I'm glad you liked it. -N-
Reviewer: MuggleMomma Signed
Date: 2011.03.21 - 02:46PM
Title: Swimsuit Quidditch
This is so very cute! Great job with the comedy while still keeping everyone in character!
Author's Response: Thanks. Keeping everyone in character is important to me. I'm happy you think I've succeeded.
-N-
Reviewer: Larry Signed
Date: 2011.03.20 - 07:59PM
Title: Swimsuit Quidditch
A very funny, entertaining story, thanks for the laughs and for writing it.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review, and thanks for laughing :-) -N-
Reviewer: PottersGirl8 Signed
Date: 2011.03.15 - 09:51PM
Title: Swimsuit Quidditch
Amazing story! So funny! ;) lol
Author's Response: Thanks :-D -N-
Reviewer: Pilargirl Signed
Date: 2011.03.02 - 03:14PM
Title: Swimsuit Quidditch
Amazing!
Author's Response: Thanks
-N-
Reviewer: sannthree Signed
Date: 2011.02.22 - 01:05AM
Title: Swimsuit Quidditch
Absolutely Amazing
Author's Response: Thanks. -N-
Reviewer: carolyn jinn Signed
Date: 2011.01.14 - 05:25AM
Title: Swimsuit Quidditch
No Review
Reviewer: louie Signed
Date: 2011.01.07 - 06:06PM
Title: Swimsuit Quidditch
Rolling on the floor while laughing out loud! (So as not to be misunderstood.) Enough said.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Why esle would you roll on the floor? -N-
Reviewer: potternut190 Signed
Date: 2011.01.07 - 10:33AM
Title: Swimsuit Quidditch
Great!
Author's Response: Thanks -N-
Reviewer: destin4fl Signed
Date: 2011.01.04 - 08:39PM
Title: Swimsuit Quidditch
Excellent! That is exactly the kind of relationship I imagine occurs with our favorite pair. Fun, well matched and fearless, not afraid to show their affection and wit and not a little bit of challenge to rise to the occasion. Well done!
Author's Response: Thank you. I agree that Harry and Ginny are well-matched, and affectionate. I’m surprised how many reviews this story has received.
-N-
Reviewer: Fire_kei Signed
Date: 2011.01.04 - 12:34AM
Title: Swimsuit Quidditch
No Review
Reviewer: scuba Signed
Date: 2011.01.03 - 10:33PM
Title: Swimsuit Quidditch
that was absolutely brilliant.
Author's Response: Thanks again (-: -N-
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